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Matty and Rusty are preparing for their future together. They have left their past life and problems ahead of them will soon be resolved. Rusty has handed his "responsibilities" back to his father. He and Matty will build a new life together as Mr. and Mr. Han. Rusty will get a new family that he deserves. I do hope he keeps in touch with his brother. Great writing! The great thing about the hot sex is that it shows no matter what they do in bed, both are equal and loving.
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She sounds a lot like Goggle. She only give out information when the time is right. 😁
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Added another old friend, Dick, to the investigation who is knowledgeable of local folklore and legends. It seems the leaf bear is very dangerous. The best part is the addition of another ghost that is human. I wonder if that ghost will react to Browbeat. There are even more things to solve.
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A nice happy bridge chapter like this gives us a chance to catch a breath before the evil once again is upon us. Well...except for the deep panting of the BJ. The healing is going well, at least the beginning part for Theo, and that gives us hope for the future. Sebastian may want Caleb in the pack, but Caleb and Asa in Texas will be better for all of them, especially Caleb. I do hope that Caleb does not wait long before he tells Vann the truth. Caleb and Vann both need this to happen, then more time for them to rebuild their relationship as a son and father.
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We do know Huntington is focusing on Sebastian's pack, but Huntington's evil has affected shifters on a worldwide basis. Sebastian's pack stopped the production of hybrids, brought down the evil collaboration with powerful shifters in the world organization, has begun to help the hybrids and their families adjust to their condition and now is beginning the process of healing these unfortunate kids. It would seem logical that many small packs impacted by Huntington's evil would want to help end Huntington for good. Both the world organization as well as many small packs might volunteer to help fight the battle. With an overwhelming force, Sebastian and his pack might have fewer casualties in the battle.
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Bill W has written not a high school romance, but a very loving story of the beginning of a lifelong friendship between two young men. It does start with a leap of faith on the part of both teenagers. A delightful tale of innocent exploration and growth.
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A very realistic and loving story of innocent exploration and a lifelong friendship. A very well told story, Bill!
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The confrontation was scary but resulted in Kip getting a new magical talent. I liked the suggestion that the placement of the house may prevent the "ghost" from doing something that needs to be done. Could the solution be simply moving the house a small distance? The other thing that kind of bothers me is Mildred maybe 83, but has the body of a 53-year-old woman. She should be out exploring the world again, not hiding away like a hermit. The guys should make a list of places for her to explore to encourage her to get out sometimes. Also, Lugh, the house, could look like a motorhome on the outside, and stay the same inside to go wherever Mildred wants to go. She could have her house and travel too! I want a Lugh for myself!
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Hey, you two! I know you specialize in puns, but where are the knock-knock jokes?
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You are not alone @weinerdog. I had the same idea when I read that line. 🤪
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intonation - Word of the Day - Fri Nov 3, 2023
raven1 commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
If you wish to listen to a YouTube essay heavy on examples of great intonation by female singers, check this out. This combines a review with clips of the artists to illustrate the point. You can also google "Most Difficult Songs for Female Singers" to find a variety of playlists covering different time periods. Something for every age. I'm sure @drpaladin would enjoy this! It fits his style by including entertainment and artistic criticism. -
I'm looking forward to that! Will it be in the Sticks and Stories entry? I hope you add a bunch more of those.
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This is an interesting and short parable illustrating the importance of trust when taking a leap of faith. The parable is light and has humour, but you may not see that unless you read the "To the reader" note above. This is very short and well written. Well worth the few minutes taken to read it.
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Chapter 1 - Don't Look Back
raven1 commented on Refugium's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Don't Look Back
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I love the humour in this story. It is wonderful to read a story that picks me up and tickles my funny bone. Adrien is a rock-solid foundation for Elliot. Elliot's new job is toxic and Adrien is Elliot's hazmat expert who looks adorable in a Snoopy hat. A must-read vignette when you need something fluffy and fun. To continue the fun read the comments.
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Punny you should say that! Maybe Elliott could take Adrien to work with him and ward off all the evil spirits of the management, corporation and some of the customers. I love all the puns in the story and comments. If this weren't an anthology piece, it would be a great addition to Sticks and Stories! ❤️
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I love @kbois' pun filled review!
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The trailer park project was a surprise to me when Colin told Armand, but it makes a great deal of sense. Armand and Colin made a commitment to support these young people after they grew out of the system. They did that by providing the apartments and jobs, but that was temporary. The park makes a great way to transition from the Home to an independent life on their own.
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Roger led a good life. He was a kind and gentle teacher who influenced many lives. His death was both peaceful and happy. His memory will live in the hearts of those who loved him. It was a very fitting end for a noble man.
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This is one more fun-filled chapter that sent me searching the internet several times. Lugh is both interesting as a house and an ancient Irish god. Of course, he simply could have been a powerful user of magic and not a god. The itch is an interesting concept. I would be surprised if Max had not told Charlie about this type of magic and its users. I wonder if the elves have encountered someone like Mildred before.
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There are a lot of clues flying around my head, but I figure out connections because that machine back in the bored room keeps reminding me it's not what I think. The only thing I think I may have right is the house definitely should not be where it is now. I didn't help that Geron's humour kept me distracted.
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Knowing Geron's habit of playing with words, I decided to check out Gonkers online and found this collectable toy. I can imagine seeing these race on tree branches from the corners of my eyes.
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Another great start to a Halloween story. I love the way you have set up the beginning with everyone bored in the bored room. One phone call and skwish fills the room. The research on the house helped add to the seasonal atmosphere. I love that the guys will be able to stay at the Octagon House once more. It was one of my favorite places in your stories.
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Wonderful imagery! The poem felt like an anthem to survival when each day we face death once more.
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Seth's father is a good man and is willing to help Greg deal with his chaos. Greg seems to feel that the chaos in his life is over. Somehow I doubt we have seen the last of the chaos. There is still Stacy, Seth's mom and Seth's relationships with the other three boys. Not a mess, but still not total normal.
