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OK, so you clear up one thing and give us more questions. I want to holler, "No fair!!!" But I guess I'll just have to be patient. I know Jeremy's presence will boost Ryder's confidence. I hope it won't interfere with Ryder making friends and fitting in. More good story. Thanks. Jeff
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Out, and a couple. Wow! This chapter was a big step forward for Toni! I hope everyone knowing about him and Marc will let Toni relax and not worry so much. Thanks. Jeff
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This was an interesting holiday tale. Sadly couples do grow apart, and it often happens in a sneak-up-on-you gradual way. And holiday time would add an extra layer of stress. I am glad Peter decided to look out for himself. Thanks. Jeff
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Another wonderful romantic story. I always like a perfect short story where everything you need is said in a few words. Thank you mystery author. Jeff
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I enjoyed this beginning. I may need to Google the ballad when I'm done with your version just to see what your source is like. Thanks. Jeff
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Hey Tim! Although I'm sad for this story to end, the ending was most satisfactory. And I'm glad you've left the door open for a second book. Thanks for writing such a good story. Jeff
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Chapter 21 - Begins Part 2
JeffreyL commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Begins Part 2
Seems like Jackson is being more honest with himself. I feel bad that he has drama going on at school and at swimming practice. Can't wait for the next installment. Thanks. Jeff -
Wow! If Ben was confused or conflicted before, he will either figure things out or be really confused now. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how he reacts when his mind clears. Great scene on the rock. Thanks. Jeff
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What a great little romantic story! It would be fun to read more about these guys another time. Thanks. Jeff
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Door#5 - A Christmas Memory
JeffreyL commented on Aditus's story chapter in Door#5 - A Christmas Memory
What a great memory. Thanks for sharing. Jeff -
This was such a good chapter, and their joining was amazing! Well written. Thanks. Jeff
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There are a couple of other stories I've read recently that are set in Florida. Between them and your biker I need to add a Florida road trip to my bucket list. The Everglades have been on it for a long time, but all I've ever seen was Walt Disney World for a week. Since I can't buy your biker a drink and listening to him describe his trip, reading these short stories is the next best thing. Can't wait for more CJ, but your biker is so enjoyable! More good writing. Thanks Carlos.
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Thanks for giving Ryder a good first day of school. Friendly students and a good practice were what he needed. Not sure about Renee. I hope she won't cause problems. And what's up with Jeremy? Does Ryder's dad know, and is that why he's gone? More good reading. Thanks. Jeff
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This thing between Ben and Travis will not be easy and straight forward. Your writing really made me feel Ben's confusion. Thanks. Jeff
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Rather sweet and sentimental, hitting on a lot of traditional Christmas moments. But a most powerful ending, and hopefully the true meaning of Christmas. Thanks. Jeff
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Beautifully written. And now I am sad. Poor Jian will probably run away after putting himself out there and basically being rejected. I should have waited to read this tomorrow. Then I'd only have six days to wait instead of seven. Thanks, Sasha. Sad but good. Jeff
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More good writing. I look forward to watching Ben and Travis' relation grow. I'm betting it will be "two steps forward, one step back." Thanks. Jeff
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I was trying to guess at nelly frittata and was coming up blank. What a great little romantic moment! Sometimes those impromptu moments really are the most fun! You all are two for two. Thanks. Jeff
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Still enjoying these characters. Can't wait for Ben to find out more about "the night." Nice writing to give your readers a feel for this truck ride in Colorado. Thanks. Jeff
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Hardly a wasted word in chapter one parts one and two. Your main characters are intriguing. I'm on to chapter two and looking forward to more. Thanks for a good start. Jeff
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A pretty powerful story, and a good message not just for for this holiday season. Thank you, and Merry Christmas. Jeff
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I really liked this first installment. Kinda bittersweet, but nicely written. Don't know any of your writing, so can't guess an author. I'll have to read something by each of you. Maybe then I could guess. Thank you. Jeff
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Oh you are evil! I can just imagine an evil grin as you dry wash your hands and chuckle saying, "No, I'll make them suffer a little longer and not reveal the reason for Chuck's planned name change." I'm finally caught up and still loving this story. As usual, thanks for more pleasurable reading. Jeff
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