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Zeke Pine

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  1. Zeke Pine

    Midnight Caller

    It is never about adult legal authority. It is about adults with social and conscious prohibitions. Those issues don't go away as adults. The only difference between our teen years and adulthood is our personal experience and peer interaction. I like the way Comicality handles most of the adult characters but I see a potential spin with those that have had the closet ripped out from around them rather than brave enough to step out of it. If Comicality chooses to explore this venue, I am for one interested in reading it.
  2. Zeke Pine

    Midnight Caller

    Mel could wake up, transformed but would not fit into the turned teens world. Do I see a GFD series of turned adults? You definitely have the talent, world and readership audience. What an amazing decision to have to make.
  3. Zeke Pine

    Chapter 1

    Good story. A shame there isn't more of it to enjoy.
  4. Zeke Pine

    Chapter 2

    Well done approach with an issue that is still a social no no, even among us. Truth is, in my experience, it is more common than not. I'm looking forward to seeing how many social and family things you can juggle at once. Keep it coming JayT.
  5. What an awesome introduction. My curiosity into other people's lives and worlds could be sinful. The characters you've introduced as well as the one waiting in the confessional I feel a bit more than mere affinity with.
  6. Zeke Pine

    Story

    End of life to a new beginning. Great job, I loved it.
  7. Zeke Pine

    An Old One

    Loving the story. I just have to say that Colin and Devon don't have a clue about how to hire security people.
  8. Zeke Pine

    Matthew

    The Matt scene is one of the finest pieces of prose I have been privileged to have in front of me.
  9. Zeke Pine

    Hunting Season

    Current, meaningful topics. Your stories have never left me feeling disappointed. I apologize to you and others on GA for not offering reviews as the stories deserve. Well done.
  10. Zeke Pine

    Chapter 1

    Brutal. At the age of 60 I can relate to many situations.
  11. The interwoven stories of Jacob and friends are what allowed me to seriously consider good writing was possible in this genre. That eventually led me gayauthors. Maybe we should look into fanfic for the El Paso stories.
  12. I have wished many times for the stories to continue.
  13. Grats
  14. Zeke Pine

    The Box

    WOW, yeah. 1940's = any present day conservative bastion today.
  15. This review is about me. My surprise and joy to discover the quality of this tale. For me it stands among the greatest of, Circumnavigation and Bridgemont, stories that stir the heart and feed the mind. Truly this also has created a universe that lives beyond this the POV of the main characters. Thanks for creating something spectacular.
  16. Zeke Pine

    Set free

    Well 50 shades of imagination running wild.
  17. I'm hooked.
  18. Old friends are often relative terms. New friends are great but I also would recover that one old love. Things sometimes don't get simpler when we retire. The best wishes for your friend. I sense some heart in your story. Our heart is a renewable resource. Great story.
  19. I would love for the story to be be taken up again.
  20. Odysseus was awesome. Bridgemont is one of the greatest sagas I have read on GA.
  21. Zeke Pine

    With A Wimper

    James I find your shorts awesome. I have been reading apocalyptic stories recently. I would be inclined to nudge toward expanding this short.
  22. Zeke Pine

    High Infidelity

    May I have some more please?
  23. Zeke Pine

    American Land

    I prefer to look at a work in its finality. I'm also among the crowd always ask for more when I read "the end". After trying to find ways to sound eloquent,I have given up. This is a hell of a story, by a damn fine author with a top tier editing team. I'm eagerly anticipating the Walls chapter. Zeke
  24. Zeke Pine

    Chapter 1

    Sir, this story holds much potential. Should you decide to add to it, I will not miss a chapter. Zeke
  25. Zeke Pine

    Revelations

    There is a strong resonance among us, to each other. Rex and Joe resonate with me.
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