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Pride, Prejudice And Other Demons
Frostyvb commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pride, Prejudice And Other Demons
Rusty will come out of the closet and tell Matty that he has fallen in love with him they will consumate their relationship. It will free Rusty what holds him back in so many things his classes will rebound, basketball season being over doesn't matter. His family may turn their backs till he starts his singing career. -
MArk thank you for another great chapter, I love how you leave so many things hanging and there by wanting so much more. It a blessing for more. Take care of the personal load. It will all fall into place. We loyal followers will be here. 🙂
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I Think Blake should although I feel something will happen to make that not happen, Whether it be Blake's no account paren'ts. They might think they might smell money in the water for blackmail or what not, Or Aric's even though I think it is something they will get over quickly when they see how upset their son is and how happy he could be.
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Toby and the little girl both will be adopted and that will break the shell but Toby will start speaking. Your students will find one or two of the ones in the orphanage are truly good art students and will help them flourish.
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Chapter 1 Darts of Destiny
Frostyvb commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 1 Darts of Destiny
Very good start looking for a word to see where the story goes.- 131 comments
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I think before long Marty he’s gonna slip up and tell Rusty how he really feels. Not sure how Rusty’s gonna handle it.
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KH put a tracking bug inside a little girl knowing but she would be taken into protective custody by Sebastian and he could track back where everything and everybody was so he could attack that and get everything back. just a thought maybe not, but just a thought
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I read the story from one into the next. Throughout it’s entirety I was pulled along with great want and desire. I usually read at night to relax before going to bed. I will be honest reading the story I could not do that you’re a great author, and have a flare that not many do. Watching poor Ethan grow from the street urchin to find young man in all it went on has left me with a very warm spot after reading this moving story.
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I want to thank you for a very well written story. All through this reading there were times that I could visit myself in my own life. Many times I cried as I was reading it because I went through some of the similar things. Thank God not always as bad as what you had it but it was still very hard to go through. I thank you for helping me to relieve some of the weight that I have. I pray that no other child should have to go through this, even though I know it happens continually. again thank you and I wish you the world. frostyvb
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Thank you for another well written story. I look forward to the sequel and what will go on with the boys. I think too many children should be in their lives.
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Thank you for a very well written story. There’s not much more than I can say that others haven’t already. I look forward to seeing where the sequential stories will come along I wish you luck in your writing and speed as well, lol again thank you. frosty
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Smelling the sweats or something that I would do, lol. I hope the story continues on. Insert into hint hint
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I’m glad you continue the story I’m looking forward to reading it. Do you have a flare but not many have. As far as anything you’re doing a pretty good job take care.
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Wonderful chapter, I can see where the story will tie together now. Where are we for I was wondering just where you were going. Honestly you’re one of the better riders here and I as a reader appreciate that. I look forward to where the story goes
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Congratulations, great ending to a very good story. Book 2 would be nice to see where Jason and Nathan go what becomes of their lives. Again thank you
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I hope sometime in the future to see you finish this it’s a good start so many different ways it could go.
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While sci-fi may not be your best you certainly did a very good job on the story. Maybe sometime in the future you consider a sequel to this. It would be interesting to see what is happening with Brandon and Sage. give him kudosWhile sci-fi may not be your best you certainly did a very good job on the story. Maybe sometime in the future you consider a sequel to this. It would be interesting to see what is happening with Brandon and Sage. Again kudos very good story
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Cliffhangers really suck. Well it’s a good story and I like it. Hate to see what’s coming though.
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Thank you for another great story. I am someone said that this one’s over, but I know you’ll do more and I look forward to your great work. Thanks again frosty
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The story was excellent from the start to the finish. He kept me locked in there wanting to read more. Thank you for being a good author that you are frosty
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A budding friendship in the works is plain to see, I like to where you’re going to story and can’t wait to see what’s next,
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Great start, look forward to seeing where it goes from here. So many directions come to mind
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You just keep surprising me with more twists and turns. It is a shame to To see Arlene go. But a good shake up sometimes makes things work better for all. I look forward to reading what you write. frosty
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Love story and the way it’s going. I read the updates at night before I go to bed I look forward to them it helps me to relax not because you’re boring but because it takes my mind off of things going on. As one said, I’d love to be a fly on the wall on Monday can’t wait to see what happens kudosAnd keep up the good work
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Good start on what should be And even better story. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
