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Thank you for letting us witness the real growth, the real change in both Jason and Corey. How good it was that Corey could calm down and work past the visceral reaction he had. He could see Jason's pain and sincerity the moment they were together again. That each can recognize the love they share and the need to trust as essential, bodes well for the happy ending I have been hoping for. Wonderful story!
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Fletcher's eyes and heart are fully opened. He has changed so much since they went out to dinner so long ago. So has Tomas. Surely it is love and delight in one another that makes their budding and flowering happen. And it is such fun to write about. Thank you for your encouraging words, Gary...P
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The tradition seems similar to the Central American. The party was partly Tomas and partly Fletcher...and ultimately about then both of them. Thanks so much for your comment and response!
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A lovely Halloween, and what a treat! Your response made me smile! Thank you! P
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You describe Tomas' experience, and Fletcher's so well. It is decidedly a pleasure to write about. Thank you for taking up this occasional tale again.
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These two academics are certainly learning about one another, and are catching up as they find out what they have been missing. It is fun and rewarding to write about them. Thank you for your encouragement!
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There is tension, there is argument and estrangement. Jae had to fight or die, and he doesn't think he had any choice. Dave is without Jae at just the wrong moment. The moment when everything that made the sky shine went black. And now it is far too late. What a story, tim. I will have to find some kind of exotic distraction before the next chapter is out!
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Thanks for the review, whenever it comes! In this case, it's not the FBI but Homeland Security; the real problem is that they crossed the line into Seneca territory without asking first. In a shadowy kind of game, that's a big error, and one that played out in Daniel and Ibi's favor. Thanks for reading and responding to his!
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Such a feeling as you describe can only feel terribly uncomfortable. Our predator is clearly having difficulty with that discomfort, but is also experiencing some direct discomforts of being exiled from his residence. The sad truth is that everyone who commits evil starts out as a real human being. Did they ever stop, and if so, can they ever reclaim some humanity? Thanks for reading and for your excellent response....
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A great story, and a convincing one, too. Artfully told, and your descriptions put the reader directly into the scene. I can see Sven, and Nels; smell the dry earth, and the rain, too. And their love for one another is beautiful.
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Whatever its label, it's lovely!
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"Do you think we have enough?" It was mid-afternoon, and Associate Professor of Comparative Religion Tomás Aquino stood in the kitchen, examining the large wooden bowl on the counter before him. It was piled high with wrapped candies, mini-chocolate bars, and other treats, in anticipation of the evening's visitors. This quantitative matter was not the sort of question he usually dealt with. "I really don't know," his shorter, slighter boyfriend admitted. He stroked his neatly cropped beard wit
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What a grand start to a new tale. Poor Dan - no fun being second fiddle to a riding association. At least the election isn't too far away. But really - political death by cell phone! Isn't there something in the user's manual about how not to set it off in your pocket?
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Chapter 30 Family Matters
Parker Owens commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 30 Family Matters
Fantaaaaastic! Great that Warren had already begun a turn in his life - he seems to have gotten at least part of his head squared away. Perhaps he and Adelin will hit it off right away...seems like it. You wrote that restaurant scene with such grace and humor. I loved it. The math nerd in me hope that the effect of finding more mates is geometric, if not exponential... Should be fun! Can't wait for more... -
Good for Zac for letting Adrian go his own way. Nothing would be gained for either boy by doing otherwise. Good for Zac's parents for being understanding of their gay sons. And finally, good for Zac for getting out to a movie with another gay guy - someone who isn't afraid. Omari may be a nice guy, but something tells me he's not the guy. or am I wrong? Let's have another chapter really soon, and then maybe we'll know....
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How wonderfully you finished this! You made my heart smile - and the rest of me, too. Thank you!
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Thank you for this excellent chapter. Poor Kip is in an increasingly untenable position. Jon must know something, but what does the other man know? Yet it is clear that Jon is about to make Kip as miserable as possible. And And why is Jon still employed by AJ? Is there a clause in his contract that lets him do so? On the other hand, the moments of happiness Kip experienced were priceless. Very beautifully done - like a rose, perhaps.
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An excellent poem. You state the case so well. One small word can change so much. But so can another change it back again. Beautiful, and true.
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I wondered, and still do, if atonement is possible for the predator, and by extension, for anyone. But that was the point of writing this story, in part, buT. I am glad you see a spark of humanity glowing somewhere in the darkness here. For perhaps the predator can experience that once again, as he must have once upon a time, before he chose to snuff that fire out. Many thanks for your generous and supportive words.
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This is a wonderful chapter. The track team and the mall - both terrific scenes, convincingly written. What happens to Billy and Lonnie - and to the rest of the family - may be difficult to bear, but will be good, I think, at least if this chapter is anything to go by. You are writing a splendid tale. Thank you.
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Thanks, Carlos for your really generous words. This isn't an easy thing to read, let alone experience. The predator isn't someone we can like or cheer for, but perhaps we can hope for his redemption, as you say. I appreciate your kindness in your words, and your generosity in support. Your response encourages and informs - Thanks a million - P
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Livin' in the Future
Parker Owens commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Livin' in the Future
Of course I like this chapter. How can I not? You give me an Everglades tour, a concert, and the stories - and promises - of love. If I see he's not my boyfriend one more time, I will surely laugh loudly enough to embarrass myself. Beautifully done! -
Oh, hell. More leftovers from the Church of the Criminally Insane? But I think Chuck answered his own question about what he might do. Nice hearing Chuck diplomatically try to answer all Sarah's questions. I feel badly that Chuck and Don are resolved upon breaking up - but there is a kind of autumnal melancholy about their inevitable parting which you convey so well. Beautifully done.
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Yup, you have it right. The predator is in his predicament precisely because it is his fault, his choices. He tried to set up Ted and got the tables turned on him. If he'd changed, that wouldn't have happened. As Def suggested, I think it is what he chooses to do next that matters. Thanks so much for reading this story, and for your excellent comments. I appreciate your words very much.
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Def, I really appreciate this review. Predator was so dreadful, I found it hard to even continue writing. He has been destroyed, but you are so right that his specious reasoning of blaming his parents cannot stand. It is what he does next that matters. Glad you are looking forward to another chapter!
