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  1. Parker Owens

    Chapter 1

    Well that was an engaging beginning.
  2. Parker Owens

    Friday (Night)

    I will add my voice to others congratulating you on this engaging and interesting story. I liked the characters you developed, and particularly enjoyed watching Simon growing and evolving. And who could resist Jeff and Simon slowly circling closer to one another? Thank you very much for posting this.
  3. Parker Owens

    Teachings

    I am taken first to the garden; indeed, my irises need dividing. In fact, the whole garden must be dug up. It’s a hard thing to learn. You make me feel the weariness, the bone-ache of just wanting to let things be. Yet I also feel the warm breath of sun and hope.
  4. Parker Owens

    Chapter 13

    Thank you for letting us learn more about Jimmy. Now he must sniff out the rogue in Fergus’ pack. Shouldn’t that have news have Fergus more worried? His priorities really seem skewed. One wonders who the rogue could be: someone wanting to take Fergus down?
  5. If I am to guess, I also surmise the mystery writer to be @northie. I could be wrong, I shall stick with that guess.
  6. Hmmm. I have some guesses. But not narrowed down to one person yet...
  7. Parker Owens

    Chapter 12

    Jimmy officially meets Sawyer. That was wonderfully awkward. And you manage to get them past that awkwardness, only to have @$&! Fergus interrupt. No good can come of that.
  8. Parker Owens

    Facade

    I love this beautiful, enigmatic poem. I’m drawn to the images, clotted uncertainty and confidence as a coat of many colours. My heart wants to follow the vision with you.
  9. Parker Owens

    Collared

    Thank you for this comment. Scott has undergone a considerable transformation, yet his past seems to have caught up with him. Poor Graham!
  10. @sojourn Thank you for your patience and for reading the journal as far as you have. I appreciate it.
  11. Thank you for writing this piece. I’m voting for Thiago.
  12. Parker Owens

    Summer Riches

    They are indeed delicious reminders of summertime. Thanks very much for reading!
  13. Parker Owens

    Summer Riches

    Shy or evasive, each has a character. Now is blackberry time. Not only do they shift, they have thick thorns, too. But there’s nothing like filling buckets full of blackberries on an August afternoon.
  14. Parker Owens

    Summer Riches

    It’s berry picking season. How can I resist?
  15. Parker Owens

    Summer Riches

    I was so happy to beat the Robins and Cardinals to the blueberries this year. Now the blackberries are just beginning to ripen in my neighbor’s field. I’m so happy you liked these.
  16. Strawberries growing wild in the field give themselves away by their white flowers; yet they still hide successfully behind clover, bright red peeking shyly through sweet green, like June’s treasure scattered at my feet. Raspberries are best eaten at dawn, hanging as rubies amongst the thorns, so pensive passersby on the path pause to pluck, savoring such sweetness on the tongue, tasting like joy distilled by the sun.
  17. Parker Owens

    Cut the Cake

    I can imagine they must have quarreled afterwards. Perhaps something holds them together.
  18. Thank you @Myr for your insights, and more importantly, for your vision. 36,000 of us are grateful for what you have wrought. Thanks again, @Carlos Hazday for making this feature happen.
  19. Parker Owens

    Chapter 11

    Obsession, stalking, compulsion ...all quite marvelously described. The tension is rising!
  20. Thanks for your very wise thoughts on privacy, and your moving thoughts on love.
  21. Parker Owens

    Chapter 10

    Red flags seem to be hanging like bunting on May Day in Moscow.
  22. This poem took me with you on a journey to dark caverns and deep, reverberating tunnels. I feel an oppression, a confining closeness, until you open up the vision of the rose, and the flower with roots that grow around the stones to lift blossoms to the sky. I loved this.
  23. Parker Owens

    Chapter 10

    A chapter full of information about Fergus and the way he runs his pack. If I were a member, I might be looking for an escape, or a distant job.
  24. I enjoyed this last installment of Malibu. You gave us deeper insight into both Cesar and Brett, as well as into Bryce and Zion. Ritch is getting more flesh on his character, too. Just because there won’t be any drug fueled orgies at the house doesn’t mean there might not be an adventure or two. It will be a great place for them.
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