Thanks. I owe a lot to the three that helped. Kitt is a fantastic editor, and I'm glad to have her onboard.
I always believed that flaws and disadvantages make a character. His appetite was the thing that popped in my head.
Thanks for reading, duglas. It's an interesting journey so far. I've been using the D&D 5th edition rules as a foundation, to keep the characters believable. Chapter 5 is being written now, and I plan to include a lot of action in it.
The Director of the Agency for the Defense of the Earthly Realm sat in his chair smoking his cigar and looking out the window across the city of D.C. on this Monday morning. He peered over at his guest, a woman who wore a stunning red dress which coordinated perfectly with her raven black hair.
“I did not fail.” He motioned at her with his cigar.
“Of course you did. You were supposed to stop that child before Mithras got his mitts on him. You failed.” The woman practically purred, while
Thanks! I've had friends and family do the gift within a gift to me a few times, and I always loved it. So, I decided to use it in this story. There's also a couple of other personal experiences that made an appearance in this story.
Thanks, tim. True about the Anniversaries, so I hope Deam and Alex keep it straight. lol I know they are not going to have the Wedding on any holidays.
*hands you a box of tissues* Thanks for reading, Lisa. I don't mind you calling me A. (My real name starts with it.)
I'm happy, you enjoyed the story, and several others that were part of the newsletter have brought tears to my eyes as well.