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  1. FormerMember4

    Saturday Night!

    FormerMember4 commented on Rip Skor's story chapter in Saturday Night!

    Now you’re just teasing with the cliffhanger. Leaving us all drueling.
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    Beautiful Sir. A piece that sees the big picture. Not always easy, or black or white. A very thoughtful piece Sir.
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    I’ll dl with my KU. Good luck!
  4. FormerMember4
    Well done A. Definitely happier than the last.
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    Ripped

    FormerMember4 commented on craftingmom's story in Fiction

    💋
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    I’d rather drink bleach. Description OVERKILL!!
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    Much more positive developments. Still don’t trust Don, or Sue for that matter. The hypocrites who think they’re amazing parents. I’m hoping another axe doesn’t drop for Robbie. He needs to tell Nathan about Alex. Sorry I didn’t comment last 2 chapters @Dodger I was to angry about Sue. 💋
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    I absolutely loved this story. The daydreams are hilarious at times. The advances of Jose are very bold. A definite good read. The review by @Puppilull is spot on.
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    Night at the Ball

    FormerMember4 commented on WolfM's story chapter in Night at the Ball

    This made me smile. I’m happy to see things are going well with you and your boy. We wear collars with pride for our Sirs. I love that your boy wore his under Marine blues.
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    Goodbye Daddy

    FormerMember4 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Goodbye Daddy

    I’m sorry he couldn’t give you what he should have. I’m so very proud of you tim. You showed integrity and compassion with your visit. I hope this now brings you peace and closure. He cant hurt you anymore. Much love xoxo
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    I Was an Empire

    FormerMember4 commented on Lacuna's story chapter in I Was an Empire

    Very well done. It holds up on its own. However; this would definitely hold more power as a spoken piece. I look forward to more from you.
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    Well written and very sad. The knowing of this happening. Just heartbreaking. You interpreted the prompt well.
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    I know we listen to some of the same music. I love this song. Not for the group singing, but the power behind the words. I connect to my feelings and the world through music. Thanks for sharing a connection to you.
  14. FormerMember4

    Maple Drive

    FormerMember4 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Maple Drive

    You were able to capture many emotions and feeling. All within a small piece. Very well crafted tim. xo
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    Epilogue

    FormerMember4 commented on BDANR's story chapter in Epilogue

    Great closing!
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    Well done Carlos. The story is covering a lot in a short amount of time. I think this was done purposely. Very clever with CJ’s hectic life. This section is definitely grasping he is a grown-up. Responsibilities and maturity. One downside to his location and entering college, the loss of time with ailing grandparents. You covered many topics this chapter with much thought and care.
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    Beautiful and haunting. Soldiers fallen proudly and honorably served their countries. All soldiers should be honored and remembered for the sacrifices they and family endure.
  18. FormerMember4
    Oh I know you do. It's appreciated. As a reader I now choose authors to comment. Won't bother with ones that don't engage. Like @Kitt I also had an author go apeshit on a comment. Don't read his story anymore. You're right about different strokes. No one likes criticism. When it's constructive, it allows you to grow.
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    I agree with this. An author not replying is inconsiderate. Your reader took the time to comment. I find it egotistical when authors don't reply. You're not that good that you don't need readers.
  20. FormerMember4
    I suggest sending a PM to @Cia. She deals with most stories answers and questions.
  21. FormerMember4
    I think part of the problem is your rep count. Your chapters still have to be approved before posting. So if you post to go live on Wednesday at 8am. It still has to be approved by staff until I think your rep is 250.
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    Honored to do it for you my friend.
  23. FormerMember4
    While I read before. I love how the layers are unfolding.
  24. FormerMember4
    These poems full of imagery the reader can almost grab for. The descriptions are beautiful. Showing the change of season and weather. This set of poems is meaningful to me tim. I used to stare in the sky endlessly. Clouds always fascinated me. Thank you for reminding me of their beauty. Much love xoxo
  25. FormerMember4
    Huh!, I’m lost on this one. I haven’t published any stories on here. Did you tag wrong person?
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