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No apologies necessary! What a great chapter! I love how Jackson and Luke are trying to figure things out, maybe getting a glimpse of how things could be from Charlie and Simon. I'm happy that Luke is starting to become his own person, instead of becoming one of Cindy's emotionally void robots! What Aiden and Matt did just had me shaking my head. To sandbag ur own team for a cheater?? I just don't get it. I think they got exactly what they deserved, although personally I think they deserved worse! Lol!! Great chapter, and looking forward to reading more!!
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I'm also glad the visit went well. I hope at the end of thos, Alan rethinks his relationship with Peter. I don't think he's a very good person. Very selfish and self centered. Anyone that doesn't realize the severity of the situation and the fact that the kids come first doesn't get any sympathy or respect from me. The boys didn't choose this situation, and I'm sure wouldn't appreciate being looked after by someone who thinks of them as a burden.
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Chapter 15 - Out of the closet, into the fire
jaysalmn commented on Avangelion's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Out of the closet, into the fire
Great chapter! Looks like this Tina girl is gonna be some trouble! Great idea to add some new drama. I'm still very skeptical of Anikin. When Dominic asked him about the hotel and Tamaki gave his answer, I wonder if Tamaki would lie for Anikin. Maybe I just have trust issues! Lol!! So, the gay conversation went well with Dom's mother. Very interested to see how things go when its revealed that Anikin is the guy he's dating. As always, looking forward to reading more!! -
Great start! I remember Liam from the other story, and I didn't care for Alek then either! I agree that Liam better call Corey. Corey will be extremely upset if he doesn't! I can already tell this is gonna be one of those really frustrating stories as we try to get Liam to kick that asshole to the curb and stick with it! I'm up for the challenge! We need to find Liam a good, honest man....and that's definitely NOT Alek!
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I'm sorry, but I just can't continue. It makes me almost nauseous that after what happened, they are all "oh, I love you so much". Maybe I'm the only gay man who believes this, but if I'm not enough for my partner, he can go fuck himself. I'm also NOT sharing my man with anyone, male of female. I've always felt this way, so their just being teenagers is BS. Oh well, better to get turned off the story now rather than 20 chapters in. Best wishes on the rest of the story.
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It started as a good chapter, bit for me personally the threeway ruined it. I don't necessarily look at it as cheating, but I really question Brian and Jeff's "love" if they think what they did is acceptable. For me, it was a huge let down to what was a really good chapter. Kinda lost respect for Brian and Jeff.
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Chapter 1 - This Can’t Be Real
jaysalmn commented on Bndmetl's story chapter in Chapter 1 - This Can’t Be Real
A sad and wonderful chapter all rolled into one! I absolutely love how close Will and Liam are, and how Will comforts Liam after finding out about his dad. Looking forward to reading more! -
Good chapter. That Mrs Lynton is a horrible person. Hopefully she gets put in her place eventually. I really feel sorry for the kids. This whole time all Alan and Peter have been doing is complaining on how much of a burden the boys are. Its not their fault they're in the situation they are in. I'm sure if the kids knew how much trouble they are for their self centered uncles, they would gladly go with their grandparents, no matter how awful and hateful they are. Its an unfortunate situation, and Alan and Peter are far from being my favorites right now.
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Great story! Jamie's a great guy, and I love how much Blaine loves him! Jamie's mom isn't the worst, but think I could only handle someone like her in small doses! Lol! Only thing I think the story missed is what ever became of Ste. I would like to think he got some well deserved karma for how he treated Jamie.
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Still loving the story! I enjoy reading about Mitch and Tony! I'm so happy that Mitch decided to go to the reunion and take Tony with him. Its great that he has support from the majority of the family. I loved the little interaction between Tony and Gary at the end of the chapter. What Tony said to him had me literally laughing out loud! Great chapter and looking forward to reading more!!
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Chapter 35 The Winds of Change
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 35 The Winds of Change
Wow! What an action packed chapter! I was on the edge of my seat reading! I'm so happy they got rid of Reznick! Warren showed up just in time. He's beyond redeeming himself, he's now a hero! I am SOOO enjoying this story! -
Great start. Looks like Tony and Mitch are gonna be quite the entertaining couple! Can't wait for their journey to continue!
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Great ending! I'm so happy Zac and Austin got together. I thimk Zac genuinely loves Austin. Who wouldn't? Their playfulness at the studio was cute, and it was cool that neither of them took it too far. Too bad Adrian turned out to be a run of the mill closet case, destined to get married and sneak out to the glory holes and park bathrooms when the wife isn't around. I have to say I laughed SOOO hard at Lonnie jumping out of the box in a speedo at Jimmy's bachelor party! Great story and great ending! A very enjoyable read!
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Chapter 21 - Begins Part 2
jaysalmn commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Begins Part 2
Great chapter! I have come to like Jackson and his friends so much over the last few chapters. They've really come around and have matured so much. Too bad Cindy still has to be a megabitch, but hopefully Henry will put his foot down...and maybe give her a swift kick in the ass! Lol!! I agree that the whole group should be on the same page as far as Jackson and Luke go. Then there won't be any slip ups or secret keeping. That never ends up good. As always, looking forward to reading more. -
I'm sorry, but I have to disagree. These people are horrible assholes! They treated Tracy like shit, then just went on with their happy lives being one big happy family after Tracy left, and then put him on a guilt trip after he comes back like he's the one who caused it! I don't give a fuck what Alex was going through. He could have at least stop by for 5 minutes and explain, or use a land line like another person suggested?? Now Tracy is trying to figure out how HE can fix it??? The fact that Tracy is feeling guilty is ridiculous and nobody even acknowledging that they did anything wrong would make a normal person feel sick! I'm out of this one!
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Great chapter! Even though Kenny got a BIG dose of well deserved karma, I always knew he would come around. All those times Zac caught him looking over towards his house I knew it was only a matter of time. I'm so happy Zac finally told Adrian to get lost, even though he had to be a complete asshole to Austin to do it. Zac finally realized he was never gonna be anything more than Adrian's dirty secret. Now, the big question is will Austin forgive him or tell him to go to hell? Zac has A LOT of work to do to regain Austin's trust.
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Return to The Underground
jaysalmn commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Return to The Underground
I've been really getting into this story, but if ur going back to the whole underground racing thing I'm out. All the ridiculousness with the racing and the guns is why I quit reading the last one. -
Chapter 14 - A little piece of heaven
jaysalmn commented on Avangelion's story chapter in Chapter 14 - A little piece of heaven
So happy to see a new chapter! Anikin is pulling out all the stops, isn't he? I still don't believe him as far as the hotel subject goes. If I were Dominic, I would confirm the story with Tamaki before getting too comfortable. At least Anikin knows he has A LOT of work to do to regain Dominic's trust, and I'm happy that Dominic isn't the type to just forgive and forget at the drop of a hat. Great chapter and, as always, looking forward to reading more! -
99.9% of the chapter was great! Then Zac had to turn into a grade A prick! I hope to hell Adrian fucks him over again, because he more than deserves it! If I were Austin, I'd never speak to the asshole again!
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Well, that definitely wasn't the chapter that I had expected. I find myself asking more questions and disliking just about every character besides Tracy. I don't blame him one bit for leaving. His so-called friends treated him like shit and turned their backs on him...AND HE DIDN'T EVEN DO ANYTHING WRONG!! The biggest disappointment was Callen. I hate to sound heartless, but what goes around comes around and Callen got his dose of karma. Wtf with Alex all of a sudden having a toddler??? Its like I'm reading a totally different story. I hope to hell Tracy is EXTREMELY careful with forgiving people. They treated him like shit with no reason, and really none of them deserve forgiveness. I also hope that he calls them all out too!
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Great chapter! I absolutely love Austin. It was nice to get some backstory on him from his mother. He's a great guy, and Zac would be lucky to have him. I agree that Zac has to prove to Austin that he wants something more than just to be his subject for an article. I hope he earns that trust from Austin and doesn't fuck it up. Very surprised about Billy and Lonnie. I have a lot of respect for Billy for waiting to go all the way until its with someone he loves. As always, looking forward to reading more!!
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Loved this chapter! Zac and Austin are sooo cute together. Pretty obvious if Zac's teammates notice. That kiss at the end....omg MY heart was fluttering!! Lol!! I'm hoping that Zac had made a mistake and that maybe Austin is his door number three.
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Brett Gets a New Boyfriend
jaysalmn commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in Brett Gets a New Boyfriend
I would have to agree that Brett's mother definitely knew what was going on before she got home. She can't be a doctor and not know. I'm happy for Brett and Billy, but they have so many issues and secrets to work through. I hope Billy calling Brett Anthony at the end of the chapter means he has some sort of clue that Brett buys drugs from Max. I also worry about Dustin's situation with the new neighbor. The guy seems very sketchy, and poor Dustin is just begging for attention and love from anyone at this point! A lot for u to clear up -
I'm very surprised that nothing has been said to Alan and Lisa's parents about what happened. I agree that maybe they will be a big help as far as Craig's parents. I'm starting to get the feeling that Peter is more on the selfish, self centered side. All he's been trying to do this chapter is to find someone to dump the kids on. I understand he wants time with Alan, but with this situation kids come first. Not the best side of Peter.
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Wow! That was a drama filled ending to the chapter! Loved every minute of it!! I really enjoyed the way u exposed Sasha as the evil bitch she really is! So many questions that need to be answered after her rant. What's the deal with Callen? Callen and Jase? Was Alex really with Trace because he couldn't have Callen? Omg, I'm overflowing with curiosity!! I'll just be over here sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter! Lol!
