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  1. raven1

    Chapter 3

    Well spoken @travlbug and I do agree with the Bacon! No nasty tasting potions or hard to swallow pills for me. I think the pups' recovery is a good start, but he also needs to feel he saved more lives than he ended with his treachery. In other words, he needs to kick butt in the coming battle with Huntington's army.
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    Chapter 3

    Got it @Danilo Syrtis! I'll gird my brain for comments and file my nails before typing them. Any other advice, oh wise one?
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    Autumn's Sonnet

    A wonderful sonnet to love in the Autumn of life. It stirred my emotions and made my heart warm.
  4. Good night everyone!
  5. I'm sure your mare appreciates the burr removal service you provided, but you still need more rest. Take a nap!
  6. We're well. Like I told Clo just now, it's a lazy day.
  7. We're well. It's been a boring day, however. I did make more soup for the freezer and tried to catch up on my reading. Why do most of the author I am following post on the same day? I just cleared out 120+ notifications responding to the comments, and found another 100 more! It's late so I'm headed to bed soon. Take care!
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    Chapter 3

    @astone2292 is just trying to create the right mindset and environment to deal with your twisted plots. @Danilo Syrtis will provide the necessary wisdom and logic to keep you from going overboard, and we all know @Mrsgnomie is there to keep your ego in check by finding your errors.
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    Chapter 3

    He wished the bullet had done its job. ✔️ Already, Caleb wasn’t a fan of this Asa guy.✔️ He expected the fiery heat of Hell.✔️ The thought of being bed-bound made him nauseous. The idea of needing help was even worse.✔️ Who the fuck thinks of this shit? Is a weekend in the forest so different than a weekday that it needs a shampoo named for it? He snorted at the thought.✔️ Coming close to death didn’t give him the clarity it gave others. He still felt blackness and despair threatening to crush his soul.✔️ Self-loathing still crowded out any shred of positivity he could hope to harbor somewhere inside himself.✔️ There was no good way to explain to someone how bleak and worthless he felt.✔️ Prognosis: SNAFU. Caleb is back to his normal dismal self. Can you believe I didn't include half of Caleb's depressing remarks? I loved the insight into Caleb's thoughts in this chapter. It shows how far he needs to go before he can forgive himself. There are small bits of interesting information like his appetite seems to be recovering. The big thing is that just when he doesn't want it to happen, he has finally found his Mate! Nice setup for the next chapter @kbois! Now I'm all angsty. To quote kbois, Honestly? I expected you to reveal this much later. You are full of surprises in this story my friend.
  10. Sleep well, my friend.
  11. Wishful thinking @Doha! @Mrsgnomie loves her surprises.
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    Chapter 26

    The description of the gruesome smell was funny though nauseating. The wisps are keeping their promise of helping, but when Beckett something is scarily wrong. Is @drpaladin right or is Valrinda's behavior due to something else? Why did Valrinda swing Beckett directly into the wounds? @Cia does leave us with even more questions! So evil author, when do we get some answers?
  13. Very good questions and answers. I was particularly interested in the mention of the pictures, because I collect pictures from the same era.
  14. Hi Man! Hope you are doing well.
  15. Bonjour, sweet Clo! How is our fairy princess today?
  16. Hi Dugh! Hope you're feeling good and sent you this to make you feel even better.
  17. Hi Spike! How are you doing Nong Chai?
  18. Hi Bucket! Are you the naught bear that needs to be inserted?
  19. Hope you feel better fast, Gary! Just follow Dr. Page's advice to rest and stay hydrated.
  20. Hi Page! If I remember my youth correctly, displaying my affection for someone in front of my parents was "uncool" also. I'm sure you will find that out in a few years from the parent side of things.
  21. Yum! Looks like heaven to me, Albert!
  22. Glad to hear it wasn't a spider bite and hope the penicillin knocks the infection flat out of you. Take care!
  23. Like @JamesSavik I have many sizes of colanders, because they are so useful for so many different things.
  24. raven1

    Chapter 12

    This had me LMAO! Thanks!
  25. raven1

    Chapter 2

    Let me do some research and I'll get back to you on that.
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