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  1. FormerMember4

    Chapter 3

    This was natural, beautiful, and intimate. Two men being real and vulnerable. No cameras, or distractions. Explorations of real emotion. Almost happy they had time away from each other. You made me love these guys even more HB! The painting of Eric’s tattoo says so much about Ryan. That guy is a keeper.
  2. LOL! I can’t speak for girls... I’m not talking BO, boys had a very distinct musk. Even when showered and clean. 😁
  3. FormerMember4

    Chapter 7

    Great chapter! I remembered it well. My coming out to my mom was very similar. She had gay friends, yet I was terrified. Cried myself to sleep for months. When I found the courage... one word... SO!
  4. FormerMember4

    Chapter 6

    Now that’s a friend! LOL!
  5. LOL! *sandpaper whispers* mi, mi, mi...
  6. So many smiles in this. Everything is true. Boys do grow up and mature. The noises and grunts are forever. That smell was intoxicating to a gay boy in school.
  7. I’ll be signing the words. I have no words due to laryngitis. 🤪
  8. FormerMember4

    Without Waver

    Mac Sir and tim, a beautiful collaboration. Captures the overwhelming connection between Dom and sub. Peace, trust, and ultimate freedom. These personal scenes bring complete fulfillment.
  9. FormerMember4

    Chapter 5

    Sam has entered the picture. He will certainly add some flavor.
  10. FormerMember4

    Chapter 4

    The ultimate betrayal. When a guy can’t handle his actions and waves the infamous STRAIGHT card. Fool no one.
  11. FormerMember4

    Chapter 3

    C-blocked by a ditz who lost her tent. Then the boy of your dreams passes out on you... Poor Jackson. Just torture.
  12. My pitchfork is ready. Your timer has started ⏳. We look forward to it! 😁
  13. FormerMember4

    Chapter 2

    Ladies and gentlemen, it now begins. Jackson got his first taste of Carter fricken Mulkins... *swooning*
  14. FormerMember4

    Chapter 1

    I waited for a few chapters to post, before starting one of my fave stories. I could easily binge. Look forward to the game.
  15. This is a great tip. Especially for readers like me who are blind. We live in our head most of the time, and not by choice. When an author balances the narration, plot, scene, description with enough info.... it heightens our senses greatly. Placing us center of the story.
  16. I understand the pressures of lists. You cross off 10 and add 20 things to it. Just remember to breathe! We’re only human, and only so many hours. Hope you find some peace. Your time and site is greatly appreciated.
  17. I continue to enjoy the unfolding of this story. The description of this world. Characters that become more alive with each chapter.
  18. FormerMember4

    Gifting Day

    A great first chapter with a unique twist. I like the crystal and polyamorous aspect for Pax and Elias. Looking forward to more.
  19. Did someone say Deja Vu?
  20. A story full of love. Characters that capture your heart. While they navigate the ups and downs of life.
  21. Reread and makes sense now. The lesson, don’t read when your tired.
  22. No problem following this. I don’t know what post you referred, nor does it matter. Racism or slurs is not welcome anywhere in my book. I don’t care the context.
  23. I thought Christopher was the father, not Jared.
  24. A story with a big message. A boy standing up to bullies, intolerance and standing up for what’s right. While being told he chose wrong. The title is a thoughtful choice.
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  25. A well written story with powerful message. The author developed characters in a short span. Would have enjoyed more.
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