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  1. You're right that Kellar doesn't want to assume a leadership role... However, will he realize he already has. For awhile now. Eleanor has already been looking to his insight.
  2. That was a touching moment between Kellar and Fendral. I'm happy that Fendral allowed Kellar to use his healing powers. It didn't seem the wolf in him was going to permit it. It is obvious how connected these mates are. Tobin thought of reversing the copper exchange. Hopefully it will work enough for Fendral to shift. At this point, I think it will fall on Fendral to explain Kellar his birth right. The importance it provides the pack. Especially if Fendral doesn't recuperate enough to be Alpha. Having an Alpha can only strengthen the pack. It would also allow Eleanor the time to raise her pup.
  3. FormerMember4

    Chapter 8

    I absolutely loved this chapter. Cornelius and his partner were hilarious. I'm happy that they have been guiding Adrian over the years. The background story of Adrian just breaks my heart. He's basically ignored by his parents. Tried to end his life. He is craving love. Which he most certainly deserves. I am happy to see that Corey is starting to understand Brett. He is realizing the position Brett was in. We must all follow our hearts. Even when decisions are difficult and can hurt others. Corey is showing maturity. By not wanting to hurt Adrian. I do feel these boys have a chance. If Corey is willing to open his heart. There is no denying an attraction between these two. Something Cornelius said has me worried. Is it possible Reverend Baker had a relationship with Corey's mother. They do seem close... Is it possible that Reverend Baker is Corey's father? Which would make the boys brothers!
  4. Where's my Colin? All the good guys are either straight or a vampire. I want a manor... Be the belle of the ball... LOL!
  5. It is nice to see Wes return to school with little issue. Even though his friends are ok with gay individuals... That doesn't make it any easier for someone deciding to come out. I would have turned to Mrs Jones and told the decrepit homophobic bitch "Choke on my dick ". Oh Oh! Is Melvin being molested?
  6. This story is the gift that keeps on giving... That's not an insult. Just very original! I'm just wondering if Devon is going to be the experiment that goes wrong. His mother came to terms rather quickly. Couldn't say my mother would have such a relaxed attitude to having a pseudo vampire son. Great ending to Brett... Sucks to be him.
  7. Another great chapter. A billionaire for a spouse. We should all be so lucky... Just have to love Maria. She brightens any chapter with that adorable wit of hers. Orgasmed Religion... Hmm, I'll go along with that. I find religion anytime I have one!
  8. How often does a potential boyfriend tell you... I'm a father, pilot, and a BILLIONAIRE! Jackpot!!
  9. I was trying to follow Wesley8890, when you go to his profile... Error EX0 populated. Even when he tries his own profile!
  10. I got your follow! I'll tell admin about x0 code. Did you report? Its a bug related to you and another author. A patch is being prepared. However issue should be fixed if you post another chapter to your story soon @Wesley8890
  11. LOL! Hey I tried following you. I get error code when going to your profile. You say some of the funniest things!
  12. This is in the South... I've heard some crazy shit happen their. Might just be another day for those folks!
  13. This story is like Dark Shadows meets The Twilight Zone! I can't wait to see how it progresses. Hopefully the serum will work. Will the mother learn to accept the situation. She is currently freaking out. Will they get Happily Forever After?
  14. You'd think this was a queer site, or something! All the crying men!?
  15. This chapter was heartbreaking. I hope that Robbie won't have permanent brain damage. It could just be the brain swelling. However, he is certainly confused and forgetting things. I actually found a fondness for Nicola in this chapter. She was extremely protective and caring towards Robbie. I think she might be a good ally, now the secrets out. She stayed very composed. Even though it is very clear that Robbie is having memory issues. I wonder how long it's going to take Nicola to find Robbie's attacker. They better watch it. I think she is going to be quite the lioness. Will certainly make an example of them in school. Possibly ruin them. Considering, she is in the popular crowd. I hope that Nathan and Robbie get to show their love to the world. Its devastating to see Nathan endure that. Makes me love him even more... Being Robbie's cheerleader. He is showing that determined strength for his man!
  16. FormerMember4

    Proposal

    Well, Gay marriage is now legal... What about marrying a vampire who is 180 years old? LOL!
  17. FormerMember4

    Chapter 67

    I am happy to see Mitch and Tony enjoying themselves. Even with Tony's health issues at the forefront. Looking forward to what else the trip brings us. I so enjoyed the line about "Human Souvenirs". Makes it sound like they acquired Sasha by means of human traffickers!
  18. I agree with all that... However, that's part of where we came from! Jersey takes no shit! ?
  19. Quite the chapter Carlos, I rather enjoy CJ getting a letter of recommendation from Clinton. This kid is definitely going somewhere in life. The veteran dedication was a beautiful sentiment. With many of my family serving... I love when they get the respect they deserve. Obviously as a proud gay man, I love that you specifically tribute our LGBT service men and women. That was a beautiful and poignant moment with Matt. He obviously loves Chipper as his own son. The words he spoke about CJ were touching and respectful. It was nice to see him credit the growth and maturity of these boys. Of Course, CJ would end up in the residence portion of the White House. I wouldn't expect anything less of this boy! The family dinner in the beginning was great. I'm happy that Ritchie will grow up with the influence of his brother... Instead of his father. Positive changes are already showing in Ritchie. As always my friend... I'm entertained by your beautiful talent in words!
  20. FormerMember4

    Chapter 7

    Adrian left school early... Reverend Baker could have attacked his son before seeing Corey!
  21. FormerMember4

    Chapter 7

    My heart absolutely breaks for Adrian. To live in a house where your life is considered an abomination. Corey's father handled that situation better than I would have. I would have yanked reverend Baker's arm out of his socket. Then have him and the mother arrested on assault. I am hoping the church roof comes tumbling down on the good reverend. Something tells me he may have attacked his son!
  22. FormerMember4

    Chapter 15

    That was a sad moment at the cemetery. I completely understand that moment. Often relationships are left unresolved after death. Marty's family is just awesome. The perfect example of family not having to be related by blood. Eileen obviously has a fondness and treats Liam like a son. LitLover is evil. Created this absolutely perfect character of Marty and makes him straight. He is loyal, comforting and Liam's rock. Why the hell is this man single? Allie gave Liam some very good advice about his relationship with Alec. However, I honestly feel he should leave that relationship in the past. Learn from it and move on!
  23. Another great chapter Mac, Curtis is a complete scuzzball... Its a good thing I believe in karma. I think Ben will be the one in the end to give it to Curtis. I think he is going to make it quite clear... Don't screw with Travis. A long distance relationship will be tough for these two. Not because they don't want it. However, the universe seems to be throwing every damn obstacle at their feet. Very sexy shower scene Mac... Good job my friend! ?
  24. FormerMember4

    Chapter 9

    Wow!... We are finally scraping the surface of Bailey's football past. We don't have the full story. However, as the past unfolds... I already know it isn't going to be pretty. As the layers are peeled away. I'm surprised Bailey didn't give up on his life. That shows a strong spirit. The loss of his father is just devastating. Its very clear, his father loved him very much. His father was his rock. Traumatic to have your center yanked from you. Also, the person who most would have gotten him through his extremely painful issues. This story is like the worst car accident you've witnessed. You don't want to watch the impact of the situation. You just can't look away!
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