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Parker Owens

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  1. Parker Owens

    Chapter One

    Interesting start. I liked your characters already.
  2. Parker Owens

    Chapter 4

    Even as Kevin adds another layer of memory with Duncan, the other strata of his life define the shape of his landscape. You weave all the strands together so well.
  3. Oh, I like this one! Great idea.
  4. And I suppose that toilet paper and shaving cream were to go in your bathroom at home, right? Sure it was.
  5. So very sad. We lost so many brothers then, and we still lose more now. One reflects that it might have been the narrator dead beneath the soil if not for his tubby frame and devotion to his friend. Yet he survived, and found love, which Denny never did.
  6. Tommy got more than his revenge on Sean. True, Sean was both deceitful and callous, treating Tommy like a cheap garment to be used and thrown aside. In the heat of the moment, Tommy failed to foresee that Sean’s relationship with Bruno could explode with his bit of revenge. But I agree with another reader that it wasn’t Tommy who wrecked the relationship, it was Sean. Tommy just brought it to a conclusion sooner rather than later.
  7. You were so very kind in your comments. Friendships are indeed very powerful, and in this particular case, a great blessing. And if the first two found spots in your mind and heart for a while, then I am delighted. Thank you for reading, and for your comments.
  8. I’m glad these appealed to you. I love the challenge of finding the humanity in the worlds of science and math. I am very grateful you read them, and I appreciate your comments immensely.
  9. Parker Owens

    Brighton Rock

    I can certainly relate to Jeff, and understand his point of view. I liked this story very much. It's sweet and full of possibility, if not hope.
  10. I ran across this ancient video today, and watched, fascinated. I'd only heard this as an audio recording...
  11. Thank you for leaving these with us, tim. I had just a few exchanges with cognac, but I remember them a friendly and warm. Like you, I am sad he is gone.
  12. You are very kind to read these. I’m glad you liked them.
  13. Parker Owens

    part ii

    The snappy back and forth seems to have no visible effect on Skyler, but Daniel will have an ulcer before long. The two seem to be at war, though Skyler appears to be enjoying each and every battle. Can that last?
  14. Parker Owens

    part i

    I remember reading part i a while ago. I liked it then, and like it now. And now a new chapter consume my thinking...better still.
  15. Parker Owens

    The Tale

    Poor Kevin - first to be the butt of office jokes and pranks, then to be swallowed up by the nameless horrors of the copy room bin. I suppose being humorless is a grave offense in and of itself, yet I can’t help feeling sorry for the poor guy.
  16. Parker Owens

    Life Redux

    These are awesome. In number 1, the images of light and its quality permeate each line. Beacons shine, clouds part, and light prevails. I love the phrase “felted gloom.” That’s especially memorable. Number 2 speaks of your care and love for your friend. You write in vivid strokes of a difficult way ahead. Your friend is fortunate that you walk the way with him. Thank you for these.
  17. Parker Owens

    Rule #3

    I have enjoyed this story each and every time I’ve read it. I feel badly that I forgot to comment on it to tell you so. Life can be unconventional, so why shouldn’t this wonderful story end well? Thank you very much for it.
  18. It is do good of you to read these, and to comment so kindly on them. I might blush, and I will certainly smile. I am glad you decided to stroll along with me.
  19. Parker Owens

    Anniversary

    This is an awesome snapshot, a marvelously revealing vignette. “Love making sessions;” what a volume that writes.
  20. Thank you! How good it is that the images in these came through. That doesn’t always happen. You’re very kind to take time to read these, and to comment.
  21. I’m very glad you found these, and happier still that one of these connected to something or someone in your life. Thank you very much for reading and for your comments.
  22. It’s interesting that these out you in mind of Shakespeare; he wrote in pentameter, and these are more lyrical. Your words are very kind, and I’m grateful for your reading these.
  23. You are immensely kind to read these. Thank you,
  24. That's a very kind comment to say it sounds as if an actor on stage could be saying these lines. I am so glad you read these, and enjoyed them.
  25. I am very glad you liked these. Thank you very much for reading.
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