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Chapter 13 Jabez Stone, the Conclusion
Puppilull commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 13 Jabez Stone, the Conclusion
Hmm... Is Lawson feeling bad because he was mean to Cory or is he feeling bad because he has lost someone he can talk to and perhaps manipulate...? Regardless, if he apologises to Cory, I hope Cory will not simply forget what happened. That would only make it OK in Lawson's mind to say hurtful things. Getting Lawson to face what he has done will be difficult though. He seems more interested in avoiding the matter after a quick 'I'm sorry'. -
Aaaahh.... What a sweet epilogue. And funny! So good to see things working out for them little by little. I like that Ezra isn't doing the hockey partner thing and giving up his own life. It must be alluring though, to stay with him full time.
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Dorian has to face so many things and deal with other people's attitude and opinions. I hope he can find the strength to hold on to his own ideas about how he wants to live his life. Choosing when and if you have sex is a big deal. To be coerced or nagged into it is not OK. I just wonder what Avery is up to now...
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So very slowly they inch their way towards each other. Tiny steps to not spook Kye, who isn't so timid after all. LOL Can Ash already have shown him he can be trusted and will not hurt him? Trust is building, and I hope they get a few more moments of sweetness before they have to deal with Barrett.
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No Prompt: Third Date Part II
Puppilull commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in No Prompt: Third Date Part II
They are very sensible, these boys. Very much keeping their hormones in check! Then again, I guess despite what some say even young guys can want to take it slow. It's a bit scary to take that step. A matter of trust. Also, sad to read about them not daring to hold hands... A harsh reality... I wish it wasn't so. -
MetaView 4: White Wolf Pack 4th Enforcer Warren L. Vanguard
Puppilull commented on JohnAR's story chapter in MetaView 4: White Wolf Pack 4th Enforcer Warren L. Vanguard
Poor Warren! It’s so sad to see him still feeling so insecure about himself. Add to that the constant roller coaster between hope and despair, it wouldn’t be a wonder if he sought comfort in food again. Drinking didn’t seem to work… I so hope that Jenna has the tenacity to keep reaching for that goal and not give in to the old-fashioned ways of the pack. She’s only 9, but already has such drive. So why couldn’t she be a Beta? The MetaVerse has a thing for four letter teachers. Bode, Mier, Duta… (And would you believe we discussed an old Swedish musician Johnny Bode this weekend? I had never heard of him before…) For some reason, I found some connections to the prompt Sane. Warren being the husky and his badge number is the patient’s number. The pictures on the walls in the kitchen made me think of the prompt Loom. Could Iris be connected to the young boy Ratni dying in the factory? Is she that old? Well, why not? Anything goes in the MetaVerse… -
I guess we'll see in time just how strong his vamp instincts are. If they take control he'll need virgin blood. As for him needing blood... There must be a reason to turn him. If Jeffrey saw him almost dying, they wouldn't have to fear him using his WW power again. So the vamps/prospective Lord (not MaryAnn) is up to something. So to me that seems like trying to get Colt's power on there side by making him a full on vamp. MaryAnn already tried with her mind games. There's more to Colt than he or we realize.
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As long as Colt kept his vamp side suppressed, there was no danger for the IC or the pack. Now, how would they handle him being an active vamp needing virgin blood? Where would they get it? The IC is 'pure' but no virgins. I can picture them asking the pack for donations. That would go down well...
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But if he looks and smells like a vampire and he's suddenly come back from certain death, isn't that a shock enough to make anyone lose their ability to think? To bring someone like that into the pack is asking an awful lot. How do we know he's not a vampire? He's been well fed for the past weeks, so any possible urge to feed will not show until after a few months. Perhaps they could figure out a solution in the IC, but that would need to be considered carefully. Sure, they are an unconventional pack, but a vampire living with them would be unthinkable for the rest of the pack. Prime has duties to others as well. A very difficult choice and Prime reacted too harshly in line with his nature. He's not perfect, but who is? The scents aren't all gone. Colt can still smell his wolves. The reason for this disaster is because he suddenly has the characteristics of a vampire. If Colt was still Colt but minus his scents, I'm sure Prime would have reacted differently.
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This was a violent chapter... It's difficult to read about Ysabel, but I find it interesting to see she's so split in two. I guess with her upbringing it's almost inevitable. Unless you lose your mind completely. To see she actually appears to have feelings for her children is surprising which in itself shows just how warped the Nabians are. We don't even expect affection for their own children.
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I'm guessing Jeffrey as well, since he appears to have plans of his own. For himself or someone else? He seems not strong enough to try to become the new Lord, so I think he's working for someone. Getting Colt all vamped up could mean he's trying to get him to go after MaryAnn, leaving the way open for some other entity to become Lord.
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But what could Prime do? That shock would be equal to my hubby coming home and declaring he's joined a neo nazi movement. All rationality would go out the window. I have a feeling Brian will sort this one out. Prime is too Alpha wolf right now, going on instinct and feelings of utmost betrayal. And as I said in my review. The question is not answered.
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That kind of fur and fluff might not be my cup of tea, but I'm sure Alex and Sven will have a sure fire way to stay warm in the winter from now on...
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Fear not, Tim, The Unwavering Optimist is working on her refutation of said chapter!
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Tough love..?
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Happy birthday!
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Happy birthday!
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I'm gonna put this in my office!
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LOL I can see JAR rolling his eyes now, Tim! To be honest, I get those mixed up in my mind too...
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Dorian can't catch a break... Not even left in peace at the meeting. And Raleigh is seriously scary... Walking around feeling entitled to whatever based on sheer strength. Unfortunately, even if Dorian tells A very, I have a feeling it will be swept under the rug. To just have Dorian connected to anything like that could tip off the opposition or the press. Dad can't have that...
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Oh, I like Clint. And his dad. They give the impression of a close knit family, the three of them against the world. I guess with a supporter like that, you really can climb any mountain. Still, I feel sorry for Clint having to go through all that when he's new at school. Even if there aren't outright cruel kids, he'll still hear about this. A lot... Then again, he might start to talk to people so it could work out in the end after all. Nice to read a story from your funny side. It will be a good summer read!
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Nice but short, this one. I like that we get to know the guys slowly but surely. A lot of emotions at play here. So much going on in the background that we only get hints of.
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Out of the mouths of babes, huh...? LOL Jason needs to realise his interest in Corey is not as secret as he likes to think. He won't be able to contain his growing feelings (yes, feelings! Get your minds out of the gutter!) much longer. I just hope he doesn't spring everything on Corey. That could go wrong, if Corey gets spooked and starts to think about their past again. So, steady as she goes, Jason...
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Phew! Well, now we can all breath easy again. They will have each other going over what happened and dealing with the after math. Deke must be so relieved. Good for Kraig to have someone to hold on to for support. His journey back to life won't be easy, I think...
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LOL Too funny!
