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Chapter 14 - Breaking Point
Parker Owens commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Breaking Point
Jake endures his isolation while Nic appears not to care about his own social quarantine. Nic intrigues me because I wonder more and more if it’s even possible for him to allow some kind of connection with Jake that goes beyond convenient sex. In a way, it’s Jake who seems more comfortable and confident, and less vulnerable. Great chapter. -
Yevgeny may still be playing the long game, a very deep game, biding his time and counting on CJ rising in the political world. Or maybe the man is just going to enjoy Idaho. Not sure how much information was divulged on that flight, but let us hope Spike and his colleagues find it useful.
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I really like how you steer this poem between joy and pain, celebration and sorrow. Somehow, I’m minded of Sylla and Charybdis.
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Thank you very much for taking time to read this. Your kind encouragement is much appreciated.
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I really appreciate your thoughts. I hesitated a long time before posting this. I’m grateful you chose to read it and I hope there might be a tomorrow. Thanks again.
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Thank you for reading, and for your comment.
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@AC Benus: Thank you for highlighting what might be the central strophe to this entire set. It is in our design that we are made good; and in our connection that we perfect the vision of our designer.
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Estampie I don’t mind you speaking the blunt truth, so whisper me of your heart’s desire; tell me how you want me, as my want mirrors yours, as the lock longs for its one true key, equal in yearning for your entry. Build in us oneness from our pieces, lay us down connected, tongue in groove, the time for imagining and framing all past; for now is the moment of fusion, and the fullness of the desig
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You’re more than kind in your comments. It’s wonderful that you can see and sense the dance between lovers described here. I’m very grateful you read this and thought it good.
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Liam has had several good things happen to him; Britney has departed, Aiden listens to him, TJ and Chrissy have behaved like solid friends, and Mark has come for a visit. Liam might have some chance of hope. You have built Liam (and us) up - what might happen to precipitate his fall again into fear and isolation? I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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I cannot help but echo the feelings I encountered in this.
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Like Eric, Andy had me sold at “cake.” I liked listening to Andy, Rob and Eric talk things through, sometimes directly, sometimes in roundabout fashion, but always caring about one another.
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Well, if Northman wasn’t livid and seething before, he is now. And now the Russians will be coming after CJ too! This operation sounds like it could turn out yo be uglier than Spike is making out. I’m with Ozzie: CJ needs to be very, very careful.
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Thanks very much for sharing this with us. It’s delightful.
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And so Ackerman and Kevin share one another’s pain, one another’s stories, and maybe just a hint of possibility. Maybe Kevin will find a way forward, and he’ll have Aaron to thank for it. And if that comes, then he won’t be all against the world anymore. Great chapter.
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I’m glad you enjoyed this, and thank you for your nouns. I think each of them fits wonderfully. Thank you for continuing to read these.
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You’re so very kind and good to comment in this way. Frederick’s poetry was magnificent, so if this was but an echo of his work, then I can smile. And who could not help but want to look ahead to those days when we are masked and distant no more? Thank you very, very much.
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I’m grateful and delighted for your response. Thank you.
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You’re most welcome. Thank you!
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Saltarello Do you yearn with ten kinds of desire, as I hum with anticipation, tuned to your deft caress, your strong embrace, your heat; and do you need skin on bare skin, and soft kisses before you enter me? You hold me in perfect harmony; the room hushed, our breathing the sweet notes; your knowing fingers play me like an instrument, lips touching shoulder blades, feet tangled, and I thrill, awaitin
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Chapter 12 - Shots Fired
Parker Owens commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Shots Fired
Of course I’ll want to know the contents of Meg’s latest tweet. More importantly, I’m waiting on more opportunities for Jake and Nic to spend time together becoming more comfortable with each other, not just having excellent sex. Something tells me Jake could be the kind of friend Nic needs. -
I felt windswept and wave-battered in reading this. You wrote artfully that I would sense the insensible stone.
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It is; in renaissance times it took strength and energy to do such an intimate dance correctly. Thanks very much for reading and for your response.
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I hope the change of tempo was okay, and that you enjoyed the ride. Thank you very much for reading!
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Your adjectives made me smile. Perhaps these hit the right notes after all. I’m very grateful for your response. Thank you. And yes, there’s a little more on the way.
