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    A Good Deed

    Gary L commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in A Good Deed

    O.M.G. 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
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    A very enjoyable story which is not just about the night the protagonists spend together but the build up and how we learn about the two guys. The combination of passion and the boss’s sense of responsibility and respect for the intern make it a very good read.
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    A raunchy, well-written piece. V enjoyable, perhaps too much!,
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    Currently chasing her bigger sister around and scaring her to bits as she charges at her wearing her “armour”! Another week to go before vet discharges her, hopefully. I’m off to UK so she better be well.
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    That’s what she thinks! post vet visit she now has the “Elizabethan collar” as the Spanish call it as she has a post op slight inflammation. Boy is she p****d with daddy Gary.
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    Boyfriend trouble

    Gary L commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Boyfriend trouble

    A great chp. I loved the cafe dialogue between the youngsters! Toby plays a more and more important role for me in the story. The story goes from strength to strength x
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    @kbois: Attached photo of Lilibeth, AKA 001 Archterrorist. It’s in the eye glance that you see a wiener dog’s evil soul….
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    I most certainly would have! As a friend of mine once said (after being pushed into pool by an earlier victim): “Revenge will be swift and frequent!” And yes, you get off Scott free on the detective story line. Um, you are one sneaky @Thirdly! Xxxx
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    A very constructive analysis. Spot on, from my viewpoint.
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    Your comments are irreplaceable, @Summerabbacat! 🤗
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    What I Want The Most

    Gary L commented on Jean87's story chapter in What I Want The Most

    33 is too young to pass away 😢
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    Loved this: ”When I call out her name, my bad dreams cower in fear”
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    A Good Deed

    Gary L commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in A Good Deed

    Pretty, yes. Manipulative, yes. Dumb, yes. Intelligent, no. Sharp as a tack, debatable on what type of tacks you buy.
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    And I hadn’t even started yet. If that isn’t a sexual cliffhanger, I don’t know what is…
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    A real shit-show

    Gary L commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in A real shit-show

    The chp title says it all! As they say here, “¡uff!” can’t believe I even feel a bit sorry for Deidre….
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    A Good Deed

    Gary L commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in A Good Deed

    I can’t wait for Thanksgiving. There should be mega fireworks 🧨
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    A Good Deed

    Gary L commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in A Good Deed

    Enjoy your 14 minutes of fame! 🤗
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    Cats AND wiener dogs….. And don’t I know it
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    Chapter titles are worthy of note! They do not deceive!!
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    The Dinner Date

    Gary L commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in The Dinner Date

    Phew it’s getting hot in here!
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    So, so good. I’m looking forward to re-reading the whole story once complete. I suspect I will find nuances that have escaped me thus far. This has become a worthy part of @Robert Hugill’s collection.
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    Thanks, Dads

    Gary L commented on Inkognito's story chapter in Thanks, Dads

    1000 words of fun. I loved this the most: My dads have two modes: lovingly overinvolved and aggressively candle-scented. more, please 🙏
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    Yes, it feels as if we are there, on the beach, on the deck, everywhere, with these characters. The prose is just a joy to read except when we are taken to feelings that are too uncomfortable. Easily my best read of the year, so far. But just how much torment still lies ahead?
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    A breathtakingly exquisite piece of writing that camouflages the emotional and sexual torrents within.
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