This is such a good read!
argh I’ve just gone to click on next chp and there is nothing there 😱…… now the waiting game begins for me as well as the characters! 😬
Sorry, couldn’t finish this. The style of writing drove me mad and I gave up. Too old for “grinder style”?
Others, fortunately, got to the end and enjoyed it. I didn’t.
Although not a fantasy fan, I gave this ago and was glad I did. World-building is v good and coherent. I liked the likable characters and loved the Magister. As others have commented, the ending is abrupt but powerful. Well done.
After the first couple of lines I was ready to give up. I just didn’t “get” it. But as an obedient reader I continued. The last line made it worth the effort- very twisted… and funny in a sick way.
The title says it all. Some secrets maybe good, family secrets rarely are and this story is one of what happens when the Pandora’s box of family secrets is opened. It’s a v moving story building to a climax and revelation. Revealing the truth has never been so important.
well done, author.