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Retribution, or Another Mistake?
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Retribution, or Another Mistake?
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A good history and civics lesson for us non Aussie's
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Retribution, or Another Mistake?
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Retribution, or Another Mistake?
There's one more thing you could add .When Mel gets charged with statutory rape you should have him say something stupid(Wait Mel saying somethings stupid? nooooo) Have him say THATS NOT FAIR SANDY DID THE SAME THING TO THE BLIND BOY!!!!! and have the person taking the report say "oh really"? -
Retribution, or Another Mistake?
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Retribution, or Another Mistake?
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There Is Always an Easy Way Out
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in There Is Always an Easy Way Out
What could Brad have told her that would cause her to behave so strange Maybe Brad told her that Lyn had a crush on him. It would also explain why she seated Lyn and Alexander far away from Brad at dinner- 31 comments
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There Is Always an Easy Way Out
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in There Is Always an Easy Way Out
That's her plan don't you know- 31 comments
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Between Shadows and Light
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Between Shadows and Light
Loving this more and more.Here is my main concern at the moment. The two intruders that got away they along with whoever they are working with just has to know that there is something unusual about Josh and they are going to try to find out more about him. They may not have figured out his connection to this yet but it IS something they will want to find out more about If I'm the decision makers in the FBI,CIA and anybody else that has a dog in this hunt I would make it look like Josh has been placed with a family on the other side of the country or perhaps even have a cover story that he's dead.The less they know about Josh the better. I would guess The Kincaid's brothers are thinking the same thing(unless I got this totally wrong). One wild card to this is how much do you tell Adam? And the other son when he comes home to visit? You have to tell Adam something right?- 41 comments
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Damn I don't have a bat watch or bat TV
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Was Hubble really innocent? Or since the word lunatic was in the title maybe he only thinks he's innocent. Gennaro decided he no longer wanted to be a detective. Putting Russell into harms way again was unacceptable. He would look into getting a PI license when he recovered fully. Well if he's turns out to be a really good P.I. a similar incident could happen
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When I saw the the title A Lunatic's Hostage I thought it was about us readers stuck on your stories
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I wanted to leave a laugh reaction for that but your comment was too good. That robot looks like my old vacuum cleaner that didn't work well
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WOW!! So much happening in this chapter. Before anything though I will say his experience on the treadmill had me exhausted even thinking about it. As far as those intruders are concerned I first assumed they were there for Josh searching for the gadget Josh dropped in the car accident but then they left Josh room and one went in this room 617 for what reason? Is it related or not related to Josh. Everything Josh did it was like a reflex some kind of mind control.As if it was programmed to act automatically.Whatever it was I'm probably not even close to figuring it out. After everything that happened and what the police will tell the hospital staff I have to think the plans with the Kincaid family if not canceled at the very least put on hold. This may be nothing but to me the police response was more swift then what would be considered normal It seemed. Fascinating stuff
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The Things We Can Never Take Back
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Things We Can Never Take Back
Sounds like the Only way Hearst can get Jamie to forgive him, is to f-up LiveFeed that would be fun.And while he's at it have some of the collateral damage fall on Wenchel- 17 comments
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I'm glad you chose NOT to print the mayor's speech in this chapter
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Getting Closer and Halloween
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Closer and Halloween
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The next time some diabolical villain goes up against Bond he/she should hire a P.I to look at Bonds previous assignments.The P.I. would come back with a report saying "Whatever you do don't reveal your vile plans to him..That usually buys him enough time"
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Alright Awesome👌👍❤️ Now whatever you do next make sure of one thing ...make Zereth's demise very, very,veeeeeeery painful
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I'm not even close to finishing the chapter but when I saw this I had to put the down while it is still fresh in my mind The shadows had paused while Kieran sang to the girl. For some reason, the tune seemed to unsettle them. Maybe it was Kieran singing voice
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I suspect GA doesn't have all those hashtags how about #HUH?
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I guess I SHOULD have at least guessed the possibility of The CIA with a story title like Encrypted like @Seraph28 said @drsawzall pretty much asked all the questions I had except for one .What does Josh know? And does he know that he knows it(Did that make any sense🤔)
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I'm just about to read this chapter but I WILL say when I saw Langley VA, CIA Headquarters I just went WHOA I didn't see THAT coming
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Even so, he’s aware how many he’s ignoring for the convenience of not having to go through with this break-up and uproot the only stability currently in his life. I have to ask....What stability?🤔 Leo is trying to be a lifeline and Ace's condition won't let him accept Leo's help. I just hope Carter doesn't do something really serious to Ace before Leo can intervene
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As you know @Summerabbacat when you get to be our age The memory goes sometimes. I only remember a Family and a brother being mentioned but not much else If an age of the brother was ever mentioned its long gone in my memory. I did detect one clue in this chapter There was nothing that I could say was remarkable, or distinctive, about him, apart from his being a typical skinny teenager with hair that was too long, but he did look vaguely familiar. Now why would he look "vaguely familiar"? If it's not Aaron's younger brother it could be a family member like a cousin and that could lead to Aaron finding his brother.Just a guess
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I'm sure this isn't the last we see of Zack. I wonder if Joel and Kieran got footage of that and how it can be used
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I'm sure I'm not the only reader who had this thought but I'll be the one who sounds like an idiot. If they transition into a total women they are anatomically correct I assume. You know I wouldn't blame Devin and Mac if they didn't want to do that
