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Is This the Man I Want to Be?
Zeke Pine commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Is This the Man I Want to Be?
Contemplation of age is something I understand. -
I'm honestly happy for everyone in this chapter.
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Good start. I find I really want to know what next.
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Poor JJ? How many of our families have a JJ? JJ hasn't learned how to escape his self induced red haze of consciousness. He is bound for institutional life or a college level education in the art of clear thinking.
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I have been binging this story from chapter 1. 1. Thank you for not creating the "superman" syndrome that way too many magic tales fall into. So far. 2. Thanks for realizing that sex in a story, like everything else in the story has to actually contribute to the story. 3. You hold up the tradition, mostly online publishing, that most gay men and boys are not femanized versions of what is portrayed by major publishers and film. Gay men and boys are not closet trans, not meaning that in a bad way. I'm overall impressed with the quality of this series. Thanks for the hard work and please keep it coming.
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Thanks for a well told tale. I'm hoping to see more.
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The mechanics of this story is puzzling.
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I certainly hope this saga is picked back up in the near future.
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I felt the pain as I read. I hope the despair turns to some joy for both you and Chase.
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I'm hoping he comes back to them or at least give us something else to read.
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I have read every story in the Naptown Tales. Thanks for one of the most amazing stories I have run across. I read 300-500 published novels a year in the past few years, as well as many online stories. Naptown is among the very few that has touched me on the emotional level. Thank you and well done.
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Fantastic story. I want more from these two.
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Thanks for mentioning Gives Light. I just finished the first book. It was amazing.
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Thanks for the new story.
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I am envious I didn't have these adults when I was a kid.
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Thanks for telling a story that should never have to be told. It is truly criminal that it is still told to this very day.
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Well if the size of what was being touched transferred to squirrel guy and our character can still be taken for human, plus exotic clue. Let's say, Dingo or less likely an Asian Bear.
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When it comes to bullying and abuse by the religious, truth is always more difficult to accept than fiction. How can anyone have that much evil inside and not spontaneously combust?
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Quality, as I've come to expect.
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Great chapter. It's always feels right when status climbers are reminded that greed and influence don't always win the day.
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TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Zeke Pine commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Busy chapter. Big decisions, nerve wracking challenges, and personal hateful family attacks. The drama is coming along well. -
TC2 - Chapter 1: Meeting Each Other
Zeke Pine commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 1: Meeting Each Other
Great start. Life can surprise us. -
Comicality I see a portal/doorway to storyline unity?
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Interesting, my mind is spinning several pathways. Looking forward to the series.
