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This is not an excuse at all for what Martina did but what the tribe did isn't all that much better then the kind of stuff the U.S. government did to the Indians. They didn't give an F to what Jacob would have wanted shouldn't that have counted for something? I'm intrigued now with what's going to happen with Long ears
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Inside the Korean Baths, and Ch-ch-ch-changes
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Inside the Korean Baths, and Ch-ch-ch-changes
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Inside the Korean Baths, and Ch-ch-ch-changes
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Inside the Korean Baths, and Ch-ch-ch-changes
I'm sure it was mentioned earlier but I had forgotten that Dylan has a brother. Is Dave aware of his attraction to men he may not be? I'm surprised Patty doesn't like their father so that would mean Sal has no relationship with his grandfather that's not good. So who is at fault here? Patty? Or did their Dad do something? "If you feel like you have to look at someone, look at me. I do not mind, and of course, I would not say anything about it." Oh man why couldn't I have friends like Jiho when I was growing up?- 23 comments
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In this story it looks like the roles are reversed Alec is the friend who is giving wise advice. “Ai, I have things to do. Hurry it along, please.” The man said, glancing down at a watch that looked expensive. He was wearing a tailored wool pea coat over a black three-piece suit. God damn. “Yeah, ‘things to do’, like be boring!”😄 I like Ai. I bet she's going to be thrilled (warning reference from I Hate This Town coming) when River and Kenji get together. I bet Kenji won't nearly be as boring now huh Ai ?
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How many of you watched the show Cheers ? What Vincent did was a lot like what the character Cliff Claven did on Cheers. Could you imagine being married to Cliff? Enough said.
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Moving On and Peaceful Living - For a Bit
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Moving On and Peaceful Living - For a Bit
Finally Dylan finds a nice guy .And it looks like Dom and Jiho are going to be good friends and perhaps even step Hyeongje I find it interesting that nudity is REQUIRED at the Korean bath no big deal of course now that I think about it it could have something to do with the dyes that may be in a swim suit. There was once a time that people would swim naked at the YMCA my have we gone backwards since then. In more recent times in California students going to middle school and high school are no longer required to shower after PE and I understand this is getting common in other states also.In California the reason stated was they need to conserve the water and that is feasible. But I bet American kids are even more uptight about nudity these days. I didn't know the Bowie song "Ch-ch-ch-changes"" was about that.(I know it isn't BTW) DISCLAIMER: After I type this this might be the last comment from me after @kbois sees this Colton pressed his forehead against mine. "We should dress. It is getting close to Joe's bedtime." I pouted but knew he was right. "Okay. You’re right. I should get Dylan home soon, too." Obviously it should be "I should get Dominic home soon too. " Looks like editor @kbois missed another one (I only say this because she talks smack on her editors 😄)- 16 comments
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That could explain why we sometimes can't remember something.The author changed his mind
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Harry's plan worked but not in the way he intended.I'm glad things ended well and Stuart is happy but it does not cancel out many of the thoughtless things Harry done.He still has a lot of making up to do.
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Very intense chapter as @CincyKris pointed out. @drpaladin made a great point about the condition Burke and Calhoun are in would Martina try to off them? I can picture Micco arriving just as that is happening and one of the animals stops Martina. “I’m not losing you again,” To me Chase saying that was the most significant line in the chapter. Attribute this to my warped mind. We almost make it. In fact, I judge we’re less than a hundred yards from the parking lot of the refuge when Chase slams on the brakes and the car skids sideways. “Fuck,” he says, glaring at the huge oak tree that appears suddenly out of the rain and gloom. It’s uprooted at the base and stretched across the road. After reading that I though of the Lynyrd Skynyrd song That Smell and the lyric "Oak tree you're in my way"Well in this case the oak tree was in their way
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Munchkins and Monkeys, Zach's Troubles
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Munchkins and Monkeys, Zach's Troubles
Is what happen to Zach a product of your fertile creatively or have you read similar accounts of these types of incidents? Not that I doubt that it happens that way. In prison even the lowest of the low think people like Zack and Jackson are the very worst scum. I was going to suggest to Dylan to see if there were a class he could attend " How Not To Date Or Marry A Psychopath. "(Although to be fair Lacey had a tumor)But it looks like maybe have gotten lucky in finding Colton. Colton having a son of his own around Dom's age is a good sign this may be OK- 18 comments
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I was momentarily confused but apparently you changed your user name.I hope you are feeling better. Alzheimer's was mentioned I don't know all the rules of shifters but I guess they are subject to the same medical condition humans are. It makes me wonder can say a dog have Alzheimers that is something I'm going to Google
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Another thing we learned unless I forgotten is that like Alec's mom River's Mom was somewhat extreme when it came to religion makes me wonder if the two moms were part of the same church and were they besties
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I like the start of this. I'm not certain of the time line this takes place are they in Washington? Alec is around so if they are in Washington this takes place before Alec reconnects with Finn.Am I right?
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I'm just about to start this I'm guessing from the synopsis this is the River from I Hate This Town.I'm really looking forward to this
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Getting Closer, and Football
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Closer, and Football
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I was confused for a moment when Harry said "What has become of me?" it sounded like the story was ending but I didn't se a The End so I guess we are still going. @Lee Wilson was right about an unexpected turn of events. What this has is a little of what is called being Pan not in love with the gender but the person.But yeah how can this NOT get messy.The subject of adoption came up so I still think a day will come when Harry finds out he has a 10 year old son or possibly from one of these three women at the moment
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The Audition, and Blowback
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Audition, and Blowback
Dominic is a really smart kid he was helped by the fact that Dylan told him to let him know if Jackson asked him to do something unrelated to the plays he was able to put two and two together. While I'm so glad Zach got caught but this got my attention Two hours later, Zach Washington pulled up to his house, where the police were waiting. Why didn't the doofus continue driving on when he saw cops were there? Unless it was detectives in a plain car . So will it ever be revealed what Jackson and Zach's end game was in regards to Dylan? -
Where did you get that picture of @kbois? (I've done it now huh?)
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As far as Bryan not wanting to be in the Latin Student Union because he's white there are a lot of people who can pass for white who are part latino I half a friend who looks like Archie Andrews from the Archie comics who is part Mexican and I bet many people don't know this the famous baseball player Ted Williams is half Mexican The statement that Caleb didn't look like either parent made me wonder if he has a different father especially after all this talk in this chapter about being biologically related
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Harry seemed to have no idea how he was using Laurie. Yelling Stuart's name and those dreams he's having should be telling him something. Can't wait for the MRI discussion. I'm going to make a guess .Laurie is pregnant with thier child
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I thought of this Danny is too wrapped in his own angst to sense our shock. “But then, Jesus fucking Christ, then it ran. It got down on all fours and fucking loped through the gate. Like an animal.” He turns watery eyes on me. “What does that? What fucking does that?”s So that tells me it's something a human can't do and if that's the case nobody played a part. So that leaves two possible explanations one that this creature actually does exist (BTW why didn't they tell Billie about this?) or and this is a little nutty it was an illusion using some kind of technology sort of like a real life version of CGI a hologram or something .Hey best I can come up with. BTW congrats @Summerabbacat
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I looked it up and there was a few documented cases of that but they stressed only a few.There is also something called Anton-Babinski syndrome where a blind person claims they can see if that can happen I guess anything is possible
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Other readers in this chapter comments are saying what I posted in chapter one. Can a bump on your head really make you insensitive of what is wrong and right? I going to to look this up online. I find this interesting
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I can understand losing your memory but I don't get the change in orientation I liken it to before you hit your head you weren't a racist but afterward you are a racist? I would think your basic character wouldn't change. I would love to hear the explanation for that
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I was going to post saying I hope he is OK but your comment cleared that up . Thanks for telling us ❤️
