W.E_Rosenthal
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Aw, man I was hopefully that Zac would end up with Austin. The turn around with Kkenny made me really happy too! I really loved this story, you did a great job. Will there be a part two?
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I just kinda wish I could shake Emm and, tell him to wake up and smell the smexy Chinese guy. I feel like the only reason Emm won't move forward with Jian is because he is still feeling guilty for having sex with Zeke when Jian was in the house but, that in turn makes him feel even more guilty because Zeke was his bf at the time so he wasn't doing anything wrong. So...really Emm just needs to stop over thinking everything if this is how he's feeling. Jian is so understanding though so i guess its okay. As always you have done a great job and, I'm mad I read the story so fast and didn't save any to read until the next update. You're awesome!
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Oh man, idk why but the end of this chapter made me kinda depressed. I think, it might be because it reminded me of my senior year in highschool and, how I'm no longer friends with half the people I use to hang out with. That being said I still really loved this chapter! Great work.
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I think I just died. I love this story so much! The fluffy parts just make the world go round.
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Chapter 7 Changing the Rules
W.E_Rosenthal commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 Changing the Rules
That ending was just so perfect after you broke my heart with the voicemail part. my hope is coming back!! -
Chapter 5 Ace in the Hole
W.E_Rosenthal commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Ace in the Hole
I've never wanted to slap some sense into a fictional character as much as I have with Michael. I guess, I get why he was so scared but, damn why did your mom and dad have to tell you you are in love with your best friend. Smh. The part where Michael broke down really pulled a my heart though. I hope Kendall will take Michael because, I can't see him with Chet...it just doesn't sit well with me. *fingers crossed* -
I can't believe this is your first story.... Just this first chapter was amazing....beyond amazing, really. You managed to pack this first chapter full of so many raw emotions in such an elegant way. I'm fanboying, can you tell? I'm currently writing my first story, and this gives me something to aim for. I can only hope the story I'm writing is half as good as this. I'm looking forward to seeing what you've done with the rest of this kick ass story!
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Chapter 11 Dangerous Territory
W.E_Rosenthal commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 11 Dangerous Territory
I live for the updates on this story! I think, thus far, this is my favorite chapter. This chapter shows how great of a person Kellar is, and how he commits to healing someone. If kellar wouldn't have been able to heal Adelin I'm sure he would of felt so horrible...he puts a lot of pressure on himself! I like Tobyn, but if he isn't going to actually love Kellar he needs to let him be. I mean really these mixed signals are driving the poor boy crazy. Then again, I'm sure Tobyn is pretty confused too. I'm totally rooting for them to be fated mates though...'cause I'm a big ol' sap and I live for fluffy stories. Great job as always, bud. -
I had planned to pace myself on reading this, but I read it all. Fml. This is an awesome story, Cia. I'm looking forward to what else is coming. Keep up all the good work!
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Chapter 8 Hiding In Plain Sight
W.E_Rosenthal commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8 Hiding In Plain Sight
I think tobyn and kellar are sweet to each other! I just want their love to move forward so bad but, I feel like it might be a bit of a fight if tobyn keeps this sense of duty theory up. I'm seriously loving this story I'm SO happy I found it. My only problem would be how story the chapters are but that's okay because that just means I have to treat them like gold and not get greedy. You're doing an awesome job. Keep up all the good work! -
Oh crap, I'm so happy right now. I really hope Jackson doesn't mess this up and hurt Luke in some way. This is a great story! Keep up all the awesome work!
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Breaking News from TMZ Sports!
W.E_Rosenthal commented on QuinnDK's story chapter in Breaking News from TMZ Sports!
You've done it I'm dead. But, not so dead that I can't eagerly wait for the next chapter. Its really sucks how they put Ezra's name and work business out there like that...I can only imagine the hate he is going to get over this. *shudders* I can't even bring myself to think about all the crap Henrik will get. I just hope they will stick by each other. -
Oh my god. I don't know of my nerves can take this...I just hope Henrik doesn't get upset with Ezra. I'm seriously worried about fictional characters over here. I am literally clutching my phonebbecause I can already feel all the crap that is about to go down. I hope they can make it through this. Awesome story keep up all the good work! Oh and a personal request... Try not to kill me with cliff hangers like this one too much
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I was born in '93 and I know all of those songs. I use to rock out to all the 90's rock and be in my feelings. the other pop songs I just don't get how they didn't know. I mean those songs are everywhere. Now, everyone allow me to freak out about how old some of these teens look. I'm 22 and half of these kids look older than me...now I see why I get carded when I go out.
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Wow, that chapter was a lot. It kept me on the edge of my seat. You are doing an awesome job here, keep up all the good work.
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Jeez, I really think this kid Brandon is an awesome little guy. Like too adorable. I'm a bit worried about him though with all the worrying he does. I completely get it thought, when I was growing up I didn't have anyone to talk to about my attraction to other guys, I also grew up in a very religious household, so this really hits home for me. I look forward to reading more. Awesome job, really. c:
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I think if wearing make up is something you like doing you should do it. Life is too short to worry over make up. By the way, I just want to say I love your profile picture, that manga/anime is awesome.
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This was a really good chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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The relief I felt at the part with Gary and his mother can only be compared to the feeling I felt when coming out to my grandmother...greatful. This story is truly lovely.
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I like this story a lot. I just wish Fin appreciated himself more. Keep up the good work!
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Chapter 10 - Blooming relationship
W.E_Rosenthal commented on Avangelion's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Blooming relationship
I really love this story. I think the relationship development between Dom and Anikin is really cute. Though I'm a little worried about this trip with Dom's mom and Tom...I hope everything goes well. Keep up the good work, you're doing great! -
I love this story. You really have some great talent...I didn't even notice that I had read through all the chapters until there was no button for the next chapter. I have to say at first I was very much anti-indie but, I can now understand where he is coming from, poor guy. What I can't believe is Jameson...I have no fucking words for this character. I had to stop reading for a bit when he said he missed Indie (I got seriously mad at a fictional character). Abuse, is a very tough subject and usually I won't read a story with it but, this different. Thank goodness for Preston. I think he is just what Indie needs. (I ship them so fucking hard...like I'm on a freaking boat, man.) Keep up the great work!
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So, many different stories.
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This chapter murdered me...I don't know if I want to be happy about Corbin trying with Nick or sad that it feels like things are over with Pete or worried about what is going on with Mike and if he is okay. I could live with out Lee... Keep up the great work! I'll be biting my nails until the next chapter.
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Wait that can't be the way you are going to end this story?? I mean really....h-how could you? I'm pretty sure you just killed me. Please, oh please let there be a part 2 that tells the story of CJ's fall. o(╥﹏╥)o
