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  1. So very happy to hear that you are feeling better, Rex!! Hope the surgery took care of all the problems and the prognosis is good!! You were missed and certainly you felt the love from your followers! BTW, this was such a nice soothing chapter...just to lead us into a rocky pit stop??? Awwwwwww geezzzzz...
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    Chapter 15

    Love the way you write...but am having an extremely hard time trying to find any type of good feelings at all for your main character!!! He seems maniacal, a bit bi-polarish...and certainly not a character that I would be routing for in the end to come out on top!! I find myself hoping Eli will find someone that's able to match his kindness, his capacity to love, his grace and dignity...that is NOT Jamie at all!! Excellent style of writing, though!!
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    Chapter 6

    Awesome chapter!!!!! Love the way this is going!!
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    Chapter 6

    So glad to see an update!! Very well done...hoping Rafa can let Lee in...it's evident he wants to! The plot is thickening...and I hope Lucien gets what he deserves soon...very nice update!!
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    For Orlando

    From Orlando...thank you! ....and still...we rise...hatred and bigotry will NEVER trump love!! Today our tears will flow...tomorrow, we will awaken to fight for peace, love and justice...another day..
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    Chapter 13

    Very nice chapter!! To say that Denise is the most deluded individual on the planet is a gross understatement!!! But of course, her "religion" calls for her to only see things with the usual self-righteous, dogmatic, bigoted, attitude that comes with most religious BS!!! Jason was stupid, to not put her out of his apartment, before leaving...now he's given her delusion another lifeline! Well, can't wait to see if he can truly man-up and get rid of that albatross before she chokes the life out of him. Loved the chapter...so looking forward to more!!
  7. Wow...perfect ending (beginning) to an awesome story!! You've evoked every emotion...laughter, tears, smiles, groans, shocks, intrigue, excitement, sex and most of all Love...and we absolutely adored every written word!!! I'm just hoping this is just a book 1 to a series.. and we can look forward to more from the brothers and more from you!! It's been a great following this tale...and we thank you for sharing your talent with us!!!
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    Back on Track

    Okkkkkkkkkkk...love this one!! I'm thinking Bubba should move away from the intelligence business and hang out his "Insight to life" sign and start making the big money!! Insightful, not pushy, easy flow conversation that led to a bit of soul searching for Ryan...and VIOLA!!!..home where he belongs!! Good job Rex...you're batting a thousand (nothing unusual)!!
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    Chapter 21

    OMG...another awesome chapter!! Trying to stem the tears...how awful can one parent get...how much hate and evil can manifest itself in one human being!!?? Their "papa" and Barrett should be captured and put together in a dungeon for life, to be given the occasional bread and dirty water!!! I hope Ash can teach Kye how to live and love...that it's not too late to heal and be happy... Thank you for a beautiful, gut wrenching chapter...
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    Chapter 5

    EXCELLENT!!!!! Well written, exciting chapter! Finally, Rafa is coming to terms with some of the feelings he's developing for Hyun!! Looking forward to more and more...thank u for sharing!!!
  11. Great start...should be very interesting how this progresses!!!
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    Chapter 21

    Excellent chapter!! So happy that Nobu took the high road and decided to forgive and walk away with both his dignity and integrity...leaving Daisuke in more turmoil and anguish than if he had physically tortured him!! There may be a chance for the guys to extricate themselves from these detrimental familial ties that seem to want to rob them of humanity and potentially keep them apart!! Can't wait to see the brothers confront their father....
  13. Thanks Rex, for the awesome history of a movement, a time, an epidemic that was allowed to almost wipe out an entire generation of wonderful loving people!! This chapter brought tears and memories of how heinous human beings can be toward others whom they perceive as "different" or not worthy to be protected and secure in our world...I've lived through the tragedies of both the 60's and the 80's...and yet, we still have to be ever vigilante in keeping evil and hate at bay, everyday!! How sad! Again, excellent chapter...glad to see the guys moving forward so lovingly!!
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    Chapter 20

    As usual...you've done a fabulous job with this chapter...the adenalin rush you gave us with the anticipation of Vladi getting to Daisuke in time and the terror we felt (literally) along with Nobu for Viktor's life...was just amazing!!! Thank you for such an awesome story, and especially for this chapter that took us from terror to relief...brilliantly!!
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    Chapter 5

    Fabulous chapter to a beautiful story!!! So glad Cor was forced to thow the "garbage" out! Hopefully he can learn to forgive and give Jas another chance...if Pierre can do it...what's stopping him.. Get a grip Cor and see what's smacking you in the face.. Awesome writing...
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    Chapter 18

    Awesome....simply fantastic story!! So looking forward to Ash making Kye believe that he's worthy of being loved...should be quite interesting to say the least!!
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    Chapter 6

    Hoping this review will let you know that you've created two characters that we've totally become enamored with!! Loving the storyline, and the way it's developing...beautiful!!! So please be encouraged to give us moreeeeeeeeeeeee!! BTW, love the way Benji is taking care of his man...
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    Chapter 4

    While I'll admit to not caring for Jason and his cavalier treatment of Pierrre, I was totally impressd with the way he was so open and honest about his shortcomings back when he was young and taking everything for granted!! It shows his level of maturity, especially given the fact that it could have gone downhill and caused a scene...he knew that it was something that had to be done.. Difficult chapter...beautifully done!!
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    Chapter 19

    Brilliantly done...so exciting..so loving, so menacing...all wrapped into one chapter!!! Absolutely brilliant writing!! Can't wait for the next chapter...you have left our minds in turmoil...and literally on pins and needles waiting to see what happens next!!! Great job...thanks for sharing!
  20. Very nice updating chapter, Rex...love how you have them showing the kind of love a real friendship should be...unconditional and there when you need it!! Good job!!! Hope you're doing ok and in good health! Can't wait for the next chapter...
  21. Very nice...soooo glad our Barry is ok, and hoping that with all he's been through, with the love of Dave and their wonderful friends, he'll be just fine!!! But it was hell waiting a whole week... not knowing if one of our faves was ok!!!!!!!! Thanks for the update on everything.. I wasn't worried one bit Anyway, now to Clay's secret...after all of this, I'm glad he realizes that his love is in excellent hands...and secrets will be handled... Rex!!!
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    Simmer to a Boil

    Great beginning...can't wait to see how these two tango!!! One will teach the other about a delightful sense of humor that can go a little awry...while the other will have to learn that every day is not a "play" day....should be quite interesting!! Absolutely loving the storyline and the characters already!!
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    Ludicrous Speed

    Hey Rex...I'm a bit confused...would the authorities have left them all there without investigating the scene, dusting, and collecting evidence to get a sure fire conviction??? And would Barry's friends be more worried about celebrating a holiday when they don't know how badly he may have been injured??? Help me out buddy....just askin???? Are we to learn the answers next?
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    About Time

    Wow...just happened onto this story...and so far, am blown away with it's energy and excitement!! And now...they must deal with the asinine "media" of assume what you will and assinate characters at will... In any case, looking forward to "plan B" and the next chapters...amazing job so far!!
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    Nightmares

    Hmmm...trying to decide whether to beat you now...or wait until the end of the story!!!??? Decisions, decisions, decisions...ahhh...guess I'll have to wait until you finish the story(psst..wouldn't want to injure those talented fingers)!! Excellent chapter, Rex!!! Love how you're showing how Clayton and Ryan are getting sooo comfortable and more understanding of each other!! While the nightmares concern me, I think that the love that's growing between these two, will suffice any and all obstacles! Let me be the first to say that...this poor robber has...picked the wrong bar, the wrong night, and OMG...the absolute frikin wrong set of friends to try and rob...Dave is gonna kill him for breathing on Barry, and twice for threatening him and his friends!!! Can't wait for the next chapter...tomorrow In any case...awesome job "King Cliffy"!!
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