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Dinner at the Ragin’ Cajun Café
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Dinner at the Ragin’ Cajun Café
I like how many details of previous stories are addressed here while I have read a numbers of stories with the New York stories series tag there are just as many as I heaven't read. This was a good education of the nuances of the restaurant business specially after the pandemic when you see the practices of landlords on rent prices its no wonder we have inflation after the worst of the pandemic . A couple of questions Carl got a car as part of a scholarship from Seton Hall wasn't that once illegal as hell to do? I'm also curious with their culinary backgrounds you ever though of having Franklin from the JJ story cross paths with Asher? -
Part One. Chapter Eight.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eight.
He was trying to fool you -
Part One. Chapter Eight.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eight.
Hmm🤔 I refer you that post of @Mrsgnomie that said you wasn't nice -
Part One. Chapter Eight.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eight.
@chris191070 Where are you I need to know how many hours it is until @Mrsgnomie next chapter -
Part One. Chapter Eight.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eight.
And the claws are out again. What is this the 8,779 time?(And that's just in the chapter comments) -
Part One. Chapter Eight.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eight.
Well one thought I had (This is my warped mind speaking NOT a spoiler) Kyan gets hit on at the club and perhaps Perry gets jealous- 108 comments
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Part One. Chapter Eight.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eight.
This is going to freak out @Mrsgnomie but I figured out what the problem Perry had before he told Kyan. Are we on the same wavelength? I bet she's more mad at me for saying that then anything I said before. I get a feeling the night at CC Slaughter's (That's the dance club right?) is going to be a doozy. A lot of readers have mentioned what a great Uncle Perry is and he is.It should also be mentioned Jessica is an awesome Aunt and sister-in law- 108 comments
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Part One. Chapter Eight.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eight.
@kbois is the first comment again,I guess this weeks coffee/bitch session she ended it by saying "Meetings over I have to go post some obnoxious chapter comments on @Mrsgnomie new chapter"- 108 comments
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I have known a lot of people similar to River.(BTW I guess enough time has passed his parents might be River Phoenix fans) I love his sarcasm. The idea Gavin has about this place he would call JC's sounds great. Out here in Cali we have something like how JC"s was described a place called In-n-Out (not too suggestive is it) last I checked there isn't any on the east coast so a lot of readers won't know what I'm talking about but the place rocks. I have only problem with River.If Gavin is so hot WHY THE HELL DOES HE WANT HIM TO GET A BIGGER TOWEL!!!!!!!!!!
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🎵Don't know why there's no sun in sky stormy weather 🎵
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Awesome how Armand caught those two scammers red handed .The wig falling off must have looked funny.I have a bad feeling we have not heard the last of the 'Loudmouth" as Armand called him although he could have called him worse. Why is Roger questioning Armand taking Charles back with him. Does he know something or thinks he knows something about Charles?
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I understand your assessment for the most part. I do think Seth is a good guy showing VERY poor judgement.Don't be surprised if @Ronyx later provides some context on a few characters in future chapters. But I will say the only adults in this story that seem to be worth anything are Aunt Marie and Uncle Steve. We don't know much about Craigs parents but I seem to recall Craig's Dad sending him to football camps etc. I can picture him being at least somewhat overbearing which would explain Craig's personality. But all the other parents we do know something about geez.Remember a movie titled Totally F****D Up? An alternative title for this story could be Totally F****D Up Parents
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At this particular moment Blake as messed up as he is seems to be the most rational one by refusing to make love to Seth until this Craig thing is settled.Both Craig and Seth are acting and feeling like BF's that just broke up although they never were BF's so Seth who has feelings for Blake apparently also had some for Craig.......WHY!!!!!!! Roni who I thought would be the smartest one of the bunch I think made a HUGE!!!! mistake.While she is right about moving on like it didn't happen she apparently got Craig to make up with Stacy and that is going to bite everybody on the ass. Stacy shows her insecurity getting all dolled up for a football game and then goes back to the house after the game ready to do the deed with Craig. I'm betting Craig won't be able to perform laying the groundwork for God knows what. I refer you to a few exchanges Ty and Seth had in chapter four As we headed to the mall, Ty asked me if I had a date. I told him I didn’t. “Why?” he asked. “I’d think a guy as cute as you would have several options.” I giggled and asked, “Did you just call me cute?” His face reddened and he stammered, “I…I…didn’t mean it that way. It’s just I’ve heard a lot of girls talk about how cute you are. It’s not like I think you’re cute.” Seeing how embarrassed he was, I decided to play along a little more. “What? You don’t think I’m cute?” I clutched my chest and said, “I’m hurt.” “No,” he replied hurriedly. “You’re cute and all.” When I looked at him and grinned, he said, “Aw, shit! Just drop it.” I leaned back and laughed uproariously. And later in the chapter Cindy said excitedly, “That’s a wonderful idea!” She reached over and took my hand and squeezed it. She started giggling, “You and Roni will make a cute couple.” Roni looked at the surprised look on my face and said, “We can’t do that.” Ty asked, “Why?” He looked at me and grinned, “You would be a cute couple.” “Would you stop calling me cute!” I shouted. Now take those conversations and combine them with happen in this chapter .Ty is surprised Seth wasn't sitting with Blake and the later asks Seth to join them for pizza and is disappointed when Seth turns them down .It's like Ty wants Seth there to be a third wheel Seth said " Maryanne seemed happy that I wouldn’t be joining them. Sometimes I think that she sees me in the way. She may also be a little bit jealous because Ty spends more time talking to me. " Okay is TY ALSO into Seth? I don't think @Ronyx has ever has a story where three people are into the main character. But it would be step with the word chaos in the title of the story
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Totally concur with all of that
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Somebody might counter say Larry Bird never traveled because he wasn't fast enough to travel.(Don't come after me I used to live in Revere and I'm a Celtics fan also)
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Part One. Chapter Seven.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Seven.
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weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Seven.
I was just asking myself I wonder "I wonder how many hours it is until @Mrsgnomie next chapter and then I saw this. Whew! Thanks. -
A lot of the stuff Devin said about the wolf such as the position of the tail and the shackles on the back I remember observing with my dog.A couple of questions about the wolf .In the winter months when their coat is heavier can you detect their shackles? I wonder about that with certain breeds of dogs.Also when a wolf pack leader starts to get old does it have a way to communicate that it wants a younger wolf to take over? I'm curious if the skinwakers have have a way to acquire an animal's ability such as the mountain lion's ability to leap while keeping the human form. I bet NBA players would be interested in that....Hmm🤔 I wonder if that's why Michael Jordan was so good
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Part One. Chapter Seven.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Seven.
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weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Seven.
Actually I am glad to hear from you my imagination worries about things when something like this happens- 89 comments
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Part One. Chapter Seven.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Seven.
About time you showed up!!!!(Sorry couldn't resist)- 89 comments
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Part One. Chapter Seven.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Seven.
Perry arched his brow, then smiled. He liked the questions, Kyan could tell. Or at the very least, he found Kyan’s sudden interest amusing. I think that reaction Perry had along with seeing Max at the halloween party and most likely later at the future birthday party for the twins makes me think Perry is going to smell a set-up. I'm guessing most readers are rooting for Kyan/Perry but Max really is a great guy seeing how he is stepping up for his nephew.BTW what if Perry had worn tights? Max would have swooned. Gracie refused to look at Max until ten minutes later, when Max held up a tiny cup of hot cocoa, summoning her good graces. Her eyes lit up, and her mouth formed an ‘O’, and then suddenly, he wore the new best friend crown. From that we can say Gracie has a great future in dating- 89 comments
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Part One. Chapter Seven.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Seven.
Testing.......Oh my I do have the right story I was confused because I didn't see a post by @kbois yet- 89 comments
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Couplet and Skyscraper
weinerdog commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Couplet and Skyscraper
For what you call experiments this was very thought provoking.That line "We can't control what fragrance tells' was a thought I never had in my head but it is absolutely true -
Chef Boy had to be saved from the two men it wasn't clear to me what the two men wanted but if its what I think it is I'm glad Armand is taking him home with them
