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.......👀 That was fucking hot. Congratulations on your first blow job, Carter, sucking dick is awesome!! 👏 You are pacing Carter’s introduction to gay sex very nicely, Rumpelstiltskin. There are so many other things to direct one’s attention to, it really does feel like a Wonderland. Looking forward to more and to your return.

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Josh and Kells were on my mind this morning, then I realized it’s been a while since I read anything about them. Hoping RL is okay with you and that we get to see more of this journey of love and healing soon. 💝

I thought about the moving aspect, too. It sheds some more understanding on why people who want to come out do move away from their hometowns sometimes.

Can these two ever catch a break?!?! It’s fucked up to hope this is random but as the vice principal knew who Adam and Troy’s Mom were and didn’t treat them the way he treated the other two mothers looking for children, I doubt it is. 😔 There was no talk of Mike escaping and I don’t think Kyle’s brother would do this but this town sounds full of really repressed people prone to violence so who knows at this point; I wouldn’t even rule out Adam’s incubator right now. Please let Troy be okay and while HEA would be nice, giving them some peace being unmolested by other people and their issues for a good bit is okay, too.

This was one of the most sadly beautiful chapters I’ve ever read. 😢 ❤️💔💕

There’s something about Mark.... Carter handled himself well in the interview but he still has to deal with Simon-how dare Alex think that Aron was cheating when he’s the cheater; It’s clearly the case of the pot calling the kettle black. Alex is no bueno, I think he’s a selfish narcissist and really don’t know how Aron was so fooled; Even if he had blinders on in the beginning, the scales had to fall off eventually; I don’t even know what Simon sees in him. Enjoy your time off the grid.

I just spent yesterday and today reading “Wolf Like Me” and “Wild Card” straight through and it was SO GOOD!!!! O. M. G.!!!! 😍 😍 “W.L.M.” is a favorite story of mine and this continuation is a delicious addition. You’ve created characters it is easy to be heavily invested in Dayne and I’m not ready to part with these characters or their adventures yet. I eagerly await future updates, there are so many more people to meet and so many situations still to be resolved.

Your comment to my call comment on the last prompt brought this one to my attention, Thank You!! Now: How can this be It?!?? Lol!! Maybe I missed anything decisive but it looks like Ryan was changing his mind about running away with Darren at the end. I didn’t like: “A man who had seduced his partner, trying to splinter his family. Their family. This was emergency mode.” Was Ryan really that gullible? I respect your right to call an end when you see fit but I missed seeing Darren face justice, whether through the loss of his relationship or his freedom. The trio of stories were intriguing, regardless of this end. Thank you for taking us along on this ride.

I love how naturally sensual Indie is; It defies his cold demeanor. He is an ice capped volcano.

This is my fourth (or maybe fifth or sixth time) reading this and this is still the best first time sex scene I have ever read. This is also one of my favorite stories.

That bitch!! If I was Mrs. C, I would not have called Adam’s incubator to let her know anything, she lost the right to know anything about him long ago. Everybody showed great restraint in not belting that wench back when she smacked Adam. I really hope he won’t be hearing any more from that corner, if I were him I would want her parental rights legally terminated. I’m glad Adam’s on the road to recovery and will soon resume life with the rest of his real family.

And add two more members to the Waters family. The Waters family has expanded from a lake to an ocean, joined by love instead of only blood.

Hear Hear

My deepest condolences on the loss in your family. Your grief kind of goes along with the sad tone to this chapter, painful as it is, I appreciate how you don’t shy away from the shit life dishes out; You can’t appreciate the peaks without the valleys and life has both. Please know we aren’t going anywhere, take all the time you need to do and deal with everything you need to, I think I can safely speak for my fellow readers in saying there’s no rush. Blessings to you and may you find the little joys that can exist during times of great pain.

Thanks for reaching out, see you at normal programming.

And when I saw the name of the chapter, I thought you were being naughty with a play on the phrase “tossing salad” but alas, it was my dirty mind, not yours, 😄

Curiouser and curiouser. Just how deep is this rabbit hole? And who is Alex truly when Alex is Alex? I’m curious about the “proof” Alex has on Aron, I feel it’s something that may not be that big (or exist at all) but his jealousy has gone amok. I like how this story reminds me that beauty is only skin deep and how insecure beautiful people really are. (Or can be) You look at Alex and would think his beauty has given him everything but he is quite jealous. A secure person would not make Aron choose between he and Carter, nor would he need to be a narcissistic bitch to everyone who works for him. Alex is quite a case. Fascinating, frustrating and infuriating but quite a case. I’m distressed about Alex’s lover but that’s okay because the real Alex can have him when Carter and Aron get together. 😊 Well done, Rumpelstiltskin.

Missing this week’s installment and hoping all is ok with the authors.

Very good and very intriguing, Rumpelstiltskin. Of course I say expand one day but if you leave it as a stand-alone it did it’s job. Your straw to gold abilities remain unchanged.

You will always be Rumpelstiltskin to me now, that’s going with you on every story I read that you write. 😉 The update suggestion wasn’t serious (entirely) 🤭; I was just being greedy because I am always looking for more at the end of every chapter. I’m more than willing to wait on whenever you post; You always make it worthwhile. 💝 🥇

So.... Aron is a bit submissive sexually. It explains some things about his relationship with Alex but not all. The biggest sex organ in the body is the brain so I hope Carter realizes that Alex’s body is not functioning from some type of muscle memory, that was aaaalllll Carter. I’ve been thinking about the title of the story-while I’m familiar with the characters from “Alice in Wonderland” I’ve never read the book or seen the movie so don’t know if it references the story or something to be later proved in this one. Bedtime in the Ruskin household tonight is going to be in-ter-res-ting Oh and if you’re taking suggestions, feel free to update the story more than one a week. 😁

“....I was quickly learning that some things in life are better left alone, and unfortunately, the majority of the time it’s peoplewho are better left alone. I don’t believe for a second that people don’t change. After all, I did. But, you can’t want someone to change. They have to want it.” That’s it in a nutshell, the secret to every relationship. As long as there are two people in a relationship and one won’t acknowledge a problem or change, you have to choose to stay or walk away, no matter who it is. Blood ties don’t always make a family and friendships are outgrown. This is is my second reread and it was just as engrossing as the first time. It’s a beautiful piece of literature.

As a female, I can understand and share your sentiment, to an extent. ”Bro” or “Girl” code (because there is one for females) Gordon was wrong for going after Linda, was he skulking around Brady and his family all these years because of genuine friendship or because he wanted in Linda’s pants? It does happen and I’m only pointing out that Brady isn’t the only one smelling in this situation. Linda did choose to be with Gordon and with that happening so soon after her marriage breaking up, I question whether she is rebounding or genuinely involved-she could be using Gordon to get back at Brady. If Linda and Gordon are genuinely in love I wish them well, (“the course of true love never did run smooth”) it doesn’t change the fact their dating is questionable. (many starts are) Instead of “Bro” or Girl” code how about the golden rule? That’s all it really is, anyway.