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Fantastic chapter. I’m sorry that Lewis and Sebastian have separated as they did make a great couple. I’m glad that Lewis decided to go back to Australia to face whatever was waiting for him, once he got back he found out that he wasn’t going to face anything due to the issues in Singapore as the investigation found that he was right about everything. I’m glad that he is now the owner of the treehouse that his brother had built with his friends, when Christmas Island was invaded he and his nephew went to the treehouse and stayed there until they were able to get away. The army took control of the treehouse after the invasion was over and have recently said that they no longer needed it so ownership was reverted back to the original owners, and then put into Lewis’s name as the owner. He has decided that he would move there and then decide what he would do after that, as far as his knighthood and other awards he told Kylie to tell the GG to stick them where the sun doesn’t shine and Kylie said she would put into nicer words. I hope Lewis can reconsider his marriage to Sebastian and he figures out what he’s going to do with himself now and in the future.
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I agree that this is a very good and well written article. The story is an old one in that there’s a lot of people that wish they had the opportunity to change their lives for the better. Rudi made the right decision when he was offered a chance to make things better for himself, the offer was to either accept the life he felt that he deserved or he could return to his own life that he’s living already. Rudi is a call center manager with no chance for advancement and he is alone with himself as he doesn’t have anyone to share his life with. When he was asked to make the choice to accept the offer or not he chose not and all of a sudden he’s back in his apartment with his high school crush, I say best of luck with his new life.
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Chapter 118 A Long Walk on a Short Pier
Butcher56 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 118 A Long Walk on a Short Pier
Fantastic chapter. I’m glad that Robbie is telling Alex that he isn’t going to Florida with him & Luke. I seriously don’t think there’s a cousin that lives near Disney World as Alex said, Robbie thinks that as well. I hope Nicola doesn’t tell Sue about what Robbie said about possibly taking his own life, although I think she needs to know what he’s thinking about and try to get him some help. As far as Alex is concerned I agree with Robbie that it’s a little bit late to try making amends now and not thinking about his actions prior to the act. As a result of Alex’s actions Robbie was hospitalized again and just like the other times the doctors are sure that there’s a problem they just haven’t been able to figure out what it is that is causing Robbie to pass out. I think I know who will be called when Sue talks to Mr Andrews about the situation with Robbie. -
Another fantastic chapter. I hope that Lewis and the others are able to stay out of sight until things cool down from the incident in Singapore. I’m glad that Sebastian did buy the island in the Mediterranean Sea, this way they’re able to be hidden from the public view. I’m glad that Sgt Lister is getting better since having to have his damaged spleen removed and he’s resting comfortably in a private hospital in Darwin. I’m sorry that Lewis had to resign from the Admistrators position on Christmas Island and had his titles removed as well because he took action when Adam was framed by someone in Singapore while he sat on a bench in a park. The whole thing was to get Australian government officials to reduce or remove the sanctions that are in place. I can’t wait to read more of the story.
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The Young Farmers Become Young Fathers
Butcher56 commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in The Young Farmers Become Young Fathers
Fantastic chapter. I’m sorry that Ji became so ill and passed away due to the illness. Becky is very concerned and doesn’t quite understand what is happening and where her mom was, she’s so young it may be years before she fully understands fully what happened to her mom. I hope that everyone is happy being able to stay together and it’s legal because David married Ji so they could stay together. -
Fantastic chapter. I agree with the line try a fidget spinner next time, Justin was so right about that one. I hope that Justin is able to get everything under control so that he can be the best mimic he can be as well as not losing Taryn.
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Fantastic chapter and start to another story. It is great to see the return of Lewis, Sebastian and the others from before. I don’t think it’s right that Sgt. Adam Lister is now missing after some guy sits down on the same park bench Sgt Lister was sitting on then leans over and kisses him, Sgt Lister was arrested and beaten which caused a fractured rib, bruised kidney as well as other injuries. Lewis was able to get him out of jail and took him to a private hospital where they diagnosed his injuries, when Lewis left him at the hospital he saw that there was a police officer outside his hospital room. With Sgt Lister having diplomatic immunity he should not have been in jail in the first place, then after Lewis left him at the hospital he disappeared and he can’t be found. Lewis is really mad now and is calling his boss because apparently the local police don’t believe that Sgt Lister has immunity. I can’t wait to read more of the story.
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Fantastic chapter Cia. It seems that they have an ally in the fight to get the crew back plus shut down the experiments on the humans and other spiecies they encounter at the Brox. Also the need of Rilecca to undo the controls of her fathers on other planets. They have just learned that they are all children compared to the Elites as they age differently than others do. Can’t wait to read what else they have instore for the group as well as the Elites.
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Fantastic chapter. I hope Worthington and the soldiers survive the attack by prince zorac, as it seemed to me that zorac was about to win until Worthington threw the sphere of white enegy at zorac and it hit him square in the abdomen and it burned him and then spread out covering more of the princes body. I hope everyone survives this attack and the door is not permanently open between the worlds now. I can’t wait to read what happens next.
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Great chapter. It’s a sad fact that so many people don’t want to be around the disabled, they don’t take the persons feelings into account. I speak from experience because my son has Lymphedema in his right arm which makes it about 5 times what it should look like, I also took care of my grandmother who was confined to a wheelchair due to two factors, one she was the principal at a local elementary school and was in her office when the ceiling caved in on her causing her to have a stroke, two after she had the stroke she found out that she had ALS or Lou Gehrig’s disease which is a form of muscular distrophy. I never knew her before she was in the wheelchair, I took care of her for the last five or six years she was alive. Even then people would stare and shy away from us when ever we went somewhere, I just wish that my sons could have known her as she passed away just four months after my youngest son was born. The chapter reminds me of the way people act when they find out that someone is disabled, like Max is saying that he may not want to be friends with Issac because he is in a wheelchair. Max feels like he would have to worry about Issac all the time he’s with him and his friends, he said he doesn’t think he will be able to keep up with them due to the fact that they’re very active and into sports. The thing that I got was that Max would like to be friends with Issac except he doesn’t know if he could handle being around him because he has enough to keep his mind going all the time. Issac understands that and hopes that they could be friends even though he’s in the wheelchair, and he’s willing to give him the time to think about it. I’m glad that Issac said that he would still go watch Max play his sport on Saturday.
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Quite an interesting and amazing story about the two brothers who made the trip by ship to Australia in order to start a new life. They came with very little belongings and money, although they did have some livestock to help them get a start on a farm. Once they arrived in Ceduna they purchased a wagon and seeds as well as getting the deed to the original land of just over 20,000 acres, it took them 2 days to get to the property by wagon as this was the early 1900’s. Once there they started building first the paddocks for the livestock and areas for farming as well as a large vegetable garden, then came the original homestead. All in all it was the great work of Edwin & Archie that made up the original plan for the land when they arrived, today they have a total of three farms that used to be 8 with a total of 59,570 acres all of which is owned and operated by family. Thank you for the great story.
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Amazing chapter. I’m so glad that Edwin, Archie, Simeon, & Martha have their parents and sister Beatrice there with them now. They’re one big happy family again, now that they have everyone in Australia with them along with Florence and her 3 sons. The community Christmas party sounds like a great idea as it gives everyone a chance to get together with each other in the hamlet.
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Awesome chapter. The hamlet is really starting to get bigger with more families moving into the area. I’m wondering if Edwin will need to build a bigger building for the church services or if he’ll expand the school house which he may need to do anyway with more families with school age children moving into the area. I can only imagine what they will do once the rest of the family arrives, I know they have already expanded the house in the hamlet to accommodate the growing family since they weren’t expecting their cousins to be there. I’m glad that Beatrice has gotten better and will be coming with their mother when she gets things settled with their father whether he survives or not. If he gets better he will be coming to Australia with his family.
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I agree she may be a ruse trying to get them to trust her so she could get them caught. If she’s telling the truth about wanting to help them then they have a better chance of getting away and completing the mission. We’ll have to wait until the next chapter to see what happens next.
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New Friends – Then Tragedy
Butcher56 commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in New Friends – Then Tragedy
Very excellent chapter. I think it’s sad that Darren’s parents couldn’t get their own act together because if they had they might’ve gotten to be part of the lives of their son and his wife and sons and now daughter. I’m sorry that Darren was taken from his family by a truck driver who just had to have a cigarette at that particular moment. Now not only will Darren’s children grow up without him they’ll also be without their mother who is going to have a tough time ahead as even during the late 80s the treatment for cancer wasn’t as advanced as it is today. I’m glad that David and PT were able to buy the farm from Drew who had the power of attorney for his parents and he handled the sale of the farm without his parents actually knowing that it had been sold. I’m glad that Drew was able to get a settlement from the trucking company and their insurance company, at least this way the children will have something to help pay for whatever they may need. -
Another fantastic chapter. The story is continuing to get better with each chapter as more of the Cameron family arrives in Australia. The rest of the family should arrive around Christmas time which would make the Hamlet a bit more lively. When they arrive they will meet Florence and her sons for the first time as well as the other families that live around them. I look forward to reading more chapters as they come out.
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Fantastic chapter. I’m surprised that Archie & Edwin’s parents sent the cousins ahead, of course it’s early yet for them to come. The Yumbarra Homestead is growing as they continue to get more livestock and family members every few months. I think Edwin is going to have to teach Florence to drive without almost hitting a few people while driving through Ceduna and then having some issues driving home to get Archie to take the buggy down to meet Edwin, Daniel & Charlie due to the fact that they had brought more sheep they had brought with them when Edwin & Archie’s parents sent Daniel & Charlie ahead. Soon they’ll have two houses, community center, blacksmith, school, produce stand and the paddocks for the livestock as well as the garden and fields for the farming. As Edwin pointed out they’re running out of places to build anything else around their house.
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Another great chapter, it was a great thing that the guys did for Chatri and Hellen by babysitting their 3 year old son while they were at the hospital because Hellen went into labor with their second son. I’m glad that they also decided to have a graduation party for Gina and not make a big deal about Ozzie graduating from George Washington University as this was his third degee.
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Another great chapter. It’s great that Issac & Max are getting to the point where they are going to meet for the first time. I can’t wait to read if they continue their friendship after they meet.
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I have to agree that this was a very very good chapter. I was sad that Brad was in a vehicle that hit an IED, at least he survived along with most of his unit there were a few casualties. CJ knew that he had to get to Germany to be there for Brad and nothing or no one was going to stand in his way or else he’d run them over. I understand why his dads were saying that he had classes and he shouldn’t just up and leave since this was his first semester. I’m glad that Tom went with CJ so he could be there for his son, even though CJ only stayed for a few days he made sure that Tom and Brad knew that the prosthetics Brad would need to be able to walk again would be paid for and they would be the best that they could be, and not just the standard ones the VA pays for. Thanks for the great chapter.
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Excellent chapter and story. It seems like one of the children has taken after the parents in that he is in love with another male. The daughter Ann is the biggest obstacle in everyone’s life as she has always been very vocal about anything and everything. The night of the big dinner the children were informed of the true relationships of their parents, that their mothers were and are in love with each other as well as the dads being in love with each other and have been since 1955 so they have been in love with their significant other for almost 30 years now.
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Chapter 117 The Happy Clappers
Butcher56 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 117 The Happy Clappers
I agree with everyone who has commented so far. This chapter was a great chapter as it made me think about what Robbie is going through thinking he’s going to die, then there’s the situation at home. Between Don and Alex I don’t know which ones worse, with Don the thing is that he can’t accept that Robbie is gay so he’s doing everything he can to change him to being straight by bringing the so called church people in especially Mr Symmonds, then you have Alex who has been a closet case for years and now he’s supposedly told his dad that Robbie was his boyfriend so he wants to kill Robbie for being gay. Alex’s big idea is for him his brother Luke and Robbie is to run away to Florida saying that they could stay with his cousin for awhile. I hope that Robbie can figure things out before they get any worse. The situation with Don is going to get a lot worse before they get any better and I think Don and Sue are going to get divorced over the situation with Robbie and Don getting involved with the church. -
This was a very excellent chapter. Fran knows that she is needed to help to find the other seers even though she is a child she is a seer herself. She knew that Tristan was there to help her to be more powerful in order to increase her power in order to help her find not only her mother but also Cheryl. I’m glad that Tristan was able to see that there had been no evil in Fran’s room and he asked her to call her mom and that way everyone would believe her that she had seen her mom. Her mom is going to try to explain what is going on with the seers.
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Excellent chapter, I’m glad to see that Jacob has decided to not let the prosthetic foot get in the way of the rest of his life. He’s decided that he’s going to conquer Mt Kilimanjaro again and he’s going with two other guys he has known most of his life, one is his Swahili brother the other is the friend of Jabari. This was a great story of preservation and determination, Jacob was young when he started climbing mountains with his uncle who is a Major in the Australian Army. Thank you for the great story.
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Excellent chapter as usual. I feel bad for both of these young men as they both have suffered an injury by accidentally getting to close to the edge of the trail and sliding down into a large boulder. Will suffered a dislocated shoulder,while Jacob suffered from a possible broken foot they both knew that they were going to be in for a bit of a wait since neither one of them was in any shape to try to climb back up to the trail. Jacob figured they had about 2 to 3 days to wait before they were missed, so after Jacob reset Will’s shoulder he wrapped his foot, after awhile Will started to get sick to his stomach and needed to throw up so Jacob got him outside the tent where he could get sick after he vomited he passed out after Jacob got him back in the tent he checked Wills head and found a contusion behind his left ear so Jacob started to read from the first aid book he had in his backpack, he figured Will had a concussion and so Jacob started treating him like he did have one. By the time the rescuers reached them it had been about five days and they started hearing voices calling them from above and below them so Will said he would try to get to the beach area and find someone who could help Jacob as it seems like he did more damage to his foot than a bad sprain. When Will returned he had two adults with him who were paramedics and when they heard about Will having a dislocated shoulder they did an assessment of it and said someone did put it back into place, Will told them that Jacob had done it, then they went to Jacob and started checking his foot which he and Will already figured out that he had done more than sprain his ankle or foot. I hope that they’re both going to be alright, we’ll have to wait until the next chapter to find out what more Jacob did to his foot as well as whether Will’s shoulder is alright. I’m sure that Nat is beginning to wonder where the guys are since he hasn’t gotten a call or text from Jacob yet.
