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  1. weinerdog

    Prologue

    Do I need to read previous stories before I read this?
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 10 S3

    Lonny is a very progressive parent. Whether his approach is right or wrong I'll let people more qualified than I make that judgement. “And when she made a face, it reminded me of a rotten apple when the skin gets all wrinkly,” Clint added, Clint's comment about Louella would have fit very well here with the other readers
  3. “Friends' Reactions, and Gavin's Visit” The way that is worded sounds like Gavin walks over to the Zamora's home on his own volition.Even he wouldn't be f---d up enough to go over and start stuff so I assume it will be for the right reason. ‘[He] killed his perverted uncle. I guess that was Micheal who said that .I know he's just a kid but I would have thought he would have known better to say that publicly Stephen King's 'Dreamcatcher' packed a heavy wallop. I f Mark hadn't have died I would have only been fair to let Leon hit Mark with a book ....Only in this case the book would be War And Peace
  4. Gordon probably had that planned since he told the boys they can'y go in there until they were both 12 Shane admonished his older brother, "I'm telling mom you said the 'f' word." "Don't be a pussy.' Oh smart Ray now Shane can also tell them you said the P word also
  5. weinerdog

    Chapter 38

    ‘They look so happy together,’ Aaron said to me as we watched them disappear into the scrub. ‘Yeah. They do.’ ‘Do you think that could be us one day? Neither of them could ever have the personality of Ben
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 38

    Maybe you're too "in tents".....sorry for that one
  7. Incredible chapter❤️ Now for the aftermath. No surprise the vultures er....the media are all over this I just hope they don't make an initial messed up report.When the neighborhood finds out about this most will be supportive but I'm sure (NOT a prediction) they'll be some yahoos who will blame The Zamora's for bringing that influence in the neighborhood' I really, really hope this isn't the case but I'm afraid of Gavin saying something to Stephen like" No wonder you're a f-----t ,you Uncle was a child molester" Oh I guess Leon could get some s--t also. I sure hope not🤞
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    Chapter 46

    I'm thinking with David being young that these guys think he's naive. I'm glad the contract is going to be scrutinized
  9. My initial reactions are usually my worst so take this with a grain of salt. So if the LiveFeed audience finds out about this so what? I think they would not find Jamie guilty by association for anything. So what is Wen hoping for? He mentioned LiveFeed covering Jamie meeting his parents.Does when hope Jamie loses it or something and then Wen would say to Hearst "See I told you he'a a leaver" I'm sure a smarter reader will have a better take then this
  10. I can see Rory following Kieran one night if that happens how would The Morain react to that? I wonder if Garran could give Kieran some pointers about how to past the trials.He may have spoken to his Dad about this “I am the Morain of Mending, yes,” she said with a theatrical sigh. “Unfortunately. Goddess of restoration, sacrifice, spiritual evolution, blah blah blah. I had a much better gig five centuries ago, but apparently everyone wants a trial these days.” She circled him slowly. “You’re here to become a better father or whatever?” I like her already😄 I would love to hear her and Ash banter
  11. I can't believe I got this done. I've been deathly sick. The only way I feel better is to sit in my shower so I wrote some of this in the actual running shower 😂 The struggle is real! So how do you do that without wet paper or Damage to your tablet? And how would an editor react to a bunch of wet sheets?🤔 Seriously Get well soon.Now on to read the chapter
  12. The only way to score in baseball is to make 4 left turns in a circle (or diamond if you wish) .What is it about men paying to see continuous left turns.BTW was your brother's dachshund was it a male dog by any chance
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 37

    Nice calm chapter.....And just before the party....OH NO!!! What are you planning to have happen at the party????
  14. Do you have any Lynx's er Links to that? (I know it's lame but I couldn't resist)
  15. knew that he had missed getting an A- on Legal History only because the professor liked him too much Getting an A- perish the thought😱 You’ll be on my conscience, and I don’t want that.” Well then Brad stop trying to force Lyn to have a beer with you that makes him get an A-
  16. BTW maybe because I'm so dense is why I ask this.The title I Wish I was Special I'm not sure I understand.I think Stephen IS special for the way he handled this .Was that the point of the title?
  17. Mark (I wish I can think of a name @Summerabbacat would use calling him Mark is giving him too much respect) has most likely given both brothers PTSD although Leon was unconscious for most of it I'm certain this close call did more damage Not to make light of anything but the way Stephen handled the gun Gavin (or anybody else who would give Stephen a bad time) should think twice about messing with him.Gavin would if he was smart but we know thats a HUGE if. Only one down side of Stephen splattering Mark's brain first I wish he had had enough brain activity to realize he got shot in the jewels
  18. On one hand I wanted to leave a love reaction but I have a feeling this is going to backfire on Ace.And Carter might find something to make Leo,Trsitan life miserable also.
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    Chapter 9 S3

    I did this so Preston would know that I wasn’t avoiding him, since he didn’t realize he was also seeing me as Devin, even though he didn’t know it at the time.I might be misunderstanding this but it sounds to me like Preston is going to find out in the future. “My brother and I would like to take you all out to eat, and this includes Michael and Devin’s friends, if they would like to join us.” While Gramps and Pops have never been stingy that is quite a gesture. Is it because of the value of the stuff they found in the cave? “Can you guys put your arms across my body again and hug me while we’re sleeping, like you did on vacation?” Could you imagine crazy women next seeing that?What she would do with that?.Not that she would try to peek in....Of course not “That’s why I wanted to shower with you, so I could burn your naked image into my mind, so I can use that image when I jerk off from now on.”......You never told us Clint was based on me as a kid
  20. Thats how people looked when I used to drive
  21. Those of you who know this author know how good he is. This isn't really a story per se. But if your under the age of 40 (Maybe even 50) You may find this interesting what what traveling by train was like in 1969
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  22. Thank you for this trip through time.Very interesting to see how thing were those days. I remember a lot of things (although I wasn't born yet..yeah right) But I never took a cross country trip on a train. A couple of things got my attention Back then, luggage didn’t have wheels.You with all the smart creative people that were around then I'm amazed it took so long for the luggage companies to think of that. I learned it was because you could buy a brand new house, only a block from the ocean, for around thirty thousand dollars. Whoa how times have changed.Your sister was sitting on a gold mine.Although to be fair property tax was getting outrageous then. I grew up In The San Diego area .Maybe you have found this out since that time but Del Mar had a great yearly summer fair that was very popular. And after the fair ended Del Mar racetrack had their season and a lot of celebrities would attendDesi Arnez of I love Lucy fame was always there.I tripped out when he mentioned Del Mar on an episode of I love Lucy. Thank you for the trip down memory lane
  23. I am not predicting this @Lee Wilson so don't change it if any of this MAY happen. With all the attention the guns got in this story it would be a good GUESS they will figure later in the story.IF it does it would be interesting who the shooter would be.Wouldn't it be a hoot if it was Michael. Mel and Sandy had to have had alcohol before the dance even from the most brazen that is unbelievable behavior. one of those couples were Mel and his date, the alleged booger eating Sandy. Did @Summerabbacat help you write this chapter. That sounds so much like one of his rants about characters he doesn't like
  24. The portal took them to Desmond room. You see Desmond? Even the portal knows just go with it.
  25. You say that like it's unusual or something🤔
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