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    Chapter 4

    It's sad to see Diarmad so isolated, but it's hard to blame him. After all, he was betrayed by someone he trusted (though foul play was involved) and he's told there are others. Not so easy to be all fluff and fun at a time like that. Even if Nico gets him all hot and bothered, I suspect Nico wants more than just quick release. Commitment is on the table and both players are very cagey...
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    Chapter 3

    So much unsaid, haning between them. And no one wants to go first in an actual conversation. Although, at the moment, I'm not sure they know what they want. It's all such a mess...
  3. I can add my two cents. For a long time, I was a so called lurker. I read and enjoyed a lot of stories, but didn't have an account or leave comments. Why? I simply didn't think my comments would add anything. Who was I to give critique? I'm not even English speaking... This was in the old days when all comments were named reviews, a scary word to me. So I can understand a reader who really likes a story but still doesn't comment. Now, after being flushed out and registered for sheer need to comment and subsequently posting as an author myself, I try to comment every chapter I read, because I now know just how gratifying it is to get comments.
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    Chapter 67

    This chapter made me think of this:
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    Bliss

    That's life. Trick is to share it openly and honestly. Not always pretty, but if you can see past that it can bring you closer together.
  6. Oh my... I hope Clay hasn't taken his snooping too far...
  7. Clay wants to helpbut doesn't realize his best help would be to stay home and perhaps make dinner... Not play detective. And I agree, Nat is suddenly looking highly suspect, but why? Doesn't make sense. Steve could be the intended victim and Jake a trial run? Grim...
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    Chapter 17.2

    Kids keeping secrets is generally a bad idea. A kid like Fran doing it can be very bad news...
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    Chapter 66

    Clearing the air is good, since they approach the end game. Or...?
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    Connected

    This chapter brings me back to the early 90s, when I worked at university in the computer rooms for law students. I had to teach people (young ones!) how to doubleclick. These days, my 2 yo standsin front of the TV and tries to swipe images and change programs... Eric has taken a big leap and I think he will like this new world. If he can just ignore the trolls...
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    Movement

    LOL I read that too and he seemed to know his stuff. I thought "Someone who looks that cute has to be right..."
  12. Cindy doesn't even seem to connect Jake and Steve in her mind at all. So, were they super discrete or is it not him in the blog? Could it be someone else at the bar, and whoever is the killer tries to make a connection that isn't there? I guess I'll have to keep reading.
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    Movement

    I think Tony is right. Joy will not live up to her name and the feeling of loneliness will grow. Question is: Will it be too late? Never too late is the other one... Strangely enough, I lay pondering the origin of the word "quid" just a few nights ago (as one does, instead of sleeping...). My guess was it had something to do with quid pro quo. Research showed no conclusive answer, but my guess seemed in the lead on most bloggs. Funny to see it here as well.
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    Chapter 65

    Yes, Kohen. Talk first, alter course later! But ok, the Captain is a difficult guy to get through to, when he's so convinced Kohen needs to be coddled every minute of the day. Give some space and listen, instead.
  15. This is such a good image. And I agree, far too many people swim around like those deep sea creatures, unseeing.
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    Hot and Cold

    Good for Eric, taking further steps out into the world. So much to discover. I hope he can find a good plan that will be enough for him without costing a fortune.
  17. Oh no... Clay is about to do something stupid. He should ask and then maybe be able to help in a safe way. If he's off to meet Eddie, anything could happen.
  18. I'll let all the information simply stew. Not like I'm able to piece it together, but Rush is right. Look at signatures. Go over everything again. Though fresh eyes could be a good thing. But who?
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    Chapter 64

    Hmm... When will they learn to talk to each other instead of simply acting? Kohen can't just do stuff on a hunch and expect them all to follow. He's probably right, but people need a little context.
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    Chapter 2

    Now, that is a delicate matter. The king has his work cut out for him. Lucky him for getting the very best support. Nico appearing will be a definite spanner in the works for some crooked persons...
  21. I'm happy to hear you've rediscovered writing. The changes sound like a good idea too. 😁 Happy new year!
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    Chapter 63

    Well, that was truly a fail. Will Kohen realize Danie was telling the truth? I have a feeling they will need both him and Freska in the upcoming confrontation.
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    Chapter 1

    Well, their guilt isn't so strange. So many readers who'd known Diarmad for a much shorter time knew something was up. His closest people had no clue... More danger ahead... Will Nico break down D's walls?
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    Yule Tide

    Space does offer the most spectacular ornaments and plenty of room to ponder their significance. Fitting for Christmas.
  25. Greetings from Sweden! Vikings do it violently... (Santa says "Merry Christmas. And no funny business.")
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