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  1. Parker Owens

    Dream

    Parker Owens commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Dream

    Your experiment turned out marvelously well.
  2. Parker Owens

    Approval

    Parker Owens commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Approval

    So, Brian checks up on Grant. Hmmm. Trust, but verify? But Grant’s love for Troy is genuine, which you make visible to the Quad Squad and to us. Thanks for sharing their lives with us.
  3. Parker Owens
    I enjoyed this story very much. You help me feel the anxiety of Shiro’s attraction so well.
  4. Parker Owens
    Thank you very much, both for you comments and for reading this.
  5. Parker Owens
    I really enjoyed reading these responses. Thank you @Carlos Hazday, @Cole Matthews, @northie, @Headstalland @Wayne Gray. I find that your reflections help me think about my own writing.
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    March 9, 2022

    Parker Owens commented on Lux Apollo's story chapter in March 9, 2022

    I really liked the last big paragraph. That felt absolutely right to me.
  7. Parker Owens
    Thanks, Wayne. The perspective is very useful.
  8. Parker Owens
    Chase would be unusual if he didn’t feel a little ache in the gut as his friend starts dating someone new. Call it jealousy or feeling left out, he’s still going to ache. That he can try to be happy for his friend is good. That he saw Hank without an emotional explosion is even better. Their relationship appears to be at an end, but a long time may pass before anything new forms.
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    The Only Gift

    Parker Owens commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in The Only Gift

    It sounds like an awesome Christmas. Troy and Grant are wonderful with each other, and their friends have become family. You are filling my heart with them. Thank you.
  10. Parker Owens
    These are words that lift my heart. I’m grateful to be able to see the love you share.
  11. Parker Owens

    The Place

    Parker Owens commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in The Place

    And do stardom is conceived. I liked this chapter. And what you’re writing surely highlights the plight of returning veterans, homeless or not.
  12. Parker Owens

    Comeback

    Parker Owens commented on northie's story chapter in Comeback

    I vote Prat. The sense of humor has evolved, I think.
  13. Parker Owens
    I hesitated to participate in the previous discussion. I guess I really wanted to take time to think about it, and to consider the general rule of thumb being talked about. After time to reflect, I appreciated the idea. I’m grateful it got my attention.
  14. Parker Owens
    This surely makes me want to dance.
  15. Parker Owens
    Thank you for reading. If this spoke to you, if it resonated, then I’m happy.
  16. Parker Owens
    You’re so right about social media and the ease with which bitter predigested opinions get spread. Forgiveness is so precious, and it’s elation so grand, it’s a wonder that it feels so rare. I’m glad you feel the hope in this poem, and hear it singing with me. Your response made me smile. Thank you.
  17. Parker Owens
    Simon at least realizes his feelings toward Jeff; now he needs to convince himself that they’re not wrong. His upbringing has made him question himself over and over, though. I wonder how he’ll like the film.
  18. Parker Owens

    Family Ties

    Parker Owens commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Family Ties

    Grant: take tim’s advice! Wayne: great chapter! Grant certainly defied his awful family in a way they can’t mistake. Like Troy, I’d be proud of him too. Looking forward to more!
  19. Parker Owens
    Exactly. You’ve nailed it, thank you!
  20. Parker Owens
    Thank you, my friend. That movement from panes turned into ice shards, from frozen landscape to melting snow and vivid sunlight touches the feelings generated by forgiveness. I’m grateful for your help in making this poem better.
  21. Parker Owens
    You’re most welcome. Thank you very much.
  22. Parker Owens
    You are very kind. It's a pity that Forgiveness can be elusive sometimes, but maybe that makes it more precious.
  23. Parker Owens
    I'm glad you liked the images in that last part. Everything looks different with Forgiveness.
  24. Parker Owens
    Does forgiveness walk with you, with feet that slide in fresh-fallen snow and break through ice covered puddles, shattering their panes to open muddy secrets to the high, blue sky? Can you feel reconciliation's breath upon your neck to chill and warm simultaneously as whispered lips tease your cheek and murmured syllables caress the ear? Will you recall clemency's glance, and forget that place you hid away your ruby-faceted anger secured in black velvet, fo
  25. Parker Owens
    Your determination and grit are awesome. You are doing so much that’s right. I continue to think of you.
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