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I wanted to leave a laugh reaction for that but your comment was too good. That robot looks like my old vacuum cleaner that didn't work well
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WOW!! So much happening in this chapter. Before anything though I will say his experience on the treadmill had me exhausted even thinking about it. As far as those intruders are concerned I first assumed they were there for Josh searching for the gadget Josh dropped in the car accident but then they left Josh room and one went in this room 617 for what reason? Is it related or not related to Josh. Everything Josh did it was like a reflex some kind of mind control.As if it was programmed to act automatically.Whatever it was I'm probably not even close to figuring it out. After everything that happened and what the police will tell the hospital staff I have to think the plans with the Kincaid family if not canceled at the very least put on hold. This may be nothing but to me the police response was more swift then what would be considered normal It seemed. Fascinating stuff
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The Things We Can Never Take Back
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Things We Can Never Take Back
Sounds like the Only way Hearst can get Jamie to forgive him, is to f-up LiveFeed that would be fun.And while he's at it have some of the collateral damage fall on Wenchel- 17 comments
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I'm glad you chose NOT to print the mayor's speech in this chapter
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Getting Closer and Halloween
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Closer and Halloween
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The next time some diabolical villain goes up against Bond he/she should hire a P.I to look at Bonds previous assignments.The P.I. would come back with a report saying "Whatever you do don't reveal your vile plans to him..That usually buys him enough time"
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Alright Awesome👌👍❤️ Now whatever you do next make sure of one thing ...make Zereth's demise very, very,veeeeeeery painful
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I'm not even close to finishing the chapter but when I saw this I had to put the down while it is still fresh in my mind The shadows had paused while Kieran sang to the girl. For some reason, the tune seemed to unsettle them. Maybe it was Kieran singing voice
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I suspect GA doesn't have all those hashtags how about #HUH?
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I guess I SHOULD have at least guessed the possibility of The CIA with a story title like Encrypted like @Seraph28 said @drsawzall pretty much asked all the questions I had except for one .What does Josh know? And does he know that he knows it(Did that make any sense🤔)
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I'm just about to read this chapter but I WILL say when I saw Langley VA, CIA Headquarters I just went WHOA I didn't see THAT coming
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Even so, he’s aware how many he’s ignoring for the convenience of not having to go through with this break-up and uproot the only stability currently in his life. I have to ask....What stability?🤔 Leo is trying to be a lifeline and Ace's condition won't let him accept Leo's help. I just hope Carter doesn't do something really serious to Ace before Leo can intervene
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As you know @Summerabbacat when you get to be our age The memory goes sometimes. I only remember a Family and a brother being mentioned but not much else If an age of the brother was ever mentioned its long gone in my memory. I did detect one clue in this chapter There was nothing that I could say was remarkable, or distinctive, about him, apart from his being a typical skinny teenager with hair that was too long, but he did look vaguely familiar. Now why would he look "vaguely familiar"? If it's not Aaron's younger brother it could be a family member like a cousin and that could lead to Aaron finding his brother.Just a guess
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I'm sure this isn't the last we see of Zack. I wonder if Joel and Kieran got footage of that and how it can be used
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I'm sure I'm not the only reader who had this thought but I'll be the one who sounds like an idiot. If they transition into a total women they are anatomically correct I assume. You know I wouldn't blame Devin and Mac if they didn't want to do that
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Something about you authors who just love to end the chapter just when........Well since Adam was able to write what we read at least we know it wasn't fatal 😄
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[Memory, Freshman Year, November] – The Usual Letdowns
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, November] – The Usual Letdowns
Very interesting are you going to do the same kind of chapter on Alexander? “You just can’t live normal lives, right? Read this chapter Brad and you'll know why He would ignore the slightly frayed cuffs and the one button that didn’t quite match. Did she buy this from a good will store OR did she take it from one of the older men she use to date? -
Yeah he definitely has a great support system .I can't help but think about other where something happened but they don't have anybody looking out for them like Josh does. I wasn’t used to people offering anything without conditions.Like @CincyKris that comment caught my attention. However the scenario's I'm thinking of are not positive.So much to find out.The fact that Daniel is a law enforcement officer also leads me to think that Josh existence wasn't that good
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Stephen's Visit With Dr. Taylor and More Jeff
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Stephen's Visit With Dr. Taylor and More Jeff
I was somewhat disappointed with what Pauline implied like fearing Stephen and Michael might do things like that psycho.I get that it hit close to home but that was still ignorant I was thinking Jeff might have come to Dequan's aid or something -
I'm picking my brain here please help me. Is there anything else that matters BUT that🤔
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Is there ever a time she's NOT drooling
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Perfect timing for Tony's siblings to come specially with Luke's family also there.Can they call the police about the monolith not letting them get their stuff.It's legal for her to kick them out but not to keep their stuff right? Some Sceptice will say they pyschics will speak in general universal terms that people will interpret to fit their situation and using the term Darkness would fit here for everyone has Darkness in their lives. But the other stuff Shania said can't be explained aways
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I'm tempted to hide a recording device in my church confessional
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I keep ringing the doorbell and you keep ignoring me
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Besides being glad Josh is getting better and is going to live with Daniel's family I had two takeaways. One is that Josh was hesitant to reveal he is gay.That may imply he's had a bad experience with that.I know that's not a stretch but it may give an Idea of what is adoptive parents were like. And speaking of his adoptive parents why didn't the name ring any bells. I could think of a lot of crazy reasons one is he was using a different name because of who knows what the adoptive family was into but again jumping to nutty conclusions just my first reaction
