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  1. Gary L
    Thanks. My first short offering is almost finished……
  2. Gary L
    My day just got better! Thanks @Reader1810 🤗🤗
  3. Gary L
    I hate to disagree with you, @BendtedWreath, but, I thought your prose was really beautiful with some v well-rounded phrases. Kudos to you and I hope to read more of you..
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    I for one am very glad you didn’t. I loved it.
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    Chapter 1

    Gary L commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Aren’t we all! The other day Paco came home with a waft of Guerlain vetiver filling the house. G knows how much it would cost…… a Christmas idea, no doubt. 🧐
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    Chapter 1

    Gary L commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 1

    There is drama, and then there is DRAMA!!!!! such fun xxxx
  7. Gary L
    An enjoyable piece!
  8. Gary L
    The story is engaging from the start and, ever, it is beautifully written by @empath. But, for me, the star is the structure of the piece. It is perfectly paced. Bravo/a
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    The Last Unicorns

    Gary L reviewed kbois's story in Fiction

    This story does exactly what it says in the prompt, so writer deserves kudos for that. But beyond that we have a great little taster of @kbois’s great creative skill. Unicorns, huh 🤔 Didn’t see that ending coming. A lovely read.
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    Chapter 1

    Gary L commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 1

    @kbois: As soon as I read bergamot and sandalwood you had me in the palm of your hands! 🙌 such fun, or not……
  11. Gary L
    Stunning. Heart-rendering. Beautifully written. thank you.
  12. Gary L
    Nope, me neither but it’s a bit early for my brain to function at optimal capacity… who am I kidding?
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    Gone to Hell

    Gary L reviewed northie's story in Fiction

    Fancy a new job? Make sure you know what might be involved. A tale of 21st-century management “skills” taking on an ancient industry. hugely funny with a delightful premise. Well done @northie!
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    Well done to you all! And a special congratulations to @Valkyrie and the prompt team……..
  15. Gary L
    I’ve got mrs g withdrawal symptoms….!!!!!
  16. Gary L
    Totally agree. Here it’s 7 pm, 21°C and I’ve had to put the heating on as the air coming off the sea is so damp. Walked evil daughters of Satan (aka Greta and Lilebeth the mini wieners) and gosh was it “chilly”.
  17. Gary L
    Here it should be “winter-lite”. Instead, balcony windows wide open and a nice 20°. It’s not cold enough to make oranges change from green to orange!
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    Chapter 9

    Gary L commented on Connectwriter's story chapter in Chapter 9

    @drsawzall is on fire with these comenta and analysis. 🧐
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    Chapter 9

    Gary L commented on Connectwriter's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Great comment and I totally agree. 🤗This is a very good read, indeed. Thank you.
  20. Gary L
    A. Joyful read 🤗
  21. Gary L
    This is absolutely essential. We had a dreadful teacher who cost us quite a few students and hits to reputation but when new HR director received request to sack her, the bosses had recorded nothing, even when she told a guy that it was no surprise his mother had only one arm (true) because of how bad he was. No one had complained about her in writing and she escaped Scott free. take care Chris.
  22. Gary L
    Have a go at doing your take on “Circumnavigation”!! I think you’d do us proud 🥹 it’s still a great story after the years pass.
  23. Gary L
    Just raising the tone! No?!?!?!?! 😁
  24. Gary L
    Thank you!! So nice of you xxxx
  25. Gary L
    I tripped over the wire and fell backwards 😝Acute lumbago followed by a heavy cold has left me whacked. Can’t wait to read the stories.
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