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Jenson might have been down, but he is still a formidable enemy to have. You're right, I don't think it will be fun for those involved.

Chapter 25 Jenson resisted the urge to throw the comm pad across the room. He could feel the hard shell creak under his white-knuckled grip. Tossing it onto a chair, he continued to pace, furious after his conversation with Merrick. How dare Jorrah dirty his son’s memory. Kel would never have agreed with what his father was doing. He was a sweet, caring man who didn’t deserve the hand fate had dealt him. The door chimed, making him turn his glare on the metal portal. “Come in.” It w

lol I think Toby is in for an eye opening experience. He's going to have to learn to control his reactions where his submissive brothers are concerned though or he's not going to make a very convincing Dom In the club.

Great story and you left me wanting more. I want to know what happens on the challenge. What happens between them. What happens with the pack. The back story about their lives together. More about the exchange of power with mates. I hope you do decide to continue this some day

This was beautiful and sad, Emi. There is so much loss in this one. Well done.

It was a special kind of torture, being forced to live after killing his love. I'm impressed he was able to move past it enough to try to do some good and counteract the evil. I'd love to know more about Zaidu (and now the boy he rescued). I sense a lot more story needing to be told.

Damn. I don't know what to say. Hank is so lost in his own delusions that he's scarily creepy. I can't imagine being Danny... first knowing he has a stalker, being kidnapped and then finding out about Tristan. Great job on this, Val!

This made me so sad for Brady. Yes, I feel badly for Ryan, but I suspect he's not stuck in a prison of his own making like Brady is. It can be so hard for teenagers to know when and if they should come out. I just want to give Brady a hug. There are no easy answers for him.

I do hope you continue this story sometime. There is so much left to tell... and I would be sad to see Sudal's story end in his perceived failure.

Happy Birthday, Clo!!

Uggh! I wanted to smack Faris when he let James get away, but he redeemed himself by moving to Canada to win him back. It's funny, when I thought of them meeting I imagined Faris 'bumping' into James and not the other way around. haha Thank you for telling the story of how these to men met. I love catching up with them

I hope Carly is smart enough to realize what she could lose if she pushes Craig. Bailey doesn't need to be around so much fighting. I'm not going to hold my breath, but one can hope, right? I adored the conversation between Craig and Jared. Designing their home together, making the leap to move in with each other, the kiss in the diner, Jared literally sweeping Craig off his feet. So much to sigh like a lovestruck teenager over I'm not surprised that Jared didn't care who saw him kissing Craig. He's been in love with the man for so long that he wasn't going to let anyone get in the way of claiming him (and being claimed) now.

I've admired Peter since I first read this story, and I admire him even more now. He may love Patrick, but he's also practical about taking their love to a physical level. Besides the fact that he realizes Patrick is inexperienced and needs time, Peter also wants to make sure he protects his lover by being tested first. He knows Patrick so well after only a short period of time that I can only see their relationship becoming closer. I also loved that he switched to English when talking to his sister. It's a small thing but it was respectful of Patrick's feelings. You're making it tough to choose between your two hot Danes, Peter and Jacob I've been going on about Peter, but I do adore Patrick as well. It takes a special man.. a special person... to take a man and a child he just met, into his own and make them feel welcome. It's not always easy to connect with children and Patrick has done everything he can to make sure Michael is happy and comfortable. It's an amazing thing to do for a single man with no experience with kids. You've created two men who complement and enhance each other. It makes for some great reading

I think you may have been the first person to pick up on the fact that Merrick mentioned the Senator at the end. As for Jenson and Merrick? Working on that chapter now Thank you for your review and your support, Tim

Jenson will lose his mind if Merrick is not ok. People make some bad decisions when they're hurrying to cover their tracks. Thank you for your review and your support, Def.

No, none of this could have been done without some help on Alectera. I think a lot of people are against opening up the planet's borders. The question is "who is against it enough to try to kill people for their cause?" Thank you for your review and your support, Tim.

Actually Kalen is straight. Landin was being pursued by the head of security of the Earth Council's Chip (Commander Tei Barnaby). I can see why you thought that though. Kel's species do have a longer lifespan than humans, but nowhere near as long as vampires. Kel's father would be very old for their species. There will be a little more about that in later chapters Thank you for the review and the support, Tim.

Sorry, I know cliffhangers can be tiresome and I really didn't plan on so many, but this chapter did need to be ended here. As I said in my response to Drew's review, desperate people can do some crazy things, like hurried cover up jobs. I think Jenson realized that there was no love between he and Kel's father, so I don't think Jorrah's involvement surprises him. thank you for your review and your support

I think desperate people can sometimes do some crazy things. Thursday will be here before you know it. Thank you for your review and your support, Drew.

I get why Philip feels guilt about Sean and Tait, but after reading this chapter he really needs to give himself a break. He DID tell Tait that Sean drank too much and was charged with assault AND he told him to be careful. Philip didn't have a lot of information about the actual charges or the level of drinking so he gave as much warning as he could. Tait was a grown man. If he wanted the bad boy nothing Philip said was going to stop him. If Philip pushed it, what are the chances Tait would have gotten angry, went after Sean anyways, and cut Philip out of his life? Heck Tait had his own warnings about Sean, with him being drunk at the party and his reaction to Tait's lunch surprise. He ignored what he saw and heard for himself. No warning from a friend was going to stop him. Walking down that path is on Tait. Staying on that path after the first time he got hit? I've known enough people in abusive relationships to say nothing is simple there. Emotional abuse, fear, loneliness, feelings of worthlessness... so many things can make someone stay, even long after they know they should have left.

I don't know anyone that doesn't like firemen so Joe already had my attention Stefan can't be that great of a teacher if he doesn't realize that no one is going to be great (and usually not even good) after 3 lessons, unless he's teaching the exact same dance all three times. Nerves can play havoc on coordination, so it's no wonder Daniel lost focus and started stepping on toes again. Good thing too.. he was able to refocus on the hot fireman

Jenson is going to be livid, I'm sure. As for Merrick? Although I didn't actually plan on so many cliff hangers in this story at this point Cliffie Queen might be a good name change for me Thank you for your review and your unwavering support, Gary.

OK first of all.. OUCH!! That must have hurt when the shock wore off Second of all... jousting? Modern day knights in armour? Oh my!

I think they're trouble magnets. It's the nature of their jobs. Thank you for your review and your support, Puppilull.

The aversion to touch was alluded to in a previous chapter, but it's been a while since it was mentioned. I think, like with anyone, your reaction to someone touching you depends in WHO has their hands on you Thank you for your review and your support, tim.