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Starrynight22

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  1. Starrynight22

    Neighbors

    Thanks Gary. I'm hoping Cory tells me he is ready to move on soon, but who knows. Dan however might already have an adventure in the works.
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    Neighbors

    Awww it's much sweeter to know a comment is a hard earned one. Thanks for taking a chance on my prompt. I'm trying to see what else could lie here for these guys.
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    Neighbors

    Well hopefully I can write more. I think we've all seen how long chapters do for me......lol. I thought it was better to stick to small stories for now. But maybe I can write a series of interconnected small stories.
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    Neighbors

    I agree on coffee. I adore it. And thanks for the comment.
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    Neighbors

    Thanks @Carlos Hazday and @Parker Owens. I'm glad it was a good read. I'm not sure cory is done talking to me. I feel like there is potential to have him show up again.
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    Neighbors

    “Not my problem anymore!” I shift on the couch and turn the tv volume down a bit. My neighbors have been fighting for what seems like hours, mostly at an indistinct rumble level of noise, punctuated by louder words and the occasional slam. I pay just enough attention to be sure I won't have to call emergency services. They're usually such nice guys, quiet to live next to and cheerful when we see each other in passing. In fact, until today, the last two years had been uneventful. We pass each
  7. In which Cory overhears his neighbors and can't help what he does next.
  8. I really want to know what happens next.
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    Chapter 4

    I love this story. Diarmid is so scared. I hope he takes a chance to reconnect with nico
  10. Good. Breakup. I hate Noah now more than ever. Anyway. I'm glad Jordan has a good mom. And this chapter was a good one.
  11. Yes. Team ditch noah
  12. I'm,tired of Noah. On one hand... I get his concerns .....but he is a man-child. He's just gonna pretend forever to make his family happy? To have them support him financially? Isn't he almost graduated?? Maybe I'm just too out of touch with youth, and can't remember how it was to be financially dependent.... But I'm over this mess. Its dragging along with Noahs babylike attitude. Jordan deserves better. Give Him a HEA .....with literally anyone else.
  13. Truly inspiring writing here. I wanna know what happened to his leg. Why is he there? Is he meeting someone ? How does Nathan feel about him? Is he even aware his brother feels so inferior to him ?
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    Tanka

    I love the snow dappling the pines. Such a rarely used and beautiful phrase
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    GMA IV

    Awesome. And I loved the cameo by Efrain and Cory. They're a couple of my all,the favorites. So. Lots going on for 20 year old CJ. what are they planning with Gina. It sounds suspiciously like a baby......and that worries me because they're so very young yet. I really hope I'm wrong.
  16. I'm more than a little surprised at the not-ending of the story. We went from him and Jer hooking up to he just takes off alone in a road trip to ____? Its a bit abrupt. I'm glad he is able to start living again, hope he finds something that makes him peaceful again.
  17. Well....... At least Cheryl is yesterday's news
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    WSD Chapter 17

    Finally. I was starting to be concerned grant didn't feel any attraction or libido at all. He comes across as almost too mature for his age.
  19. Ummmmmmm. Oh. Hi...... :ducks and hides:
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    AP Chapter 5

    Babies and kids died so easily back then. My grandpa and his family caught the measles in 1928. The 2 yr old died, his mother had a early stillbirth and my grandpa lost most of his hearing. Its what led him to my city at age 8, as we have a school for the deaf that used to offer boarding.
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    Chapter 1

    I love vampires in general......and this version in particular. What a novel little twist that was. Can we please see more of John and Rendy?
  22. I like the story even though I am holding tight to my metaphorical life vest while swimming through the science and tech explanations. Every character and clearly the author is way smarter than me.
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    Solace

    Oh wow. That's an intensely sorrowful story. If only they had both been upfront and honest. Losing a friendship is a deep hurt, especially when in hindsight you see quite clearly how it could have been avoided.
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    Chapter 26

    My soul throws confetti for this. I cannot wait to see milans wolf!!!!!!!!!! Yay! Wooohoooooooo Also. How cool and unexpected the bracelet turned Into a vine cocoon thing. What did the tree have to do with that?
  25. I actually don't think the kids came across too badly. Their dad is seeing the woman he cheated on his wife with. That's messed up. And from his responses he seems to have a frank relationship with them. In his sons response I heard encouragement to follow his dream and chastisement for holding back (which is very in character for Paul as it seems change is SUPER hard for him) In the first daughters response I heard pain. She identifies with mom.....has her husband cheated on her? In second daughter response I heard encouragement and reminder that life is fast and to live it up expressed in a gentler way than brother. Maybe it's because I speak this way to my parents. We have a more friends type relationship than traditional parent-child. Maybe it's not the norm, but it's within the range of normal, you know what I mean?
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