Starrynight22
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Hoping for hopping left me smiling. I like alliteration very much. And I also liked the imagery of white battalions of flowers. Short poetry isn't something I feel I do well either, but I enjoy long rambling free verse. But I don't read these as being thick or brutish. Nice work tim
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Thanks. I'll try to give more. And Seth is a huge douche. And he is modeled after a person in real-life lol
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Thanks Gary. I'm hoping Cory tells me he is ready to move on soon, but who knows. Dan however might already have an adventure in the works.
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Awww it's much sweeter to know a comment is a hard earned one. Thanks for taking a chance on my prompt. I'm trying to see what else could lie here for these guys.
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Well hopefully I can write more. I think we've all seen how long chapters do for me......lol. I thought it was better to stick to small stories for now. But maybe I can write a series of interconnected small stories.
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I agree on coffee. I adore it. And thanks for the comment.
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Thanks @Carlos Hazday and @Parker Owens. I'm glad it was a good read. I'm not sure cory is done talking to me. I feel like there is potential to have him show up again.
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“Not my problem anymore!” I shift on the couch and turn the tv volume down a bit. My neighbors have been fighting for what seems like hours, mostly at an indistinct rumble level of noise, punctuated by louder words and the occasional slam. I pay just enough attention to be sure I won't have to call emergency services. They're usually such nice guys, quiet to live next to and cheerful when we see each other in passing. In fact, until today, the last two years had been uneventful. We pass each
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In which Cory overhears his neighbors and can't help what he does next.
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#726 Deliver Us From Evil
Starrynight22 commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in #726 Deliver Us From Evil
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I love this story. Diarmid is so scared. I hope he takes a chance to reconnect with nico
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Good. Breakup. I hate Noah now more than ever. Anyway. I'm glad Jordan has a good mom. And this chapter was a good one.
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Yes. Team ditch noah
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I'm,tired of Noah. On one hand... I get his concerns .....but he is a man-child. He's just gonna pretend forever to make his family happy? To have them support him financially? Isn't he almost graduated?? Maybe I'm just too out of touch with youth, and can't remember how it was to be financially dependent.... But I'm over this mess. Its dragging along with Noahs babylike attitude. Jordan deserves better. Give Him a HEA .....with literally anyone else.
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Scene One, A Seaside Promenade in Summer, Part 1
Starrynight22 commented on Drew Payne's story chapter in Scene One, A Seaside Promenade in Summer, Part 1
Truly inspiring writing here. I wanna know what happened to his leg. Why is he there? Is he meeting someone ? How does Nathan feel about him? Is he even aware his brother feels so inferior to him ? -
I love the snow dappling the pines. Such a rarely used and beautiful phrase
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Awesome. And I loved the cameo by Efrain and Cory. They're a couple of my all,the favorites. So. Lots going on for 20 year old CJ. what are they planning with Gina. It sounds suspiciously like a baby......and that worries me because they're so very young yet. I really hope I'm wrong.
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Conviction for the Future
Starrynight22 commented on MericCotton's story chapter in Conviction for the Future
I'm more than a little surprised at the not-ending of the story. We went from him and Jer hooking up to he just takes off alone in a road trip to ____? Its a bit abrupt. I'm glad he is able to start living again, hope he finds something that makes him peaceful again. -
Well....... At least Cheryl is yesterday's news
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Finally. I was starting to be concerned grant didn't feel any attraction or libido at all. He comes across as almost too mature for his age.
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The Tollbooth Operator
Starrynight22 commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in The Tollbooth Operator
Ummmmmmm. Oh. Hi...... :ducks and hides: -
Babies and kids died so easily back then. My grandpa and his family caught the measles in 1928. The 2 yr old died, his mother had a early stillbirth and my grandpa lost most of his hearing. Its what led him to my city at age 8, as we have a school for the deaf that used to offer boarding.
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I love vampires in general......and this version in particular. What a novel little twist that was. Can we please see more of John and Rendy?
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Fragment Nine: Results?
Starrynight22 commented on ColumbusGuy's story chapter in Fragment Nine: Results?
I like the story even though I am holding tight to my metaphorical life vest while swimming through the science and tech explanations. Every character and clearly the author is way smarter than me. -
Oh wow. That's an intensely sorrowful story. If only they had both been upfront and honest. Losing a friendship is a deep hurt, especially when in hindsight you see quite clearly how it could have been avoided.
