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Great - fun chapter Geoff. Can't wait to see the look on the old man's face after seeing the NEW Maggie. NYC here we come!
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Cadet Fourth Class • III
KayDeeMac commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Fourth Class • III
It always brightens my day to see a new chapter from you Carlos. Love the story and especially how you are bringing previous stories into the fold. Love it! -
Another very powerful chapter detailing the evolving relationship of Boone and Coy. Gary, your mastery of "period" dialect had enriched this story and made for believable scenes and emotions. I too have very much loved this story and while sad to see it end, I look forward to the epilogue and, perhaps, a cameo with our boys in the future. Great job my friend! Take care, David.
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Chapter 31 Still Call Australia Home?
KayDeeMac commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 31 Still Call Australia Home?
Another great chapter! So glad you didn't stop after eight!! And - I just have to say that you probably wrote the greatest tribute that a son could deliver to a loving father that I have ever read - and - I'll quote it here again: "thank you, dad, for everything - for being my hero, role model - but most of all, my friend!” Absolutely wonderful!! Thanks John, David -
The Final Piece of the Puzzle
KayDeeMac commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Final Piece of the Puzzle
That tesao would be poetic justice for the ole man to croak with the aberration of Jaime telling him he was going to HELL!! I love it!! Thanks Geoff and congratulations on publishing! Take care, David -
Another great chapter! Avery is very persuasive because he seems to understand the circumstances surrounding Lee! YEA Orson and Joseph are going to tie the knot, probably at the camp! Don't want to see the repercussions when Avery has to return to his hell. Thank Wayne, as always, suburb writing! Take care my friend, David.
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Cadet Fourth Class • I
KayDeeMac commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Fourth Class • I
Another great chapter! And I can sympathize with Ritch's sore ass!! Been there done that!! Also you were quite clever to bring Win up-to-date on his family's voting preferences!! He disserved the backlash with his comment: “Sounds like your family’s a bunch of liberal Democrats.” Wonderful story Carlos - thank you! -
Oh my goodness! I thought I had a controlling father but he was nothing compared to Heinrich! I doubt Rick will ever be able to do anything right in his father's eyes!! And now on to the music festival - I am curious as to the type of music that will be performed!! Great chapter Parker - thanks!!
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Great chapter! Corker is a real character and funny!! I too am suspicious of Lemon's reactions - typical bureaucrat is right!! I just hope something doesn't come along and bite the boys in the ass. Wonderful wonderful story Gary! I am thoroughly enjoying being a part of the adventures of Boone and Coy! David
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Vigilant is the perfect word Carlos. I too was shocked and overwhelmed with fear and great sadness! I am still apprehensive about 1/17 and 1/20!!! Take care my friend!
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Great chapter and great story Carlos! Glad to see that Cadet Bender will be hanging around!! Thanks for the distraction Carlos - I would like to erase last week!!!
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It is so great to be back at Camp Refuge! It's going to take time for Lee to really appreciate what is happening. From Lee's perspective, trust is not easily nor quickly achieved! But I'm gonna put my money on Avery eventually breaking down the walls Lee has erected for his self preservation! And, as always Wayne - your descriptive writing is superb! I actually feel the emotions! Great job and thank you!!
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Yes to all the above comments. A great start to the newbie at camp refuge!! It's going to be a great read and I am looking forward to more more more!!! Thanks Wayne!
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Welcome back Wayne - I'm happy and "relieved" to see you back with a new Camp Refuge story!! Happy New Year my friend, David
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Well I have now experienced the Gabriel Faure' "Requiem" Libera me VI! Deliver me!! Absolutely awe inspiring -and- I can make the connection with our boy Rick!! Wonderful!! Thank you Parker!
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Yes a great chapter and - WOW - we now know - Willie!!!
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Yes - Rick played it perfectly and Rita fell into the trap!! Great chapter Parker! Thank you! NOW - Let's see Heinrich's reaction to the large debt on their books!!!
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Chapter 17 Lessons Learned
KayDeeMac commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 17 Lessons Learned
WOW just WOW !! Probably one of the best love scenes ever created! Gary your words were so powerful I swear I could feel their emotions! The boys took the long road to find this happiness but I am certain it will not only survive but continue to grow and prosper!! I just have to add one of my favorites: "Think I might have swallowed some of your courage.” Boone snickered. “Think you swallowed lots of it.” Thank you Gary! -
Absolutely - a wonderful chapter! I believe this is one of my all time favorite stories here at GA! Thank you sooo much! David
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OMG - TMI!!! Seriously though, I will add my condolences to you Carlos for your loss! These are definitely difficult times we live in!! Take care and be safe my friend, David!
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Yes I agree, a wonderfully loving chapter! Ryan's mom is perfect and she probably will help "fill-in" as a surrogate Mom to Andrew!! Up next two bouncing babies???
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Intense to the third degree! I simply cannot imagine the mentalities of the homophobic brutes that kidnapped and assaulted Ryan. I guess - no matter what continent in this world - there are still horrible people! But, I assume, these guys were not South African natives, as I am led to believe!! I am also perplexed that supposed homophobes so often resort to sexual assaults on their victims??? Also I must comment on the inept police force that failed to look at the location where Ryan was left? It only took a very preceptive canine named Rascal to unravel the mystery!!!! Now --- children may be the best medicine for Ryan to totally recover from this traumatic event!! Great story Andre - thank you, David
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Yes onto more construction and - will the girls come on board and manage the new spa?
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Yes - the launch of Belle Catherine! Now Ryan's love of sailing will come to fruition!
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Wonderful wedding. Your attention to detailed writing allowed us, the readers, to perfectly picture the event. The descriptions of Paradise Beach Resort were so interesting that I actually googled the name and watched several videos of the place! It truly is breathtakingly beautiful!!! Once these travel restriction are lifted perhaps my husband and I can save enough money to make a trip to celebrate an anniversary!! Great job Andre! Truly love this story, David.
