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Wow, poor Peter. Everyone around him seems disgusting. And if Max really loved him, he should have explained, better risk losing Peter to the truth about some shady business, than making him believe he was abandoned to marry Frances. If he was mentally broken, on anti-depressants, it is Max fault, hope he doesn't blame himself.

Wow, was it an accident, or something made the was go crazy?

Puppy! Nice chapter.

Oh those two are definitely more than human. Prism was stabbed several times and still is able to escape and climb. He might not be Grim, but there are strong self healing skills there... And Fasha... Thinking about it, suck interesting name for the underground. Not dungeons, caves, dwells or catacombs. Shade. Is he the shade behind the Shade? Those daggers seem to be an amazing physical manifestation of shadows.

Oh, madame Godani was the one who raised Styx. Still think that even if Prism is right, he should learn better what happened with the world and how Neredos became uncontested ruler and tyrant. Madame Godani still made a very important comment but I don't know if he good the dept of it: "The entire reason that the Shade exists is because those above can't tolerate those with different opinions."

Nice! Very nice! I have a feeling we are in for some interesting moments! Now, because I like to make guesses, did James Dean went back to visit an ex in Vancouver, and Drake freaked out? Love the names, from real life stories... Is Drake a human Falkor? He is a dragon after all. And Preston... I'm sure he has a huge stick up his ass. Richard... Imbecile ex, let's see the story behind them

I have been incredibly unfair to you @Rigby Taylor, as this is the first time I write a comment on your story. In my defense I didn't start reading when you start posting, and when I did I liked it so much that i binge read the whole story. So congratulations. I love how Robert took is sexuality, quite unusual in this type of stories, he was more happy that that he could feel sexual attraction than worried it was to a guy. Bart was a great guy, probably very hurt in his teens (would love ti know more about him, and his "old" family). The parents were great, worried but the most supportive Robert could get. Yes, morally the story makes you think, as Robert is not a normal "hero" after planning and murdering the headmaster, but I want to believe, and hope, that it will be like those "anti-hero" stories where the flawed character rises to fight the true villains. And since he only has one term more to be out of high school and be able to assume his relationship with Bart, I do hope that that survive and grow above this. It might be morally questionable but I wish Robert is not punished, even if the inspector will continue to believe he is guilty, specially after he learn about their "gay relationship". Looking forward to your next book, will try to be better and comment every chapter. PS: you don't have any reference to the date (that I remember) but from the lack of crazy social media and text msg, I guess cell phones weren't a thing yet. This actually makes interesting, as nowadays the damned machines can do everything

I read your status post today about writer's block, I imagine it was about this story, so I want to say that you did it again, this chapter is very good. Of course small things and plots, fillers, are needed to have a fluid story, moving from chapter to chapter, but in the end, you need to stick to the principal story you are telling, and you have done that beautifully. Ryder's video was a good attempt of reaching out to others and stopped being focus only on his own problems. And while the slapping annoys me, I will defend anyone that attacks Liz. It was her "family" too, her best friend, that was completely destroyed. She basically just told Ryder that there is more in the f*cking world than "Ryder Sullivan". And she probably didn't even said enough, she told him about the year after, but not all the others. If I understood correctly Teddy was even medicated for depression for a while. While you can't control getting depression, sometimes even family genetics make you prone to it, in Teddy's case it was almost a "transmissible" disease, and Ryder was the one "infecting" him. Don't get me wrong, I am a romantic and want them together and happy, but I think Ryder with have to me "cured", married to Teddy and singing happy lullaby songs to their twin kids sitted on his lap before Liz is ready to forgive him.

I already said, but will say again. Welcome, enjoy the stories, and the people

Great chapter, amazing mom. Funny how Jackson is so transparent to his friends. He was unfair to Sam, one thing he has to understand is that Sam plays them and leaves them before they broke with him, so that he is never heartbroken. Deep down I think he would like something more serious, but don't believe he can have it.

Is it because they are connected, destined to love each other? Is Andre what's needed to balance Koji's power?

Ok, apart from some innuendo that made me wonder if after Robbie left and he dated a girl,Tom found out that he is not that straight, this went as I was expecting. Tom, even from afar, is a rock to Robbie, and will have his back. Their relationship is natural and he doesn't ignore that Robbie is gay, he talks about it, makes jokes, and just behave normally, which is probably the best he can do. Hope he makes Sue and Don't uncomfortable, maybe they will realise that other people don't care, and stop being asses to Robbie and Nathan.

Oh oh, Diaz will do something stupid..

Erik is pushing it. He is so terrified that he would only be able to have a career in NY that he is risking the only thing that he loves. He can do his films everywhere, and just travel when he needed.

I tend to see what Ryder says badly due to his depression, but this time I actually read that with overdramatic humor. Like Teddy was excited, he was excited (and probably happy confirming that he is not impotent), so at that moment he just wanted to be well enough to start and finish, than we could have the damned heart attack.

Yup, Ryder will try harder not to get too excited..when he can do that, the first times having sex again will should probably let Teddy on top of him do most of the work... Just to be safe.. Dr.order's

Finally! For several things in fact... It is good to see them moving from a caregiver/patient to a lovers interaction, even if cut short by Ryder's heart. And nice to see Harry and Ryder starting to talk again... They are all healing, slowly.

I want to know about Maxthane mother now. Although now responsible for everything parents have a significant influence on their children personality. Cool chapter. I think for being so quick, there has to be something more than love at first sight with Maxthane, maybe some mystical connection? I wonder what is his plan to deal with the demons, specially if the one they have it is not the of the stronger ones... Are Salidar planning to bind all to Maxthane body, is that even possible? It seems to dangerous to trust any other ally but his son. Can they actually be absorbed (kind of like Styx tattoos) or do they have to be lying around in cages?

This was a good one. Andy trying to control his assumptions and paying attention to Eric, and Eric admitting once again that her needs help, and giving another chance to Andy. It was nice that we allowed himself to be vulnerable, Andy will realise things have a very different meaning for Eric, being from "other time" and alone.

Loved the chapter, and Cesar speech. I noticed that Ritchie is starting to refer the men as fathers, he did say Papa Brett at one point.

WOW, Liz was... pregnant Liz... I think it was scary, but in the end good for Oliver, to see what can happen to Ryder, in a way he understood that sometimes it is not about him, and that there is a reason behind Teddy's rules, Ryder is severely sick. Learning how to deal with different people will be good for Oliver behaviour, and again is bringing the brothers closer.

Good decision making the vid, but did he send it? Kohen was doing great in such a different environment.

I mean, this is GA after all, I guess you can imagine what I came here to read

Sacrilegious It is not true they all die, if you consider amount of characters in the Song of Ice and Fire books. It is actually a small percentage of the army of characters

Kiera as well, uh? These two seem decent knights, I wonder if they had become such a rarer species.