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Mrsgnomie

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  1. Have you tried emailing them or messaging them? To see if they respond?
  2. I enjoy these reading reports. Insightful. Is this something you’ll post randomly or do you think it will be more structured; monthly, quarterly, annually?
  3. Mrsgnomie

    Where's Loren?

    nothing like burnt penis skin residue to start your day right
  4. Will be lots of Potato! But not for a while. Once he’s here. There’s lots to love!
  5. Mrsgnomie

    Where's Loren?

    This is me! I love him! Where’d he go?! Asshole. I miss him. I wish he’d come back. Duck him, I don’t need him. Oh, look, I’m finally over him. Gawd, I was so stupid to think I loved him. Good riddance! Sees him nine months later: I never stopped loving him. I always knew it would work out. Faith like a mustard seed and all that.
  6. Mrsgnomie

    Where's Loren?

    Inguinal turf rash.
  7. As someone who has a husband that deals with homeless on a daily basis, I would not recommend confronting them. There’s a lot of really great ones, but there’s a lot of ones that have mental illnesses and it can be quite dangerous!
  8. Mrsgnomie

    Where's Loren?

    Great questions @frosenblum. They are hard to answer without taking away from the story as it unfolds. I will say that there isn't great detail of what Loren did for the 9 months, but I think you get a general idea to build your own consensus. As to Loe's patience, well...he and Jay are very different people...
  9. Mrsgnomie

    Where's Loren?

    I guess we will find out soon… 🙂🙂
  10. Mrsgnomie

    Where's Loren?

    Well...Jay is anyway
  11. Mrsgnomie

    Where's Loren?

    Ahh, thanks. I did not realize how hard it is to piece two stories together but I think it turned out okay! Maybe...don't look too closely, though?
  12. Mrsgnomie

    Where's Loren?

    ^^^^^ This. They really do have great friends.
  13. Mrsgnomie

    Where's Loren?

    I cannot lol. If I was the player I would be MORTIFIED. Probably why Garretts not about that life I would like to read the tweets that follow.
  14. Mrsgnomie

    Where's Loren?

    He waited over a year before this just to have Loren even notice him! lol The guy has nothing but patience. Probably helps that he’s busy AF, but it’s also at the core of who Jay is.
  15. Mrsgnomie

    Where's Loren?

    Well shit, Jay needed to play his hand perfectly or it was gonna be another 9 months. Major power plays at hand…by both of them lol
  16. chapter two Jay My gut churns as I step into the training facility. My lovely teammates know about my ‘rejection’ as it’s being told. They’ve hooked that juicy tidbit to the gossip battery and revved it up. Those who have no comment, say plenty with their happy-to-bring-Jay-down-a-notch-or-two smirks. It’s so rare they have a chance at me. I don’t do stupid shit, which makes me a difficult and highly sought-after target. Despite the teasing, I walk through the building with my h
  17. Mrsgnomie

    Story Scope

    This piece was great. As someone who usually just has an idea and begins writing without much prep or direction, just hope it all comes together along the way, this seems incredibly helpful.
  18. At first I thought you were quoting Jake Peralta from Brooklyn 99. Nope. That is not the case and I had to Google SCTV lol
  19. Took the country road to the valley today and got some shopping done. I found a Sous vide cooker on clearance, so that was awesome and got some yummo streaks! Dinners only a few hours away…
  20. I think this sounds good.
  21. Mrsgnomie

    Jay's Loelife

  22. Just keeping my head low lol You go re-read BN and then see if you can spot all the holes as they pop up between the two stories 😉
  23. Hey now…why you gotta be mean?
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