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I needed a Sasha story to read tonight, and I found this one. I was surprised when I got to the end that I hadn't rated it or written a comment. I guess when I read it before, it was somewhere else. As always, you wrote amazing characters and great dialogue! I liked the flirty conversations and the sensual ones. Besides Rick and Theo, you did a great job writing Theo's family and Rick's brother and nephew! You made each supporting character interesting, often with just a bit of description and a little dialogue. I thought the ending was surprising, but it worked for me. Like several characters in the American Songbook stories, I would love to read more about these guys. I know that is not your plan. Thanks for sharing your writing. I love to read your stories.

I am glad to more about Corbin's background. I wasn't far off in my guesses about his past. Now for a little background on Paul. And thanks for the tenderness and cuddling. It was sweet in the best way. I think Corbin will find himself to be a lucky guy.

Very well written! You handled a difficult subject with compassion. This was a bit hard to read. As much for the emotional anguish for Greg and Nate as they relive Richard's assault, as for the assault itself. My hope is that Greg and Nate can move past the assault and go forward as a couple. I am anxious to see how you are going to resolve this. Thanks.

This was a great story with a satisfying ending. I loved all the characters, even Noah's mom. She had a part to play. There can't be drama and tension without a "bad guy" (or in this case bad mom). If you ever decide to write more about these guys, I will be happy to read it. Thanks.

What a kind and understanding family. Too bad all gay kids don't have that. It's always interesting in gay fiction when coming out is a non-event. Thanks.

Great conversation between Kyle and Greg! I was pleased that Greg was honest and supportive. Now that he is getting Kyle sorted, maybe he can do the same with his feelings about Kieran and Nate. I think Nate may be the blind spot Uncle Farid is talking about? Can't wait to see how things resolve themselves. Thanks.

The writing may have been difficult, but the results were great! I think you nailed it! I really enjoyed this chapter! And you're right about the hypothermia. What little I know is it's fast and deadly. Corbin was lucky.

Great chapter! Good descriptions of the river, the hypothermia, and the rescue. The urgent need for sexual release was sizzling! And the plot thickens...

Well, I've binged and caught up. What a pleasure to read about my favorite curmudgeon! Although the way Andy and Adam have helped Eric open up his world, he almost doesn't fit the description any more. Thanks for sharing more of these wonderful characters.

Oh my! Chapter four posted and I just realized what story this is related to. So I went back to the last chapter of "Never Too Late" and reread it. I just loved Eric in the first story, and Andy and Adam too. I'm excited to have them back, and I look forward to your excellent dialogue and the care you take when writing about my favorite older character! I also appreciate this look at how life can affect older people. Thanks. And now I get to binge three chapters! 😍

I feel badly for Paul, and Corbin too. They should have cut to the chase and gone right to HEA. 😍 But it is a story, and of course the journey to HEA is what it's about. Looking forward to Corbin's backstory. And try to be kind to Paul. He's my kind of character. Thanks.

Ouch!!! My tattoo only required clippers and a disposable razor. I think I winced just reading about the waxing. I am curious about Ian having no aura and what that means. Maybe it's because he is interested in Lex? I bet I know what you're going to say: you will find out in time. That's OK. I am in for the long haul. I really like Lex, and I can't wait for more. Thanks.

Thanks for another really good chapter! Your dialogue is terrific! You did a great job expressing the characters' feelings. And to paraphrase what MacGreg wrote, you did a good job telling us a lot without an excess of words. This story is a real pleasure to read!

Your Michael must be like several people in my family (and life). We jokingly say " He's never met a stranger!" I think I am more like you. I tend to hold back a bit. Your poem really captured the moment when "Never met a stranger" engages one and you realize it is safe to join the conversation. Some of these serendipitous moments are most enjoyable! Thanks for sharing.

As is often the case, your simple words show deep emotion and meaning. Beautifully written, Tim.

Finished chapter three, and Corbin's story is a good as I expected it to be! I am looking forward to more. Thanks.

This is a very interesting first chapter. You did a great job of putting us into the setting and introducing Corbin. The mystery of his past has me hooked. I am a couple of chapters behind, so I will binge a bit and get caught up. Thanks.

Wow! We're only to chapter two and my interest in Lex and his story has increased exponentially! Thanks.

What a great mom! I am glad Gary came out to her. It immediately lifted his spirits! I can't wait to see what you have in store for Josh. Thanks for more good story.

Sad, but so well written. You really captured the feelings of your characters by dialogue and descriptions. I especially enjoyed Louis' conversation with his dad at the hospital. Thank you.

I'm not certain normal is all it's cracked up to be. Maybe it is like a Venn Diagram. If we are each a circle on the diagram, the parts of the circle that overlap become "normal." The part of the circle that does not overlap is the uniqueness in each of us. Normal has its place, but I like to celebrate uniqueness! Thanks for this interesting view of mental health.

Finally! And thank you.

Lex is an interesting character, and the supporting characters are interesting too. Your story is off to a good start. I look forward to reading more. Thanks.

You wrote some great word pictures with these poems! All the rain makes me wonder if you have lived in western Washington (state)? I have, all my life, and although it isn't as rainy as some would like to believe, we know a thing or two about raindrops. 😏 Thanks for sharing more poems. Keep writing.

I find it curious that Jacob did not tell his schoolmates about his upcoming adventure. As much as he enjoys them, I would think he'd be excited to share that information with friends. As I think about it, secrecy is often a trait of your characters. I am enjoying Jacob's exploits. Thank you.