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Gary L

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  1. Is that a clue or are you going to inspire me!?!?
  2. Umm. I’ve got the opening sentence sorted. It’s all of three words but strongly connected to the theme. For the rest I need Seshat to do her stuff… or Calliope… or Brigid….
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    Chapter 1

    A fun start for the reader (and Brad); not quite the same feelings for our poor hero…
  4. Funny you should say that…. Greta ill during night. Got about 2 hours sleep. Now waiting for next flight. Retail therapy helped!
  5. Now in Frankfurt, Germany for a few hours R&R. Greta was ill through the night so abandoned sleep at 03.15. Now awaiting boarding. God, 12 hours to get from Valencia to Birmingham (uk).
  6. You guys are so prolific!!
  7. Waiting to see if my flight will be cancelled tomorrow. As I leave for airport at 04.00 not sure I will get any sleep. General strike called for Valencian Community in protest at handling of the October floods by regional gov. Since said gov has an absolute majority the strike will have zero influence, just tens of thousands of travelers stuffed.
  8. But this one did! Hope all goes well, Chris x
  9. @Summerabbacat I will be in the doghouse as I fly to UK alone tomorrow…
  10. You obviously don’t have the evil wieners from Hell who could rival a nuclear clock for their expectations of my punctuality….
  11. More delights coming in abundance. Denise is a bit of a handful, to say the least! I an so grateful to @Robert Hugill for organising chp publications to arrive just after I sit down after walking the dogs! So considerate of him!
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    Chapter 3

    How did I miss this story? It’s a v good read.
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    Chapter 2

    But if the underage child has been in a homosexual relationship, would that be an issue in a State like NC? Or that his action materially caused the car crash with his shoe hitting father’s head? Seems at least plausible to me as an outsider to US system.
  14. Brad or Lyn? Or am I confused 🤔
  15. Good luck! I gave up a great job with Fidelity Investments in UK at 45 and came to Spain with no job. Started as an English coach and ended up as a school director. I certainly missed the money opportunities in UK but nothing else. It is always worth going for it, whatever your goal might be. ¡Mucha suerte!
  16. Twenty years of life packed into 6,000 words might seem to be rushing it. But the opposite is true and the story reads at a leisurely pace. A very nice story of how having sex isn’t the most important thing, making love is. An excellent read.
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  17. Gary L

    The Answer

    A very good read, a tale of redemption without Shawn knowing he was lost until nearly too late. Lovely writing.
  18. A highly informative and yet also emotionally charged chp. Those parents are the limit. A notable chp. Thanks.
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    Kidnapped

    And very often your readers!
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    A Good Deed

    Perhaps “inexperienced” authors might be a gentler way to make the contrast? However, I totally agree with you on the two great authors you name.
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    Kidnapped

    I fear we will all, like Will, require patience. ps where are Batman and Robin? Brad and Jake in masks and tight shorts should soon arrive in the Batmobile and do their stuff:
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    Chapter 1

    Interesting , what, with a new guy in St Peter’s. V topical, Chris! On a theological/Church law note, if anyone cares, an RC priest cannot pardon a sin in which he himself has participated.
  23. Gary L

    A Good Deed

    O.M.G. 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
  24. A very enjoyable story which is not just about the night the protagonists spend together but the build up and how we learn about the two guys. The combination of passion and the boss’s sense of responsibility and respect for the intern make it a very good read.
  25. A raunchy, well-written piece. V enjoyable, perhaps too much!,
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