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  1. I have seen low carb keto donuts online Granted its not a Krispy Kreme but it's something .And only costs
  2. I guess you don't want a Pulitzer Prize
  3. I'm curious if Alexander is actually different these days but when he reconnected with Lyn he for some reason reverted back to his old ways
  4. Well done again @Lee Wilson. You must have to empty your "trash bin" frequently given some of the horrid characters you have created. Here's what it will say in @Lee Wilson obituary 'His contribtion to society? Creating horrid characters
  5. The one possible challenge for Jeff might be he meets the academy's version of Brodie and said possible person tries to get Jeff to do something stupid with him. It may become a case of Jeff having a choice of become a snitch or go to juvy and possibly jail when he turns 18
  6. Up until this chapter I was assuming Jamie was going to do the tour and that might still be the case. But now I'm wondering if he will or won't.Great writing!
  7. weinerdog

    Chapter 8 S3

    They haven't found a way to get rid of mosquitos have they? Does that answer your question?
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 34

    I mentioned I hoped something like The siblings coming to the party in a previous chapter comment. I swear if this story is posted somewhere else I haven't been looking. Now the only missing piece in Aaron finding his brother
  9. I must say VERY suspenseful. “They didn’t even look,” Ash muttered, checking his own bag. “Idiots.” That's reflective of Scarlett's leadership huh? “You miss my devastating charm. My handsome face. My—” “Gods, stop.” If you had let Ash finish Desmond,Ash would have said "Humility"
  10. Lots of tension ahead 😘 REALLY!!!🤔 I would have never thought....OK I'm going to read the chapter now.
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 8 S3

    Even though there were other dogs around, she just didn’t seem to hit it off with any of them, at least not as well as she does with Bear.” Any chance Bailey knows there is something different about Bear? Dogs could possibly have that sense humans don't have. her face contorted into a sour, nasty expression before she turned her back on us and walked away. Wait wha..?.....I thought that was her permanent expression
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 33

    I was beginning to think that maybe Luke would have had to tell Aaron that he witnessed the contract signing and had met Harry.The only thing you left out is Tony couldn't hold on to the towel and was chasing Aaron naked
  13. And you didn't edit it
  14. Kudos to that girl that walked up to Stephen. Why am I getting a feeling Jeff and Gavin are going to be meeting up in Juvie. Are Melton and Gavin cousins by any chance
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    So on future job applications could Cody write down co-producer?
  16. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    So if I keep a fake camera around and I say 'It's only for content'.......🤔
  17. Remember in A Promise To Protect you gave us two alternant endings? Could you do that here? Only be sure in one of them Carter gets the crap beaten out of him.(I'm kidding but in a way not really)
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    Is Brad REALLY only doing this for content
  19. weinerdog

    Chapter 32

    Something I forgot to mention ‘You better believe it,’ Harry joked. ‘She can be as savage as she needs to be.’ If that's true Harry Shi-anne might end up with your clients
  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 32

    A very nice chapter. A couple of thoughts. I'm assuming Tony is going to meet with Shelly Reynolds. I wonder if he will lose his composure and bring up her kicking her son out? I'm not the author of this (Thankfully) But if Shelly Reynolds turns out to be the changed person I think she is she may take an interest in what has happened with Tony's sister. Could you imagine her telling the monolith to pull her head out before it's too late? It probably won't do any good but at least the monolith would be told off
  21. @Lee Wilson is writing that down as we speak
  22. You have to wonder about Brad's motivations spending college with Lyn and Alex OH EXCUSE ME Alexander he had to have gotten the impression that these two merely tolerated each other.
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    Wish I had a friend that let me assist him in that endeavor
  24. I know it's wrong to think this but part of me hopes Gavin is stubborn and is as stupid as Jeff so....well I don't have to say the rest do I?
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 30

    Don't forget anchovies on......ON ANYTHING!!!!!!!!
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