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  1. Just to safe you better check with GA guidelines before writing about that
  2. And what's wrong with saying Germans🤔
  3. Just wanted to be sure this got the five stars it deserves. it was more then just the coming out issue it was also the nerd/cool kid dynamic that can be just as bad.This author captured what I think goes through a person mind in this kind of situation perfectly I believe this is his best story but if you're unfamiliar with this author's previous stories I suggest you read those first before reading this one. As I said I think this is his best story but he has two uncompleted stories that have a chance to be as good as this one tin=me will tell but I would not be surprised if he manages to equal this one
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  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 14

    One thing I don't think was mentioned enough by the readers in the last chapter myself included is how Tyler grew a pair.What inspired him was his genuine concern and love for Rufus. That's the real thing. I wish you would have said if Tylers Dad won or not. When Tylers dad did his impromptu press conference his answer to being asked about finding out about Tyler and Rufus he said the right things but as Tyler said left out the part about hugging them so what would that make him?.....A closeted supporter🤔 This one is your best story and it was already a high bar.
  5. BREAKING NEWS!!! Steve Harvey just read this, Is worried that @Mrsgnomie will get his job (she'll be insufferable for the rest of the day now)
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  7. All kidding aside that was brilliant stuff the most impressive thing even more then the humor was how many reader names you managed to mention there may have been a few you left out but it wasn't for a lack of trying.😀 One thing you got 100% accurate is that is exactly the kind of charity I(we) would play for
  8. "Laugh injuries are a real thing." Well its a good thing we don't have to worry about that in your stories(Like the song says "Gimme three steps toward the door")
  9. I'm not kidding on both my laptop AND my smartphone it is not letting me type any text after I quoted @Mrsgnomie but it is letting me type on this comment what did you and gnomie do??????🤔
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    Higher 4

    I live in San Diego and you are totally accurate about Hillcrest and Urban Mo's did you do research or have you been to our fair(and expensive) city BTW is there really A Jess that works at Urban Mo's if there is I'm making plans its been awhile since I been there😄
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 154

    Tommy didn't tell Armand any details when he said they had to go the courthouse Armand just dropped his paint brushes in the cleaning can and left that shows how much he trusts Tommy Any doubt the devil is on this earth is proven by parents who would do something like this. Nice touch having Ronny giving that piece of slime a bullet hit. It's a good thing GG is telling Armand how to handle this situation.It also very good for Carl that Tommy will be staying in town it seems he is going to need him the most.
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    My bad totally forgot about that.I guess the memory is the first thing to go😄.Unless James has as bad of memory as I do he should be able to put 2+2 together after this encounter as to how deeply this has effected Dion.Problem is what does he do in regards to Dion? If he tells Dion he knows about it is he betraying Mr Wilbur? And could Dion have a negative reaction to James knowing. James will want to try to do something though.
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    First things first I think Donavan thought Mr. Marshall was going to also kiss his feet like most everybody else but the thought of expulsion and no basketball scholarship soon woke him up .If Donavan was a jackass like this all his life I would think this would do no good but according to Roy he wasn't so maybe he'll change🤞.At least that paper he signed should keep him off James back. Jackie should be careful not to overdo getting dolled up for Roy.After all he first got interested in her the way she was before. As for Dion something traumatic must have happened perhaps right in front of him. There is no dad but I think its more than that like a close brother or a really close friend or maybe both because Dion did say "everyone else" like there was more then one. I wonder how much Mr Wilbur knows about this.I hope James speaks to him and THIS time really listen to what he has to say
  14. weinerdog

    Higher 3

    I've read stories from other authors that write about were-creatures but you mentioned some stuff I haven't heard other authors mention like these guys feeling their non existent tail wag when they are in human form. Come to think of it I never seen any video of an actual wolf wagging its tail do wolves and dogs share all these characteristics? Just thought of something else theses guys should never play poker in wolf form every time they would get a good hand their tail would be wagging. Ignore me I think of stupid stuff😄
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    I have to respectfully disagree with it was Tyler who hit first.Dwight initiated this by pushing Tyler but Tyler used leverage to push him back and then Dwight attempted to hit Tyler first but was slow and Tyler countered in self defense .Although Dwight didn't connect the first time it is still considered assault and had he connected it then would be battery.Add the fact it was night and sound travels more and Tyler said Dwight was so loud the whole neighborhood could hear him there are a lot of eye and ear witnesses to Dwight's intentions .With that in mind there is no way any kind of assault charges would stick to Tyler
  16. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    I'm interested in how @Arch Hunter is going to resolve everything in one chapter
  17. weinerdog

    Chapter 153

    So Ronnie being the fairest away Michigan I would say things turned out well.Alabama has the better football program at the moment although Michigan is no slouch and Michigam Is probably a better choice in every other aspect. Besides GG says so Tommy taking over for Pat someday would be perfect.His idea of inviting some teachers to the Home for Thanksgiving was very smart
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    Rufus had the phone in his hand so hopefully he had the presence of mind to record what was happening. I think it will show that the shooting was justified after the police sort everything out. In a ironic way this could help Tyler dad win the election protecting his son against a hate crime will play well. I got to say while I like Jim he is a ditz.When Tyler said "Should I share my suspicions about you ducking Clyde's dick" "Hey that's not the same thing" WHAT!!!!???🤔🙄
  19. weinerdog

    Chapter 12

    Go to his story page on GA there is a lot of good stuff there
  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 152

    Since Armand a painter and can set his own hours during the week when the time comes he can rotate visiting every one of them on the weekends. Maybe they can all get together for Ronnie's home games wherever that will be
  21. The only thing worse then being the opposite is what Captain Kirk said in Star Trek IV a double dumb ass as in "Double dumb ass on you"
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 12

    Would Bradd be aware of Ryler being a couple?
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 12

    As much as I hate to admit it Tyler's Mom had a valid question as to the reason why Rufus didn't want to go with his Mom to his Aunt's house. I would think Rufus Mom would be against leaving Rufus home alone so Rufus must have have made it clear how badly he doesn't want to go. I don't think there an issue with Rufus Mom as she told Tyler's Mom how fragile he is at the moment but I think there is something else not being said.Rufus saying he hates Bradd may be true enough but he may be leaving something out. I'm going to take a wild shot in the dark here and I HOPE I'm wrong .....Did Bradd molest Rufus when they were younger?
  24. Maybe its @kbois that shifts into a cheetah
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