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The descriptive words are amazing did you get that from someone else talking about their experience? So he knows he's gay before he remembers his name🤔 Are we going to hear more about the accident? Like how the other two died and did the airbags work? And maybe it wasn't an accident perhaps the car was intentionally stuck because of the gay passenger but that's getting WAY too ahead of things of course . We have to wait for him to recover
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‘Those American movies sure have a lot to answer for, don’t they?’ Guy added.Oh sure if it wasn't for American movies you Aussies would NEVER cuss
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Great build up to the confrontation I guess the next chapter will be with Rory and Kieran. I'm thinking Zereth will s--t his pants when Garran arrives
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Starting a second story was a mistake! I can't do two at once anymore 😭 Just keep a couple of cheat sheets next to you when you write . One sheet Characters in Arcum Nights on the other sheet Characters in Behind The Veil see problem solved
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And I bet you Brad realizes that
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The synopsis said the boy has mo memory so I always wonder you don't remember your name or who you know etc. But you know stuff like this is an arm and that is a car how do you remember that but not your name?🤔 Sounds like you did a lot of research on this. Especially the medical stuff the terminology etc.Are you a doctor by any chance?😀 Great start
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It felt good to be a part of this group. It felt good to finally belong. That comment and Tony and Aaron referring to their families has me hoping that Aaron's brother makes a surprise appearance at the party.Maybe its not in the cards but one can hope
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The same man who convinced him back when he was first diagnosed, that he didn’t need to be taking the medication he was prescribed. I hope Leo finds out about this I can't see Ace getting away from Carter without that happening
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Do I need to read previous stories before I read this?
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Lonny is a very progressive parent. Whether his approach is right or wrong I'll let people more qualified than I make that judgement. “And when she made a face, it reminded me of a rotten apple when the skin gets all wrinkly,” Clint added, Clint's comment about Louella would have fit very well here with the other readers
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Homecoming and the Aftermath
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Homecoming and the Aftermath
“Friends' Reactions, and Gavin's Visit” The way that is worded sounds like Gavin walks over to the Zamora's home on his own volition.Even he wouldn't be f---d up enough to go over and start stuff so I assume it will be for the right reason. ‘[He] killed his perverted uncle. I guess that was Micheal who said that .I know he's just a kid but I would have thought he would have known better to say that publicly Stephen King's 'Dreamcatcher' packed a heavy wallop. I f Mark hadn't have died I would have only been fair to let Leon hit Mark with a book ....Only in this case the book would be War And Peace -
Gordon probably had that planned since he told the boys they can'y go in there until they were both 12 Shane admonished his older brother, "I'm telling mom you said the 'f' word." "Don't be a pussy.' Oh smart Ray now Shane can also tell them you said the P word also
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‘They look so happy together,’ Aaron said to me as we watched them disappear into the scrub. ‘Yeah. They do.’ ‘Do you think that could be us one day? Neither of them could ever have the personality of Ben
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Maybe you're too "in tents".....sorry for that one
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Interrogations and Hospitals
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Interrogations and Hospitals
Incredible chapter❤️ Now for the aftermath. No surprise the vultures er....the media are all over this I just hope they don't make an initial messed up report.When the neighborhood finds out about this most will be supportive but I'm sure (NOT a prediction) they'll be some yahoos who will blame The Zamora's for bringing that influence in the neighborhood' I really, really hope this isn't the case but I'm afraid of Gavin saying something to Stephen like" No wonder you're a f-----t ,you Uncle was a child molester" Oh I guess Leon could get some s--t also. I sure hope not🤞- 24 comments
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I'm thinking with David being young that these guys think he's naive. I'm glad the contract is going to be scrutinized
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A Most Unremarkable Man
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Most Unremarkable Man
My initial reactions are usually my worst so take this with a grain of salt. So if the LiveFeed audience finds out about this so what? I think they would not find Jamie guilty by association for anything. So what is Wen hoping for? He mentioned LiveFeed covering Jamie meeting his parents.Does when hope Jamie loses it or something and then Wen would say to Hearst "See I told you he'a a leaver" I'm sure a smarter reader will have a better take then this- 18 comments
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I can see Rory following Kieran one night if that happens how would The Morain react to that? I wonder if Garran could give Kieran some pointers about how to past the trials.He may have spoken to his Dad about this “I am the Morain of Mending, yes,” she said with a theatrical sigh. “Unfortunately. Goddess of restoration, sacrifice, spiritual evolution, blah blah blah. I had a much better gig five centuries ago, but apparently everyone wants a trial these days.” She circled him slowly. “You’re here to become a better father or whatever?” I like her already😄 I would love to hear her and Ash banter
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I can't believe I got this done. I've been deathly sick. The only way I feel better is to sit in my shower so I wrote some of this in the actual running shower 😂 The struggle is real! So how do you do that without wet paper or Damage to your tablet? And how would an editor react to a bunch of wet sheets?🤔 Seriously Get well soon.Now on to read the chapter
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The only way to score in baseball is to make 4 left turns in a circle (or diamond if you wish) .What is it about men paying to see continuous left turns.BTW was your brother's dachshund was it a male dog by any chance
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Nice calm chapter.....And just before the party....OH NO!!! What are you planning to have happen at the party????
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Do you have any Lynx's er Links to that? (I know it's lame but I couldn't resist)
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[Memory, Freshman Year, November] – Temptation
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, November] – Temptation
knew that he had missed getting an A- on Legal History only because the professor liked him too much Getting an A- perish the thought😱 You’ll be on my conscience, and I don’t want that.” Well then Brad stop trying to force Lyn to have a beer with you that makes him get an A-- 16 comments
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BTW maybe because I'm so dense is why I ask this.The title I Wish I was Special I'm not sure I understand.I think Stephen IS special for the way he handled this .Was that the point of the title?
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Mark (I wish I can think of a name @Summerabbacat would use calling him Mark is giving him too much respect) has most likely given both brothers PTSD although Leon was unconscious for most of it I'm certain this close call did more damage Not to make light of anything but the way Stephen handled the gun Gavin (or anybody else who would give Stephen a bad time) should think twice about messing with him.Gavin would if he was smart but we know thats a HUGE if. Only one down side of Stephen splattering Mark's brain first I wish he had had enough brain activity to realize he got shot in the jewels
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