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  1. It is a very beautiful and heartening poem, tim.
  2. Glad to see you posting again! Loved the chapter.. Becker might have a freak out about Ted, but I’m glad he’s having these trysts. Lol.
  3. Hi all and good morning! Hope everyone is hanging in! Have a good Saturday!
  4. Nah, just keep turning out more of these. Save the wine for the book deals. xoxo
  5. This is all kinds of heartbreaking, even if it’s only 2 weeks. That is a lot of time to further fracture Daniel’s psyche. I’m sure their feelings about his mother will spill over on to him forcing him to carry even more guilt. This is just sad and wrong. You write such compelling characters, Thorn. Good chapter.
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    Michael

    I’m crying too.. why am I crying..Gah! I’m sad for all of them. Also, I don’t like this answer... I do t want the grandparents to suddenly try to be better and mean it. I want Daniel at home. With his dads. And his boyfriend. Doable?
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    Wednesday

    I’m sure that Simon has a story, why he would want to latch on to Max. There were so many red flags to start. Looking forward to more.
  8. Somehow, these little calamities always find you.. lol. You have a good night too.
  9. So much yes, in this poem. Love it, Parker.
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    Chapter 7

    Oh Brad, you silly, nut job! Lol. “You smoked?” It’s funny when we as teenagers realise our parents once were too! I like how Kelly’s dad handled them. Pretty cool to give them a free pass. The boys get the warning but this is going to be a classic, “I wonder who... I suspect... but we’ll never know...” story for the ages. Just imagine, the Stucky and Pritchard kids in a generational long friendly feud because of this.😝 I really enjoyed this, Geron. Thank you for being such an awesome author 🙂
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    Chapter 6

    Ah, I love it when a plan comes together. Hehe. That was great, and yeah, it needed to be done.
  12. Hi all, 5 days away is not long enough, though it’s good to be home.. Hope he’s well. Send him my best.
  13. Yay! This is wonderful! Congratulations, Northie!!🎉
  14. Hey Mac, it didn’t even start out cool this morning, so you are lucky to have enjoyed that. Good morning, all! I get to escape the worst of the heat (103f feel like temps) for a few days so yay! Stay hydrated, stay cool. stay well, be good! xo
  15. Well, that was some storm. Still hear thunder rumbling overhead but no boom! Anyway, I have an idea for the prompts tickling my brain so I’m off to see how well it translates. Stay well, all of you. ‘night!
  16. I read these earlier and thought, ‘interesting’ Keep coming back, because.. crazy idea... now to get it done
  17. All wonderful poems. I especially loved Visiting Grandmother, and In the Meadow. Thank you, Parker.
  18. A striking and powerful piece, Parker, on a sad state of affairs. Well done.
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    Daniel

    Well done chapter, Thorn. Everything in me wants to protect Daniel from himself. He does not belong with those grandparents even though they have legal claim. Unfortunately, this happens too often, where kids get sent to relatives and not to whom is in their best interests. That’s across the board too. I hope Daniel and his dads stay together..
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    Julie

    Go Julie! And her mom was just great Jason’s dad...”Son, there’s something I have to tell you....” lol I wonder how deep down Jason’s bigotry really is. He was loud and offensive, clearly thinking that his dad and maybe the rest of the family was on his side. Maybe he was testing the waters by being the aggressor? Hmm Awesome chapter!
  21. 👋 hello all. Hope everyone is doing well.
  22. Take care everyone.. have a good night!
  23. I love the symbolism of the yellow roses. This is just a beautiful poem, Gary. loved it!
  24. This was so wonderful.. https://amp.cnn.com/cnn/2019/07/09/us/jack-higgins-autism-silent-graduation-trnd/index.html?__twitter_impression=true
  25. Good almost afternoon, peeps. It is hot as hay.. walked around the neighborhood with mother, and I don’t think I’m leaving the coolness of the house ever again. 😩 Well, at least for a few hours.. I’ll try to get some reading done! have a good one, all. 🙂
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