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    Chapter 1

    An awesome chapter. A fantastic way to wrap up a murder mystery. Great characters and a wonderful ending.
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    Divine Delays

    Chaos ahead, if they are making plans.
  3. A wonderful chapter
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    Chapter 18

    Through all the battles, Kaylen, Ronan and Thomas stood firm. They are showing there love for each other in private, but true squires by day.
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    First Blood

    Is this practice, before the main event
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    Chapter 2

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    Chapter 2

    I love Mrs Hartley, she's adorable as a mother. They are gonna be regular customers in that shop.
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    Chapter 2

    The story of how Tom and Arjan broke up, whilst they still loved each other was quite sad.
  9. A beautiful chapter. Tom finally knows the truth from Kitt. Tom has met Matt, but wouldn't reveal anything about Kitt. Tom will be important in bringing Matt and Kitt together, but not until Kitt is ready.
  10. We have Ace a psychology student, in a toxic relationship with Carter. Not the uni experience he was after. Along comes Leo, a frat leader. Who offers Ace a way to escape his toxic relationship. It comes with rules, No Sex, No Kissing and No Falling in Love. Read on to discover much more about Carter, Ace and Leo.
  11. A bittersweet ending. Carter is arrested. Leo and Ace parting the way they did was heartbreaking for the both of them. It's goodbye, but hopefully they meet again.
  12. Our four need to plan, before they rush into there next battle.
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    Chapter 14

    Sam has been removed as a player, safe with Ben's Aunt. Pink becomes Green, for her failure. Justin thinks he was doing, a liability, so the GM removes him from the board. That leaves Ben and Tim. Tim is so angry, he wants to kick ass and hurt the GM. The GM is winning for know, but he’s left Ben and Tim in the game, will that be his downfall.
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    Chapter 49

    Awesome chapter. I'm glad Shaun kept his job, his Spanish has really improved.
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    Chapter 1

    That was awesome
  16. That was a wonderful chapter. Everyone happy and grateful to Maggie/Grandma that they don’t need to move.
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    Chapter 1

    Awesome chapter. Simon sharing with demon and Charlie making out with a demon. This should be fun.
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    Prologue

    That was hilarious. Tying the boyfriend up and hiding on top of the fridge, all because of a love potion.
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    Chapter 13

    That's to gentle, she needs to be publicly humiliated, along with the rope and electric cattle prod.
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    Chapter 13

    That was a brutal chapter, it's not just a game anymore. They are playing with people's lives, there friendship and state of mind. Sam is just a 14 year old kid, who they attacked. They took everything from him, especially his friendship. It's no wonder he's become mentally unstable. That was a brutal ending to the chapter, two boys both mentally braking down.
  21. Leo, gave Carter a few home truths. Carter of course tried to deflect them, he needs to be punished for what he has done.
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