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Well, this chapter had a great twist with Austin. I totally agree with Jimmy. Zac is just gonna end up getting hurt with Adrian. Zac needs to close that door, padlock it, nail it, then brick over it! Lol! Adrian is a lost cause, living in his own self centered world. I do, however, like Austin. The fact that he's so shy is cute. I also like the way Zac was flirting with him. I'm keeping my fingers crossed on this one!
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Liked the chapter. I agree that Billy's dad might have already figured out who Billy was talking about. I like the conversations when its just Billy and his dad. If Billy would listen instead of jumping to his own conclusions, I think he'd learn a lot more from their talks. I still wanna kno what Amanda was talking about when she told Billy a couple chapters ago that they make enough money off of Brett. Drugs is the only thing I could think of and was kinda hoping Billy would have found something when he was looking around Brett's room. As always, looking forward to reading more!
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For me personally, this was one of the best chapters yet! I kno I've kinda talked Jackson's friends down in past reviews, but they have definitely redeemed themselves in how they so quickly accepted Jackson and Luke's relationship without even having to think about it. Even Ally seemed to have realized how she's been acting. Very ironic how the kids seem to be growing and maturing and Cindy seems to be regressing. No big shocker there. The church going, god loving people are usually the meanest, most hypocritical. I hope Henry went up one side and down the other with her. No excuse for her actions or what she said to Jackson's parents. A horrible person all the way around! That being said, as always, I look forward to reading more!
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Well, that was a disappointing "date". I think Zac is looking at this situation all wrong. What if Omari is Zac's door number 3?? I was disappointed in Zac for leaving Omari and Irene just standing there in the middle of the mall. I feel really bad for Omari. He chose to want to date Zac, and he gets a slap in the face. He doesn't owe Adrian a damn thing. He doesn't deserve to be hurt and jealous! For what?? He made his asshole descision to stay away because of his daddy. I still say Zac should move on. That aside, I thought Billy's reaction to Omari and how he was acting around him was hilarious! Billy is a very comical character. Personally, much more likeable than Zac is at this point.
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Wow! What a sad and happy story all rolled into one! I was always rooting for Ben and Jake to get back together. The sad part was Richard, Lee and the kids were collateral damage. Neither Ben nor Jake could be blamed considering the circumstances. Great story!!
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What a great, dramatic scene! I love that Ryan stood up for himself. Too many stories have the character just lying there being a doormat. It had to have taken a lot to do what Brady did. I have a lot of respect for him, although I think he totally deserved the fist to the chin! Lol! I hope we hear more about Ryan and Brady.
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Good, although frustrating chapter. What the hell is Elli doing anyway? Is he fucking with Tyler's head on purpose?? I hope this is where Tyler finally gets the chance to get all of the hurt, anger, and frustration out. I, for one, wouldn't even be giving Elli the time of day at this point.
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Great chapter! I'm so happy that Zac's parents were ok with Billy and Lonnie. Also glad that going back to school went way better than he imagined. I'm looking forward to movie night. I like Irene and Omari is definitely crushing on Zac. So, Marty is a complete moron! In so many words he told Zac not to give up on Adrian. So how long is Zac supposed to wait for Adrian to grow a pair and stand up to his father?? 2 months? 4 months? 5 years? 10 years?? Has Marty never heard of the old saying "don't beat a dead horse?" Zac is doing the right thing by closing that small chapter and moving on to find someone that isn't afraid to be who they are.
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I hate to admit it, but I agree with Amanda. Even though she bullies Dustin, she's still protective over him when it comes to others. I agree that Billy treats Dustin like his number 2, inky hanging around with him when Brett isn't around. I feel bad for Dustin and think Billy is an ass for treating his so called best friend that way. For me, Billy isn't as likeable in this round as he was in the last ones.
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I, too, am happy it was just a dream. I actually quit reading it and read the comments to find out it was just a dream.
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Omg, what a great chapter!!!! I'm so happy that Alex and Tracy are finally on the same page! Now what to do about that bitch Sasha!!
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I hope Alex didn't actually say it to be an asshole, but I'm guessing he really didn't kno it was Callen's brother that made the sculpture. I can understand how Tracy could take it that way tho, with their history and all. I think Tracy should absolutely tell Callen about Sasha ASAP! From the sound of it, everybody knows she's a megabitch! Tracy would have everyone to back up what he's saying. I'm kinda surprised that Callen would fall for that anyway. He pretty much saw how she was treating Tracy. That alone would have pissed me off if I had been Callen. Maybe something for Tracy to confront him with.
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Great start! I love that Tracy and Callen are so close. What can I say about Alex except WOW!! Ur description of him definitely got my attention. Seems like he's changed a lot, and fortunately for the better. Can't help but notice that Alex was maybe checking Tracy out when they were reintroduced. Can't wait to read more!!
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Great chapter! I'm so happy that Zac has come to the realization that he is the same sweet, big hearted person he always has been...just gay. I also agree with him that Adrian can go to hell! I'd be mad as hell about that whole situation too. Who the hell needs someone that's gonna leave u holding the bag when its their fault ur there in the first place??
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Omg, Dustin's world is so heartbreaking! I feel so bad about what he has to go through day after day, and how he's treated by his whole family. No child deserves that, and definitely not Dustin. I nearly cried when he told Billy he was the only one who loves him. A great, but very sad chapter.
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Great chapter! Glad that the principal was lenient on Zac. Have to say I have a lot of respect for Zac. If it would have been me, I would have enjoyed seeing Kenny's dream crushed. He more than deserved it. I did find enjoyment in the fact that Kenny's own teammates didn't defend him. So happy that Zac has such a good support system.
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I have to agree with Lifesavergreen as far as the grammar goes. Sounds more British than Texan. However, I like Callum and Jake and their friends. They sound like a fun, supportive bunch.
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I hope to hell u give Kenny a HUGE dose of karma, because the fucker deserves it! He deserves way more than a black eye. I don't think Adrian was any better for not stopping it. If he likes Zac as much as he says, how could he just stand there and do nothing, no matter what his situation is. I agree with Timothy..where the hell WAS Marty when Zac needed him?? He needs his ass kicked too! Lol!! Seems the only ones he can reallt count on for support is Billy and Lonnie. Please start passing out some karma soon!
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Wow! What a chapter! A proposal AND a shooting!! Lol! Too bad Mike was shot, but happy that it did put to rest the possibility of Chet's grandparents ever getting custody. I agree with Eric that Chet is a smart, loving young man. So glad to see that he's adjusting to being in regular school and making friends. Looking forward to reading more!
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Am so excited about book 3! Boy, what a change in a few months. Billy definitely isn't the sweet, happy boy that we left in the last book. Kinda surprised that he and Brett haven't done more yet. Understand his thinking tho. Looks like this book is gonna be drama filled. Looking forward!!
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Love thos story so far. So happy that Eric and Mark found each other again, although not under the best circumstances. What can I say about Chet? I absolutely love him already! I hope they can come to a conclusion with Mike's inlaws quickly so we can get back to Mike and Eric's growing love, and watch Chet learn and evolve. Great read so far!
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Chapter 1 - Being pop is right, right?!
jaysalmn commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Being pop is right, right?!
Hey Luiz! I'm not so sure about this one. I really enjoy Peter In Highschool, but Chris and his friends seem like real asshole d-bags. Not sure I wanna read about characters I already can't stand. -
I, too, am very interested in what Rachel told Elise. Its really none of Elise's or Kenny's business, so pretty d-bag move on their part to treat Zac like shit! I like Valerie. I think she just might be the one to break through the wall Zac has up when it comes to Adrian. I liked the little peek we got into Adrian's life, too. He definitely has more to lose than Zac if he's found out. Hope Zac considers that.
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Another good chapter! Feel so bad for Julian getting kicked out for just being himself. Hopefully mom and her asshole husband get their karma for that. At least he still has Becky on his side. Also happy that Lance's parents made Julian feel so comfortable and so loved. I agree with Columbus Guy that hopefully they find out what's behind the whole marinet deal and get past it. I agree that doesn't fit with Lance's personality, and honestly that's the only thing I don't look forward to with every new chapter.
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I enjoyed the chapter. Adrian is by far my fave after the bathroom scene! He definitely knows Zac is into him, and I had to laugh at the way he "presented" himself! I still can't like Zac yet. Even though I understand what he must be going through, I think the way he's treating Adrian makes him look like a real ass. I feel that what happened with Rachel was some well deserved karma for Zac!
