Thank you for reading this prompt response. Your words are very encouraging. I enjoyed the challenge, though I fear the story might have seemed a bit long. Perhaps Justin will have more than a squeeze for Bill once the plane lands. Again, I’m most grateful.
“It’s looking awful.”
“I know.” Bill looked over his partner’s shoulder at the tiny screen. “I don’t like the look of it.”
“Environment Canada just issued an advisory.”
“That’s nothing. Advisories just mean there’s a chance of a chance of a storm.”
“What are they calling it?” Bill inquired.
“Tropical Storm Fred. It’s a monster; the Advisory says it came up the Mississippi, merged with a Pacific low and then sucked in a system that moved in behind it from Alaska.”
Yes, I well remember him. Like you, I recall details of outline and shade of flesh in the sun. The recollection is bittersweet, and melancholy too - just as your lovely poem is.
I know the sounds and songs you bring to mind, and your words stir sorrow in my heart for places to which neither of us can return. You wrote it beautifully.
Very interesting... someone or something blinded a statue? A case of mistaken identity, or just demonstrating something to a party who needs to know? In either case, I don’t want to annoy that someone...
So sad, that Simon must hide. But not everyone has the brass to be out and proud and defiant at bay at that age. The question is: why should it be necessary? I cannot think Simon is a coward. He’s a survivor.
I’m very glad these open a window on the North American birds for you. The Carolina Wren is actually singing in the woods not far away right now. Thanks so much for reading and considering these.
April 16 actually has an old Appalachian hymn as its inspiration. I’m glad you picked up on that. Those tomatoes are my height now, reaching for the sun.
Thanks so much for reading these and for your thoughts.
Already the cicadas are being replaced by katydids, proclaiming the end of summer. But maybe these lines will make the glow last a little longer. You’re very kind to read these, and to comment.
Thank you for reading these. You are right in saying that the sensual pleasures of summer are best enjoyed when they are shared. Perhaps these lines will help the warmth linger into the autumn.
The pup might have his work cut out for him here. Thank you for reading these and for responding to them. My hope is that you and I can read them in January and feel the warmth and the sunshine.
Thank you, tim. All sorts of strains make up the music of these days. I'm sweeping cicadas off my front steps, too - though soon they will be supplanted by katydids announcing the end of summer. You're very kind to comment on these.
Summer tastes
like warm, blue afternoons
and ghost stories told by campfirelight;
it’s flavored by peach colored clouds before sunrise,
by tangy rainbow clad thunderstorms
or meteors sprinkled
in the stars.
July’s song
is the crunch of fresh beans,
and the sultry alto tanager
blending with a chorus of mournful cicadas
sounding over the food processor
as it transforms basil
to sunlight.