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Thank You Geoff for this simply amazing journey you’ve taken all of us on! Your characters are life like and so very real. The story was uplifting, heartbreaking, joyful and sad but was very beautiful. I’m sorry that it’s taken me so long to get back to this story, I work many, many hours in the summertime. I’ve read many stories by many authors and I think that you’re one the best. This was truly literature. The last chapter made me cry as always with your stories, I hope that the dividends from the tissue manufacturing companies are keeping you in the lifestyle you deserve. Lol!! 🤣 I’m really looking forward to the next story that you tell! This was truly a pleasure to read. 😃❤️

Thank you Eric for revisiting these amazing characters and this amazing story! I’ve missed them! I’m glad the Christmas visit ordeal is over for Chet. This little boy shouldn’t have to be put through such a trauma. The California trip should be more pleasant. The scene with the ex was difficult but they all came away having settled their issues and are now capable to move forward with their lives. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Very sad chapter! 😢 I’m thoroughly disgusted by the “Christians” How dare they attack Bobby and kill Nana for doing what dogs do, she was protecting Bobby and was killed for it. I sincerely hope that the Angel of retribution will kill each and every one of them very slowly and in the most painful way possible. I’m certain that they will burn in hell for their crimes both against Bobby and Nana. As for that piece of crap living across the street, I hope that the Angel of retribution will castrate him very slowly and in the most painful way possible before killing him while he’s begging for his life. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

This was a great chapter! The power that these children wield is amazing, but an extremely dangerous one to use. The potential for abuse of these powers is enormous. Average people would react very badly and kill these children. The president has to keep these children and their powers under wraps to protect them and society. The anger from his favorite reporter was unexpected, but Dylan handled it perfectly. His confidence and belief in himself is growing at an amazing pace. He’s taken control over his staff and situation with maturity beyond his years. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Thank you for another great chapter! Lewis seems to have no control over his life, he’s ordered about by the Navy, the Government and whatever employer he’s working with at the moment. It would be prudent for him to think about what he wants then take the necessary steps to achieve those goals. He also should learn to say no occasionally. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Thank you for a great chapter! You’ve continued to handle sensitive and emotionally difficult issues with a light hand. The emotionally charged topic of abuse and bullying is a very difficult situation to resolve. You’ve handled this topic well so far. The interaction between Adam, Artie and Dizzy is taking a positive step forward. I’m very impressed with Adam and the amazing job that he’s doing with Artie. He’s very unsure of himself, but Artie’s doing a magnificent job of reassuring him that he’s exceeded the norm for parenthood. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️

Great chapter! Alex and Nate seem to be getting closer, that could spell trouble for Toby and Alex’s relationship as well as Mac’s. Larry and Alex are going to come to an impasse very soon. I see the detention center coming into use soon. I’m looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️

This is a very powerful story that is very sad but also quite touching. I’m really enjoying the characters you’ve created and the depths of the emotional turmoil within each. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 😃❤️

Another great chapter in this simply amazing story. The invasion of Siberia will probably not go unnoticed by the Russian government. I’m thinking that there’ll be another member of the VUN very soon. I’m certain that George will be found and that he’s going to be fine. I feel bad for John who’s suffering from his loss of George. The VUN needs more security and support for intelligence gathering and a group of commandos to help them stay secure and to deal with potential problems. I like the idea of the longevity serum that would be given to the VUN members as a trial basis. There could be problems with individual families when their relatives stop aging. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Great chapter and story! I’m really enjoying this story and amazing characters! The owner is a no nonsense guy who wants to protect his business and guests. The luxury yacht business is extremely competitive and the slightest missteps can destroy the business. These guests are extremely rich and spoiled and any kind of rudeness or discrimination can spread very quickly amongst their clientele. I like that Wyatt and Lewis are getting acquainted, hopefully there’s some sparks soon. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Outstanding chapter! So glad that Adam’s recovery is going so well. The relationship with Mrs. C is blossoming perfectly. I really appreciate the depth of support and protection she’s providing, it’s amazing she didn’t swear out a complaint against Ma for aggravated battery and child abuse. She should have cold cocked that evil bitch. I sincerely hope that she’s not the shooter. I’m also hoping that Troy and the rest of the GSA bunch are all right. Please don’t kill Troy, I’d be unable to complete the story due to sadness and mourning. I despise cliffhangers. I’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter! 😢❤️

Alex is finally becoming comfortable with his role in the complex, his dealings with the Cheyenne Mountain complex was hilarious, I think that the American commander was confused and shocked by the choices the British government made. Now that Alex is appointing his command staff, he will hopefully appoint someone to monitor the command center at all times. This story and characters is moving at a nice pace and I’m definitely impressed. I can’t wait for the next chapter! 😃❤️

Thank you for another great chapter! It looks like Alex and company are in the thick of it now. Alex needs to step up and take command of the group. He should get into the command and control offices and start to learn about the facilities and their operations. Once he enters the control room he should have a better idea of what’s available and how to operate the systems which should hopefully get the water running throughout the complex. He will have to make some difficult decisions regarding Larry, Tom and Amanda and their bullying behaviors. I’m really liking the pace you’re using for character development and story line revelations. Can’t wait for the next chapter!😃❤️

Thanks for another wonderful chapter! I’m really enjoying this story and these amazing characters. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️

Thank you for yet another amazing chapter! I love Makarovia and all of these complex characters. I’m fairly certain that Mario won’t be a part of the consortiums plot. I feel bad for Peter and his fears for the future and what development will bring. Crime, overspending, being hooked on television and video games, and shopping online. The Eastern European countries are not fully prepared for the comercialism that rapid development and new found economic upturns can bring about. I hope that they’ll be smarter about “reality” t.v. China and Eukrain are experiencing these things currently. I’m really looking forward to how Mario fits into the family. Can’t wait for the next chapter!😃❤️

Outstanding chapter, the plot has been revealed! Alien invasion, underway. There stay could be a lot longer than originally planned. The whining bully Larry is in need of re-education and will most likely fall apart when the true nature of their trip comes to light. Bullies are complete cowards with fear and weakness as their major character traits. “Sparky” has it bad for Alex. You’ve gotten my complete and total attention with this story! I’m absolutely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Great chapter as always! I love Tom, he’s got a great relationship with Troy and now Adam. Adam really needs to speak to Mrs C about the pains he’s experiencing. This could be serious, kidneys, spleen and intestines could be involved. I’m glad that Carlos had a good time with the family. He’s a great guy and needs some friends to support him with his family difficulties. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

I’m really becoming hooked on this story! The characters and plot are straight out of the 50’s sci-fi classics, but with a more modern 21st century twist. I loved all of those films. You’re developing the characters and plot at a nice pace. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter. 😃

Thank you for another terrific chapter, I’m enjoying the joy and love between Adam and Troy, they’re connected on a level very few people ever experience. Jason seems likely to make trouble for the boys. The fundraiser for the GSA seems like a really great idea. The emotional bonding between the boys is realistic and touching. True love amongst teenagers is scary, exhilarating, angst ridden and amazingly complex. These emotional roller coasters are seldomly successful in the long term, however they can lay a foundation for the rest of their lives and future relationships. I personally hope that they will be that couple who succeed and last into the future, including marriage and a family. I truly love this story and these characters! Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! 😃❤️

Ace, Wow! I’m impressed! Thank you! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thank you for another amazing chapter! I’m really glad that you liked the idea of the thank you note. I’m impressed with the wording of the note. It’s exactly what I envisioned. The love and support that they give to each other is amazing for teens. The birthday celebration, private and public were all new experiences for Adam. The birthday spanking was interesting and stressful for Adam to learn to move forward with dealing with his past. His choice of not seeking counseling is normal for a teenage male. They believe that they can handle any adversity, and deal with the emotional turmoil alone. I believe that he’s probably going to need some counseling soon thanks to his horrid childhood and the kidnapping and involvement of his abusive family in the attepted rape and whipping. He’s carrying all of this alone and I’m not sure that he’s capable of carrying it. His new family is very loving and supportive, and I hope they see the needs he’s not showing soon. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Thank you Ace for another amazing chapter, the emotional bonding between Adam and Artie has become love, respect and supportive admiration. The bonds between Dizzy and Artie are deepening, and Dizzy has opened up. There’s a lot of similarities and shared emotional histories between them. I’m looking forward to meeting Dizzy’s mom in the next chapter. I’m also happy that Mason seems on the surface to be sweet and interested. Dizzy and Artie need to help Ky, find a decent and sweet boyfriend. Maybe they should take him to the tavern and gayborhood also. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Thank you Ace for another amazing chapter! The character demonstrated by Artie’s friends in supporting him in his periods of grief and loss is overwhelming. Ky stepped up and said some profound things, Dizzy was a perfect gentleman and made the right decisions to support his new boyfriend in his time of need. I really am impressed by both of them. Adam’s boyfriend was a selfish, spoiled and obnoxious jerk. Adam made the right decision in throwing the ass out. He’s a successful, handsome and funny guy, he can certainly do a lot better. Artie is going to need Dizzy because of the guilt that he’s already feeling, and with Adam’s break up, he’s certain to be more in his head trying to deal with the guilt. I’m certain that the support both will receive will go a long way toward helping them move forward. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

She has absolutely no redeeming qualities, and was a lousy mother who I believe encouraged the abuse of her son by her husband. She should have been charged with child abuse!

Thank you Ace for another great chapter. The fact that Adam has finally accepted that he’s the parent and he’s starting to be more comfortable in raising Artie. The confrontation with Sadie was perfect! The group of friends is very supportive of Artie and taking him to country night at the nightclub hosting teen night was the perfect salve for his homesickness. I’m really happy Ky is making great progress in rejoining this group. He really deserves to find a very nice, very attractive and amazing guy! (hint,hint,hint) You should take all the time that you need for writing around your new job. We’re willing to be patient between postings. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️