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    Oh no I do,enjoy reading it, I just feel frustrated at times. But characters are like real people. I can love my friends and still feel incredibly frustrated by them. Your writing is good and your story is good. I just happen to have an intense dislike to a certain character. He reminds me of a person in real life I cannot stand, but that's my issue. Jordan may have started out not so great, but he has grown up in a hurry. Noah still to me reads as a giant child with so much immaturity. I'll resign myself to the inevitable. Lol. I won't feel like it's been wasted time, even if I am disappointed at the pairing. I promise.
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    Honestly as much as I have enjoyed most of the story I feel almost let down knowing that you're probably going to have Noah and Jordan get together when Noah is such a terrible horrible person........... he's selfish and manipulative and spoilt. I'm not trying to be mean or insulting because I think you write a great story but you wrote Noah a little too well as a villain and I cannot be happy if he ends up with Jordan he doesn't deserve Jordan and he doesn't deserve to have the happy ending in here only Jordan does I almost don't want to finish the story at all but a tiny piece of me hopes that I'm wrong and you actually write a story that doesn't leave us with the expected
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    Chapter 29

    Starrynight22 commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 29

    Loved it sui I'm also very interested in knowing who Ayu is talking about..... perhaps a certain Wolfie best friend?
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    Yeah? You can join the 3 random online friends I've never met but have known 10+ years, the local news, sasha, 6 porn stars, nihilist arbys, gay news, and a few sarastic emo joke accounts
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    Sorry to all having snowmageddon My brother is on vacation in Tampa and I'm super jealous. Also. I just went through my Twitter and wow do I follow a random hodge podge of people/entities lol.
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    I'm waiting for the grammys. Even tho every year I'm borderline confused at some of the musical acts lol
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    Older one spoiled me. Nearly always listened, never tantrummed, stuck next to me when out and about. Little one is like a hurricane in small boy form. I actually bought him a baby tether for when he was 1. He was a runner. The tantrums are finally slowing down now at 3.5 years. He is the kid people look at as birth control.
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    Oh that would be awesome. We have some therapy dogs that come by every week. There used to be a lady who brought this tiny mini horse but we heard through the grapevine she became ill and can no longer make visits.
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    They hardly ever get to see young children. Little is still shy with them but he will be better in a few more visits. Plus I'm the boss so it's nice to see how things are on my day off.
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    Its a snappy 16F here in Cincy Taking little one to see my elderly folk at work. Have a super morning all.
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    Chapter 2

    Starrynight22 commented on Wind Dancer's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I was hoping to read this. Author, please come back and fix
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    DOLPHINS! And Quebec is CLEARLY playing for the dark side
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    I feel your frustration Molly. I planned out my whole units afternoon including lunches for all staff, on the premise we would have a training at 230 and one at 3. It's a nursing home in it so everyone has to take turns for lunch and provide coverage to their co-workers residents. My trainer was 35 minutes late.
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    Chapter 5

    Starrynight22 commented on Aditus's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Omg I so easily pictured the juice box slappage lol So he can see mates now? Or just that one set because it's the kings guard. Either way, super cool
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    I've never successfully poached an egg. I mean. I've cooked them in water but they always break and look terrible lol
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    Chapter Thirty

    Starrynight22 commented on Ethan's story chapter in Chapter Thirty

    Please don't let Jordan take him back. Please.
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    Too chancy a game for me. One of my old biology professors is an off the grid kind of guy and he and his wife pick wild mushrooms. He's quick to let people know that even after 40 years of doing it he can never get complacent.
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    I like folding laundry. Its very soothing, a good time to do deep breathing and thinking.
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    Back and Forth

    Starrynight22 commented on JujuTheDruid's story chapter in Back and Forth

    Oh man. I hope that's zafiro in his house.....
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    Chapter 5

    Starrynight22 commented on oat327's story chapter in Chapter 5

    I'm glad this is back. It was nice to get more back story on Kevin. And he does deserve better than what Duncan can currently give.
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    Admirer X

    Starrynight22 commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Admirer X

    What a fun ride this story was. I was getting so,anxious at the end waiting for Elijah to figure it all out for us. Thank you !
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    I'm working on 729. Haven't gotten far yet but I like it.
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    As much as I hate Noah , I'm sad he is self destructing. Not surprised at all. But sad. Maybe Jordan should find happiness in australia.
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    Haiku

    Starrynight22 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Haiku

    Hoping for hopping left me smiling. I like alliteration very much. And I also liked the imagery of white battalions of flowers. Short poetry isn't something I feel I do well either, but I enjoy long rambling free verse. But I don't read these as being thick or brutish. Nice work tim
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    Neighbors

    Starrynight22 commented on Starrynight22's story chapter in Neighbors

    Thanks. I'll try to give more. And Seth is a huge douche. And he is modeled after a person in real-life lol
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