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  1. FormerMember4
    Thanks Sweet Pea! xo
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    Thanks tim. That’s very sweet. I think you will enjoy it. An easy and relaxing read. ☺️
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    Chapter 3

    FormerMember4 commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Brad has some nerve asking Melissa’s mom to speak to her... no shame! Leopards and spots...they don’t change. We were born here and we will die here. That’s a sad outlook on life that was given by Andre. Small name replacement needed Ron. When Andre and Buddy are talking... Ok replied Brad as he sat at the side of the bed. It should be Buddy. ☺️
  4. FormerMember4
    Thank you @Headstall, @Reader1810, @Timothy M..
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    Thanks Spikey! That means a lot. It’s a great story. 🤗
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    My pleasure! It’s a special story.
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    This is not going to be a smooth transition. Adam needs to be vigilant and not trust anyone. Keep track of every slanderous innuendo and lie made. He should have lawyer start lawsuit against grandparents. Use their positions in Massachusetts to his benefit. They have more to lose. At least Rob will be with Adam’s parents. Less trauma for Rob. Adam should have his parents get private security for their house and Rob. Good chapter A.
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    I’m sorry about the rough patch... When it rains it pours. Sending major positive vibes and hugs. I love the stories. Especially the ghost one. I love ghost history, but scares me. A lot of hauntings in NJ where I’m from. A scaredy cat like R. Went to Amityville house in high school, all friends got out of cars... I locked myself In car. Things will get better sweetie. Things do get better at some point. Wishing your aunt the best!!❤️
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    I wouldn’t. I get attached easily. Not fair to either of you if you develop feelings. That’s not to say you can’t be friends. Just keep some distance and boundaries.
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    Kodachrome

    FormerMember4 commented on MacGreg's story chapter in Kodachrome

    I really appreciate and understand this Sir. Reflection is a powerful thing. It holds our pasts and lays foundation for our future. I can only hope that reflection was good for you. Thank you for sharing this moment Sir. The emotion is greatly felt.
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    I’m happy to see the team gel. I’m still cautious of Trey. Hope he just falls back and let things unfold at Riley’s pace. Trey helped him out of a bind, but trust is earned. Its time for Riley to pay it forward. Help his little brother adapt and excel. Happy he showed lil T some love.
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    Pillow Talk

    FormerMember4 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Pillow Talk

    Riley is changing. Even if he doesn’t see it. Carter has a naturalness in pulling Riley out of his head. He’s intent on making Carter happy. Selfless, he now puts someone before himself.
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    Chapter 1

    FormerMember4 commented on Geron Kees's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank you for another offering in this series. I like the continuing change in these characters. Sorry it took a few days. Needed to carve me time with the length. Good job!!
  14. FormerMember4
    There were some great offerings this week. Have a great week renee. Thank you for the work you do.
  15. FormerMember4
    Congrats! I wish you guys the best. It’s sometimes nice to see a HEA.
  16. FormerMember4
    It’s not harsh. Many chapters ago @spikey582 spoke of his frustration with these characters. They are slow to learn, don’t learn, revert to old ways. I’ve enjoyed the story, but not really likable characters. We don’t like everyone In life. All that said, Jeff produced a good story. A well thought out character study. What can be learned from experience and circumstance.
  17. FormerMember4
    This chapter really showcased a theme that ran throughout story. It’s better to be poor, but rich with love. Over having money and being bought off instead of loved.
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    I love Billy’s father. Smart man who looked out for both boys. All the sanctimonious bullshit from Jack and Jen, yet they have been committing adultery for years. Jen is a piece of work. Constantly screwing over her son and best friend. I’m glad Billy had a moment with his speech. I do wish it was a little more epic. Telling the world he loved Brett was a nice touch though. I hope Mr. Hartley gets a good kick in the ass from karma. Leaves you wanting a shower after being in his presence. Billy and Brett should take the Taylor’s boy advice... Blow that shitfornothing town. The quicker, the better.
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    Happy the visit went well. I’m not getting a good vibe from Hannah. Think she’s sharpening her claws. The kids these days have it made. I never had dick pics from my BF in HS. My first cellphone was like a brick with no camera. Oh... to be a teenager again, but only with the wisdom I have now. 😊
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    Exposition

    FormerMember4 commented on Comicality's blog entry in Writing World

    Great topic Comsi. Very informative. Don’t know where you find any extra time. 😊
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    Stranger Things

    FormerMember4 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Stranger Things

    Great premiere chapter. It puts the sneak peek well scene in a more complete light. I look forward to upcoming chapter releases.
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    The Fall Guy

    FormerMember4 commented on Dodger's story chapter in The Fall Guy

    If I was Andy... I would have sold out Tyrone’s ass to that rag. Punk ass needs a lesson in humility. Lose some money and be knocked down a peg or two.
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    Chapter 1

    FormerMember4 commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A lot to cover this chapter. We caught up with most. No Charlie, Paul, or his sister. It was nice to see Todd ask Neil to be in wedding. Ty certainly is still his charming self... lord help us! ☺️ Looking forward to Ben’s story. Hey Oliver... I’m wearing your number. 😉 Great chapter Graeme!
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    Chapter 3

    FormerMember4 commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Grim and Veil didn’t always have a complicated relationship... Where and when did that change? This was a loving family. Grim loved Prism. Veil’s son we know will love Styx. Grim’s father loved a Baron. The Fedain seem to be fluid in who they love. Very interesting. Very evolved race.
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    Yes!
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