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Thanks, tim. I'm glad you liked it.
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Thanks, jp. Both Honsol and Rune are former D&D characters of mine. Makes me happy you find them intriguing.
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Thanks, Agent D. Gregory might make an appearance. It will be some fireworks if he does with Rune. lol. I agree with you on the editing bit. Though not sure, if anyone would want to edit, my literally randomly done practice pieces. I try to self-edit, but I am not that good at it.
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Good luck, in your new endeavor. I hope it is successful!
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Fantastic poem, tim. You can see and feel the love that's built into the words.
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That's what it is based on. I'm glad you liked it Moggie.
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Honsol sat in the common room of the Sterling Buck and waited for his friend to join him. Since the curse came upon him, he hated to wait, but he understood the need for the mortal races to have their time. He looked around the room, gazing at the few locals that came here for a “watering-hole,” and took in the décor itself. The Innkeeper for the Sterling Buck wanted this to be a somewhat classier establishment, for a backwater forest town. He must have been an adventurer in his own right,
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@BlindAmbition @LadyDe If I recall correctly. Battlecat's non-heroic name was Cringer. And he was a scaredy cat. LOL
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Thanks for reading! Yeah. I love the song, and I've been on a fantasy kick because of my Dungeons & Dragons gaming I've been doing. Today this song came on, and I could see this Half-Elf walking down a forest path, with a Panther for an Animal Companion.
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LOL. That is a great mom. Mine used to do it as well. Um... Hopefully soon, I'll post the next installment, which will get all the players, already mentioned, together soon.
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Thank you very much, Dodger. I'm also not a huge romantic, but I love me a sappy love story from time to time as well. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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Thank you for reading and for your comment, LadyDe. Yes, I remember He-Man, Skeletor, and Battlecat. To answer a couple of your questions. Yes, both the Half-Elf and the Strider Cat both will have names, which we will see in the next installment. Dragon and Wanderer are tied together. So, they will be continuations of the same story, from different P.O.V.s. Again, thank you for reading.
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Thank you, Agent D. I'm glad you liked it.
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He strolled into town at the edge of the ancient forest with the gait of a warrior, with the sun setting behind the trees behind him. The man had the lean-toned build of a human, but the height of an elf, marking him as one of the exceptionally rare half-elves in the world. Beside him walked his companion, a large female Strider Cat, with a coat of crimson colored fur, and four black socks for coloration on her paws. Strider Cats were large predatory animals, akin to a panther, but had sharp bon
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Thanks, jp. More from Honsol will be coming as part of the shorts. I think I'll make them based on prompts.
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I agree it was way too short. I'm glad you liked it, jp.
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Prompt #640 – Creative – Alien
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in Prompt #640 – Creative – Alien
Thanks, jp. Already have notes for a longer story on them. Might be a while before I revisit them, in their world. I want to get 1/2-Elf done, and there is another project I'm working on. -
Prompt #640 – Creative – Alien
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in Prompt #640 – Creative – Alien
Thanks, tim. I am glad you enjoyed the story. When I saw the prompt and sat down to write, it all just flowed out. I after the comments I got about these two, I've decided to expand this story, but not until other projects are done. -
Prompt #640 – Creative – Alien
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in Prompt #640 – Creative – Alien
Thank you! Jeff and Evie, are most defiantly getting their own story now. I'm glad people liked this little short of them. -
Thanks for reading! Honsol's Revenge... that has a great ring to it. 😎😎
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Excellent blog post, and an explanation of 'Show, Don't Tell.' The first time, I ever heard those words, it didn't have an explanation attached, and I instantly had a dislike of the whole phrase. To the point, I stopped writing for years, before I took it back up, and avoided Editors, and Beta Readers who used it. 'Show, Don't Tell' became a curse word in my dictionary. However, I am happy to see people actively explaining it, instead of just tossing it around, as a way to infer someone is writing low-class work. This. As someone that writes a ton of SciFi and Fantasy, there is a lot of Telling going on. Otherwise, your reader doesn't understand the world, or its rules, your writing about.
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