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  1. FormerMember4

    Chapter 11

    Yes, and I need therapy for the anxiety that this story provides me...
  2. FormerMember4

    Chapter 11

    It was nice to get a different perspective of this event. I really do hope that Declan kept that video. The most upsetting thing about Bailey... He has no support at home. His mother is a poor excuse of a mother. I understand she is grieving, but get yourself some help. Too bad Bailey's father cant give her a boot in the ass from the other side. I hope when things come forth... Chris and Eric become the laughing stock of the school. Karma is a bitch when it comes back for you!
  3. FormerMember4

    Chapter 11

    Thanks for making me a blubbering mess... I still have tears as I write this. Adrian just cant catch a break. Thankfully his mother saved him... Even if it was a little late. Although, it seems she feared her husband. Looks like the man of the cloth is the biggest sinner. See you in hell! Hopefully the man loses everything! I am so happy that Corey told Adrian he loved him. They will be good for each other. The love shows in their actions. A love that isn't questioned. Even if Brett loves Corey. Corey deserves happiness. They might repair friendship, but Brett had his chance. Corey's father is extremely loving and supportive. He guides Corey without interfering. You could tell the annoyance he had about Brett's mother. Not her place to mettle.
  4. This was certainly a packed chapter. I would say having four individuals move for you... Shows love. However, moving to Hawaii isn't exactly something you'd have to twist my arm. Looks like a cliffhanger. Who will be in danger... Is it Derek's son. Tune in next week... Same bat time, same bat channel. LOL!
  5. FormerMember4

    Chapter 68

    I am so very sorry for your loss. I know this was not an easy chapter to write. Dealing with a very similar experience 2 years ago. I'm not sure I'll be able to go much further. I love these characters... Yet, I still haven't worked through my own situation... Just a little too raw for me. I hope this will be a cathartic release for you. With your situation being so recent... Know your pain.
  6. FormerMember4

    Chapter 17

    Someone is evil for ending the chapter where they did. Corey is not just a good boss. He is a good and sincere friend. He gave very sound advice... Advice from experience and the heart. While I think Elena should stop meddling. I do think in this case her opinion was warranted. Alec needs to be able to move on too. Liam can't keep him at arms length. While difficult, he needs to be extremely honest about his feelings and fears...
  7. That movie was just ok to me... Acting was ehhh, subject left you feeling dirty!
  8. FormerMember4

    New Growth

    Another great chapter CG... These two couples have always been my favorites. They both in their ways signify the sweetness of new first love. It is touching to see the caring Greg has for Denny. He is so patient and loving. Which allows Denny to relax and be comfortable... Working through his past demons. Jay and miles have so much respect for each other. That's a beautiful quality in a relationship. Every action with them comes from a place of love. The sweetest most innocent love!
  9. You are right though... Its 2017. And we've made huge progress. Except the American film industry doesn't recognize us. Only independent filmmakers and studios are making them. Moonlight was good as well. The filmmaker said it took about a decade to get it made. I'm tired of the recycled stereotypical characterization. I'm not a flaming queen cokehead slut. I want real characters who aren't either.
  10. I actually rented one a few nights ago... Very good, does have some deep moments. Its called Akron!
  11. FormerMember4

    Chapter 55

    I was picturing a bunch of queens screaming Sthop the snakes... Sthop the snakes!
  12. That's a great title next to your name!
  13. Happy Birthday Sasha!
  14. Hmm... Forging a beneficial relationship with the government. Now your really dealing with blood suckers. Since they survive in the shadows. New agency called Shadow!
  15. FormerMember4

    Journal 2

    I am really enjoying the new perspective of this sequel. While at this point it seems more psychology. It does not detract from the story. Actually I really think it helps with character development. I look forward to learning more about Chris's past and potential future...
  16. Gary... You have created a beautiful story with Morningstar. Your vision and detail is just mesmerizing. It is heartbreaking to see all that Fendral was carrying. The loss of a mate and children. The feelings of failing your pack. Many burdens for a man to carry. With all that being said. He is the missing piece for Kellar. In a single conversation, Fendral told him to be proud of what he is. It isn't something to shy away from. He is the best of both of his parents. Fendral connected to his grandson so beautifully. An interesting and unexpected piece of information came forth. The lineage that was thought to be from his father... Actually came down from his maternal grandmother. His mother was protecting him, she knew his destiny. She was a warrior for making sure he survived. Even if that meant her own life. Thank you for the beautiful story... I look forward to each installment. Which always leaves you guessing and amazed!
  17. FormerMember4

    Chapter 10

    I agree with you! However, if you love both boys. Allow them their mistakes and resolutions. I understand Brett is her son, sometimes you just need things to play out.
  18. FormerMember4

    Chapter 10

    I really enjoyed this chapter. Corey is really maturing. He is starting to analyze issues logically. Which allows him informed decisions. Instead of just a knee jerk reaction. Adrian is starting to come out of his shell. This was apparent with the fight with Tommy. As well as instigating the kiss with Corey in front of his family. The actions of Mrs. Weaver were completely uncalled for. A little heartbreaking if I'm being honest. Brett just like Corey has to take responsibility for his own actions. It isn't Corey's fault that Brett wasn't in the game... Grow the hell up!
  19. Wow... Great job Dodger! The chapter was very well done. I could see events unfold the way you described. It had a very realistic feel with the confusion, sadness, happiness and Nathan's complete joy. Nathan is the most incredible boy at his age. His love and dedication is beautiful. It seems he will always provide Robbie his unwavering support. Robbie's biggest cheerleader. With the support of the whole family. I really hope Robbie understands that he really is home. With a most unusual ally. Nicola is proving to be girl with many layers. I'm very impressed seeing her support Nathan and Robbie. I look forward to upcoming chapters. A most enjoyable story!
  20. I definitely missed any appearance of Maria. However, a very enjoyable chapter. Its nice to see Raymond get his family ranch back... What an absolute bitch of a mother. To leave any remembrance of Raymond's father behind. Its nice to see after many lost years. Chemistry is still alive and well with Danny and Raymond.
  21. FormerMember4

    Birthday Gifts

    I knew something in Seth's past was holding him back.... Emotional, verbal, physical abuse would definitely make you cautious. Liam so far isn't moving too fast. However, he will definitely need to handle Seth very delicately. Until he has built up trust.
  22. FormerMember4

    Days 28 to 30

    I find "Monsters hide at every turn " the most disturbing. Straight to the point... With very few words.
  23. I agree that the genre continues to change. Doesn't seem to make it flow unnaturally though. If Theo is working for the government. The secrets out. Their is no way he wouldn't be giving progress reports. The question is... What branch is he working for?
  24. Art is subjective... Ask 10 people, get 10 different answers. With all answers providing some form of truth.
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