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Jeff, you know I don't comment very often, but this chapter demanded a comment....OUTSTANDING WORK!!! You have again created a story with characters, scenes and emotions that capture a reader and leave them laughing, fuming, crying and wanting more!! I can see this story easily becoming another multi book series if you want it to. I want it to if you are taking notes and votes . Keep up the wonderful writing.

This story is absolutely wonderful. I find it interesting how we seem to learn some new tidbit of information about someone or something every few chapters. In this chapter we learned again how powerful Chris really is and some inside knowledge about Augusts implied capabilities just by being a part of the Crescent Council. I really can't wait for the ceremony and to eventually find out the real meaning of Chris gaining the marks/items of the four Elvin ruling families of the past and present. I wonder what the show will look like in the training rooms when all four elements combine under Chris's control....

I really want Robbie to grow up. He just keeps repeating the same stupid shit over and over. It may be time for him to learn a very rough but valuable lesson. A nice stay in a detention facility for a few months might give him a better appreciation for what he is doing to himself!! Now as for Alex, I would like to see him become a statistic in the records of what not to do. Luke would be better off in foster care and we know that is not really very good. Yep, I am getting tired of poor Robbie. It is time for some real tough love if he is ever going to stand a chance in todays world!!! Come on Dodger, lets see some practical education for Robbie and loosen Conner up a bit and let him help Robbie mature a bit for us. While you are at it feed Alex to the ???? for our entertainment !

This is wonderful story of discovery, love and a bit of mystery. The way Geron builds characters and presents detail of both characters and places add a real life feeling to his story. If you would like a very warming story on a cold night, this will definitely warm you up. It will also give you a small look into the feeling of a large city with some amazing things to visit and admire. If I were able I would give it more than 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟.

This was a great story with a simple but happy ending. I definitely was trying to make it much more mystical as I was reading it. I am glad that the answer was grounded in real life happenings. I vote for a sequel!! In these times of stay at home and social distancing it is very warming to be able to look into the lives of the characters and feel the emotion of the park and the closeness of people. To simply be able to have a good Italian lunch with Craig, David and Mark was a very nice time. Geron, as always, you have given us a story that we can join and forgget the real world for a little while. We need more of these...hint, hint.

I will add a positive comment before I even read the first word... I know this story will be great. I am a bit biased, but I have not read a story by Gerion that was not exceptional. I will be back to edit this review after reading to the end . I guess this is actually just a comment, so read the review for my thoughts. Hint, the story was actually even better than I expected! Geron tends to do this often!!!!

You know it is the start of something good when Kitryn brings back the pants AND leaves the room without even a growl or hiss..... great chapter!!

I just read this story and really liked the development of the characters and their world. The story included many situations that most could relate to things in our real world. I am a sucker for romance stories, but while this has romance it also has much much more. It is action packed, has times of suspense and several surprises that just keep you wanting to read more. I tend to read completed stories so binge reading is on my list. This story, having 50 chapters, definitely lends itself to binging. You will have trouble pausing your reading. I highly recommend this story!!!!

WooHoo I am first . Another great chapter. I am sorry to see this end, but I am waiting for the next story. I am sure it will be great also. You tell a wonderful tale and should be proud of what you provide to GA and still manage a very full RL. Be well and always know you do not need to respond every time to our comments. We know life sometimes gets in the way a bit.

I have followed the WAR series from the very beginning and have loved, hated, accepted and despised every chapter as was right for the story they told. I have not read "Dustins World" but it is now on my list. I was always on Team Brett (sorry @droughtquake) and just didn't see the need to look into Dustins screwed up life. Now that the ground work has been laid out it feels like Dustin deserves a bit more appreciation.... Jeff, you are a talented story teller and paint a very believable picture with your words. I like the way you cause the reader to really take sides and join the story as we read on. I am sure you will find another subject and/or characters to use as a brush to paint us another great story. Take care of yourself and travel where the winds of imagination take you. I will look forward to your next story. I too will put in a vote for a story that tells of Captain Dickfaces implosion, embarrassment and final demise at the hands of a queen and his king and their court . Be well, my friend....

I wonder how long it will take for Kitryn to get that bad taste out of his mouth. However long it is it was well worth it!!

I agree with @Valkyrie 100%. Thank you for EVERYTHING you do to keep this community alive and open to all without requiring anything. I have no idea of the monetary cost to keep the site online or the personal costs in time and effort, but I am sure both are very high. I have not been a premium member but am going to change that very soon. This site is valuable in more ways than are obvious at a glance. This site makes it possible for people to relax, read, write, ask questions, debate, rant and simply have an outlet (or inlet) for ideas and the frustrations and joys of life. THANK YOU @Myr for providing this resource to all of us. It is appreciated more than you can imagine!!! GO 2020 .

Another Happy New Year and another great chapter! How scary is Kitryn with his fur in a fluff ? Me thinks Cheryl is in a bit of a prickly situation and that is exactly where she deserves to be! She might be a good toy for the weres...cat toy, wolf toy, bear toy etc.......................

@wildone I thought that comment DID refer to Don and his ilk. I will have to reread and see what I missed... As for who else for Robbie? Not in Cobourg, but I think I may join @droughtquake and start cheering for Team Tom if Connor ends up being a loss . You may be crotchety, but you are not wrong .

A great chapter with some interesting moments. Robbie just seems determined to screw things up. His obsession with Derick is a case in point. Why in the hell would you obsess on Connors ex while constantly talking about yours? I can not see any better way to fuck up a new relationship any faster or better than with that combo. I really like Connor and hope Robbie can get his problems/issues figured out and attempt to have an enjoyable period in his life....

Good start! now can we give Cheryl the same ending? Loving this story. Please keep it up. Happy New Year.

Geron has once again put the wonder and feeling of Christmas into words. The magic, art and imagery in this story just make you want to join the story and live the feelings created. As all the Charlie Boone stories are, this is a MUST read if you would like a very happy tingling feeling when you reach the end.... Read On!!

I loved the simple claw in the air evisceration. However, it would have been funnier if it was a wolf instead of a human pissing himself while facing Kitryn. In any case this story is great! I look forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for this informative list. I have heard of most of the terms listed, but not exactly known the content referred to. This cleared up my understanding in a big way. It might even change my defination of myself In any case I like Tims outlook... Queer definitely works for me also

Happy Birthday Gary

Hmm, I think i can start taking suggestions on what people want to see as Cheryl's punishment. Should she end up dead? Imprissioned? Tortured? YES

This one spoke volumes of heart and family...in both good and bad ways.

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If you gave up and lost interest, why are you bothering to leave unhelpful comments? Just saying...............